VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Amore Heist [v1.0 Full] [Insanepenguin91]

very nice game, it has nice plot and wide variety of characters (same as on previous game) and choices which matter to some extent.

graphics are good (not top notch but still good), game has music (can get annoying after a while), no other bugs than quite a much of typos.

only downside is that this is so short.

Well... as side project to a main story go, this isn't a bad one.
The renders are of the same quality, the story is alright.
It's not anything special though and here's what led me to give this just an average rating.

The writing. I don't know what happened, but compared to the main game, the writing here is... IDK, it is riddled with errors, so much so that sometimes you can only guess how the actual sentence you read was supposed to go.
I'm not one to nitpick over an error or two, but when there are four or five in a single paragraph and not just spelling mistakes, but half-written words, wrong words, words repeating themselves in the same sentence...
That's just too much, it really takes me out of the game and is a constant source of irritation.
Apart from those issues there's also a problem with how pompous the writing is, constantly trying to come up with metaphors and great comparisons, but most of the time failing quite miserably at this.

So that you see that I'm not just talking out of my ass, here are two examples just from the first part on the boat.
"MC ran his finger through Dominique's hair, as dark as the sea, and the a black cascade of perfume came tumbling down his breast, and he kissed its waves in moonlight."
I mean, what the fuck is that supposed to mean even? What is a black cascade of perfume, and how can perfume come tumbling down someone's chest? And that's not even all that is wrong with this sentence.

"The yacht (spelled "Yatch" just in the paragraph before) is called Nexus, and a nexus it was. A nexus from those who would deny them what they so desperately craved, what was in their heads at least, always their to begin with."

A nexus is a connection, or a focal point thereof, so what does this even have to do with a nexus?

Okay, one more for good measure.

"His dark-eyed wine-lipped wife was resplendent against the wine-dark sea and the bejeweled sky. Her mouth curved upwards, and he smiled back...."
What even? How is wine resplendent against wine and why is this so turgid? I mean, even for a porn game, this is too much. Just dial it back a little, would ya?

If the writing was toned down a bit and the errors corrected, if in general an editor worked through this, this could get a four, but as it is now, I feel generous giving it three stars.

Instead of a side story it's more like a story set in an alternate universe with the main characters known from the main game.
The graphics are not bad and the sex scenes are hot though not animated, but the story is lacking.
The "Heist" consist about getting some codes from 3 women by seducing them and then simply checking their phones (which is not locked for some reason) then simply rob a jewelry. Why MC and Dominique need Sonya for this I have no idea. They are capable of seducing the women on their own. Why do they need the twins specifically? Again no idea.
On some paths (You choose who MC will seduce) you have to search for the codes but you won't even know whether you found it or not, because the game suddenly changes to another scene and MC goes to a different location.
After the heist, both the accomplices and the victims decide for some reason that MC is irresistible and decide to become part of his harem.

All in all I didn't expect a very deep story from such a short game, but I still felt it lacking in some parts as if some scenes were missing.
The amount of sex scenes is good compared to the length of the game and they are not bad at all.
Another problem is that this game feels unnecessary. As it's set in an alternate universe it doesn't add anything to the main game. Dev could have worked on his main game instead.

This is not a bad game, normally I'd rate it between 3 or 4 stars but because I feel it unnecessarily took away development time from the main game which's development is already slow I decided to go for the lower of the two.

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:

- Great Renders
- Great Sex Scenes
- Nice Harem fun
- Lots of Screwing Scenes
- Nice Lezzy Scenes
- Completed
- Nice Story

Cons:
- Not much

The Game has great Renders,no Slowing Pace in the Story.
The Story is about a group of people planning and then Robbing a jewelry Store.
The story is not that long,but tells everything you need to know,it seems like a epilogue of more to come, which I would love to see....
What I saw to date has a lot of Potential.

Keep up the Good work.