VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Amore Tech [v1.0] [One Hand Entertainment]

[Rev @ v0.4]

I could see folks enjoying this, but I don't get much out of hate-sex.

Art's nice. Character models are enjoyable and there're boobs aplenty.

Writing is alright. Plot's fine, fluency is fine, characterization is fine. The narrative flow is borked though, with sudden jumps and transitions coming untelegraphed that leave me confused and stumbling while some bitchy ho bitches and hoes. Like I mentioned above, the overall tone of the story comes across as hate-sex and I'm not particularly thrilled by such things. The MC himself waffles between shrewd and dumb, dominant and chasing skirts.

Porn's alright. Anal's not my bag but at least we get some group scenes. Discipline scenes are unconvincing and vanilla.

TLDR: Somebody thought 'corporate backstabbing' and 'penetration from behind' are the same idea and flipflop between them every 5 pages.

Hope this Visual Novel (it has potential, I can't deny that) could polish a bit more its mechanics on a improving way, so the gamer could feel himself inside the game to ellaborate what happens; just now, it's a slideshow between renders or scenes and rushes too fast to conclussions. I felt it was somehow chaotic and this pushed me out at last (for example, on a moment at the beginning, on Todd's office, the secretary with whom got laid an instant before and other --both nudes-- were lying on the floor without knowing what really happened, and then, the MC took her secretary to an appartment without knowing else to have sex) Maybe on future updates comes to offer a story step by step.

Very good and mature game with great potentials. Top quality models, renders and performance. Nice plot and highly erotic atmosphere with very beautiful and sexy characters. MC's wife is unique and very well designed. Not a lot of content yet but the developers seem to be reliable and I hope they will continue their effort.

If you can see past the bad start, the game does actually get interesting.


After that through the story does start and its ok so far.

Renders are very nice and the game runs well.

Choices well there is not enough of the game to really tell if they make a difference.

Its a game with promise the writing just needs to be more consistent and given its a serious game it needs to ease up on the whole MCs dick is so good it makes women do anything, a game about blackmail/secrets should rely on blackmail/secrets not magic sex.

draws (cg): really well done.

characters: well done.

story: well done.

scenes (erotic ones): really fucking hot.

gameplay: meh +1.

music: well done.

conclussion: full of content, a really sexy story, and luring characters , this novel
feels like a very good porn movie.

this game TOTTALLY deserve your time and money.

psdt:in some point its gets heavy on "bussines and stuff" but i just skipped those parts.

Man this game/novel is a mess.

Pros: Wife is hot and scary, the villian is genuinely unlikable, and there does seem to be an actual plot to this game.



Cons:This MC is not a badass, not an alpha, and not that smart. And why hasn't he actually murdered Melissa yet? Also there's not a single trustworthy female character.

Also for some reason I'm expecting MC to get pegged, and I don't quite trust the wife.

Well, having played this new update (0.25) I have to say that both the developers and the different writers that this game has had continue to fail when it comes to delivering a totally dominating, calculating character, who is not fooled by anyone. I understand that planning a revenge against a certain person (Todd, Melissa) or a group of people who have a lot of weight takes a long time, but at the moment in these three chapters I have not been able to see a single spot where we were in total control of the situation or that we were a few steps ahead of our rivals or business partners and even with his own wife.

So this great change of a more assertive and dominant protagonist so promised has not yet been delivered by developers, so that for lovers of maledom so far they could be disappointed.

[v0.25]
This is a much more 'adult', 'adults-only' game then you might suspect. It mostly concerns the story though: corporate espionage, power brokering and office politics mixed with sex! The sex part hints mostly at a kink for dominance and submission role play, (I suspect the leather and rubber toys to be broken out in future version) so you are good to go if you are into that.
The game has a big emphasis on story and the characters role in it, which means if you are not into the character designs it all starts to fall apart rather quick. The cast, so far, is quite diverse and they all come across as more then just empty shells. If you want a semblance of personality on your virtual gals: this provides.
There is music al over the game, constantly so, it is a nice diversion from the standard, completely silent VN game that we see on F95 all the time.
Now the sex part is the one where it loses a star for me: scenes are a few simple stills with a bit of text added at best. For a porn game it just does not deliver on the visual part for me. It does on the sub- and dom kink though.
If you still want some blood in your brain while playing an interesting porn game/story: this one is certainly worth checking out.

[v0.2]

This is a very refreshing VN. It is a mature game. It is grounded in reality as much as a fictional tale of high powered corporate intrigue could be. That means characters have agency. They have their own goals. They have their own drive. You are not going to conquer every walking tit or magically turn all chicks into virgins. There are already some less advanced individuals who cannot deal with anything other than the cookie cutter harem games complaining in the thread. If you are one of those individuals, kindly see yourself out.

I'll make it short. The plot is really interesting with two corporate executives butting heads. MC is still very much in the defensive, but he is calm and calculated. There is a heavy BDSM theme for one of the main girls. The wife is quite the femme fatale and has a very open and mature relationship with the MC. There is no teasing bs or stairway to heaven. It is realistic when it comes to sex. Sex scenes themselves have no animation but has pretty good dialogue and still shots. The writing is quite good. There are occasional grammatical errors or typos but rest assured that it isn't a problem with Engrish. More like proofreading errors. At this point, there aren't much critical choices to be made. Not sure if will change later.

So far, there is no NTR as far as the fetish is concerned. If you are a special snowflake that cries NTR if any sexual encounter happens without the MC, well that's your problem.

Those of you who can appreciate a plot with some nuance could give this a try.

This game has excellent visuals and a very different story. I would put this on a top 5 list on this site in terms of physically appealing women. The story and the way it's told is open to personal taste, and I admit quite a bit of the set up annoyed me as I played through it. However, it's unique and I'm sure there are many that will quite enjoy it. I also have to give props to the developer for presenting something new.

I have to address the way this game is presented. It's a kinetic novel, there are no meaningful decisions for the player to make as of yet, so don't expect to have any say in the direction of the game. The developer is telling a story and you, the player, are along for the ride so far. I don't have an issue with that, but I will state that I didn't like the way the main plot unfolded at all. In fact, I honestly wished there was a 'skip all' button when it came to any sexual interaction with one of the main women.

My biggest gripe is that I feel this game is missing some tags from the description. NTR and maybe even cuckolding, though the latter is debatable as of .2, the sense from the story is that it's going in that direction. I am not fond of either of those tags at all. So, if you get annoyed or angered by seeing either in a game, be warned.

Regardless, the game is well told and presented in a visually appealing way. I'd say a 3.5 out of 5 is appropriate, but given the developer is doing something different I'll bump it up to a 4.

Rating 0.1.1

Awesome start. A great combination of drama and sex, with a clever plot.

Graphics are decent. I'm more into the story, really and this story seems great.

I love the relationship between the protagonist and his wife. It's open and mature.

Can't wait for the next installment of the story!

One of the best first release i've seen.

Story:
It's all about the story and the characters here. Not corrupting shy women(yet ), not "peeking" in bathrooms with conveniently no locks(nothing against it, i enjoy that too sometimes). Sex happens between adult characters. I feel like it's a powerful story in development.
We have a villain in our story and a fight between two top dogs for territory is the overall feel i'm getting from it.
If you're a fan of good stories and characters. PLAY IT!

Characters:
Characters have depth to them. You don't get info about them dumped, you'll see sides of them as the story moves.

MC- He's strong and calculating. He can handle pressure. He doesn't start a fight but he knows how to end it. If you like such protagonists, PLAY IT!

Hot stuff:
No animations but really hot scenes. The context makes it even better. More characters incoming.
Dominique looks absolutely mouth watering. Can't wait to explore her more.

Some criticism:
The name you input gets changed with the default one sometimes.
A missing image near the end.
A couple of grammatical errors.

A very good start.
The story seems pretty interesting. Not the usual "you are the lost son coming home after 5 years to your hot mother and 2 dirty sisters."

The CGI and the models look good, although not super hot. But i think the dev will develop his skills.

I really like the sexuality in this game. It's not the lame harem game, but you have a strong enemy to deal with.
Also there is no blue balling. Straight sex, straight story. I really appreciate that.

I hope the best for the future (and please bring back the hot waitress ;-)

Overall, I believe that this game is very well made and is even better considering the fact that the developer is new at creating these games.

PROS:
A fairly long version 0.1 (as most of them seem to contain only a day or so)
The English is very spot on, making storytelling and the play through more enjoyable
The character models are very nice and unique and are not copied and pasted from other games/sources
The art style, while not necessarily new, is solid. I can dig it
The story concept is interesting and new
There are certainly no shortage of sex scenes in this version as well

CONS:
Not too many options to choose from nor any that seemed to impact the story (though this might occur in later versions)
There are no sex scenes in which the ren'py engine is utilized imo (though A. This could change and B. the developer is new to the concept and thus all is forgiven)

CONCLUSION:
A very solid game thus far. I would rate it about a 4.5 if possible, but I'm going to give it to the developer and give it a 5. I hope the next version lives up to the hype I'm giving it!