Okay after giving this a try for about a hour, I will say that overall I like it. It's a odd game, and since it's early I won't judge it to hard. The story of course feels like it could use some refining, right now it's like a sibling game of Katalist and I can't say it really stands on it's own there, also may need to proofread more. I noticed a few misspellings, but I think just some touching up and double checking in the future will take care of that.
The art is tricky, lol. Like the designs are a miss for me feeling kind of average, and the standard pose are just not very appealing, BUT on the other hand the scene art details on like feet, hands, and bottoms are great! It's kind of funny to me, since usually it feels like artist have the reverse problem and have really good stand still art, but after that they lose on the details to the fingers and feet more since those are usually harder to draw.
The map layout isn't to bad, I like that things aren't to big with a lot of needless space, so it feels more realistic that people stay there.
I'm not really sure overall where I really stand on this game, so I'm deciding to see it like a rough gem for now, and hope to see some polishing. I'll put it on my watch list and follow it to see where it goes.^^