RPGM - Abandoned - Angelica Origins [v0.6.2] [Kelo Games]

Good idea for such game: very decent girl without knowing anything about sexuality. Her corruption could be little slower though. Grapics could be much better. And most of all: need to finish the game. This is like first 10% of game.

One of the few games in which it's worth following the story, as the development of the plot, more and more interesting and the 'hot' situations, absolutely intriguing, grow in parallel, consequently increasing the interest of the player more and more eager to 'discover' (in every sense) what will happen next. Angelica is very beautiful and sexy and never loses her aura of innocence and purity even when she 'explores' new sexual experiences. Conclusion: beautiful, compelling, intriguing e... can't wait to play the next update

Really fantastic corruption game! It nailed so many aspects that other developers and RPGM developers get wrong: the flow of the open world game is very smooth and straightforward, there are choices but they are binary and not too complex, and the corruption is varied and happens at the perfect pace. On top of all that, the main character of Angelica is smoking hot and curvy as hell. This game is a must for female MC/corruption lovers.

Stunning Female protagonist. This is my favorite game. This is THE game above all for female MC lovers. Angelica is an 18 year old girl, soon to turn 19. Her beautiful mother knows that her daughter is approaching a sexual awakening... an awakening unlike most. For Angelica is special, she is different, there is something stirring beneath the surface, something beyond normal human comprehension. She is the one. Her sexual desires are unique and with them come special gifts... Beautiful game that will keep you interested and invested. Nothing but love from here, SAFFID.

First of all, I want to say that this is my first review and I do it on this game because for the first time I liked the game about a straight female (or maybe bi-curious?). I'm a big fan of games about lesbian mc, I don't really like the male mc, but I have to put up with them (you'll understand why I even spoke about it), I don't like RPGM and I don't tolerate games about straight women. There are many reasons, but mostly it comes down to the fact that the heroine becomes a willingless cockhungry whores, who is surrounded by blackmailer bastards.
The best thing about this game is that there is none of this. Angie is a beautiful young girl who really gets to know her sexuality and she's surrounded by good people who love her (each in their own way).

Secondly, one of the nice things is that almost all the males in the game are decent and it's amazing and unusual. Except for the boyfriend.

Third, if we talk about the boyfriend. I don't understand why almost everyone doesn't like Simone so much. He seems to represent about 80% of the male protagonists on this site. Simone sees an object, the object moves, Simone has a boner, he wants to fuck the object and doesn't care about the consequences. Typical juvenile jerk.

My only complaints about the plot are too many secrets from the MC and the weird relationship between Angie's mother and Simone. At such moments, because of my harmfulness, I want to go down the path of self-destruction, but this is only my problem, don't take it as my advice to change something.
And yes, big warning: if you're looking for a quick fap game, this one is not for you.

First of all, as a creator myself, I really don’t review a lot of games, I prefer to let my support of the games I like speak for me, but I want to take a moment to talk about this game, Angelica Origins…

I have been following and supporting this game since its original start… in that time, I have watched both the game and its creator develop into something truly special.

Let’s focus on the game first…

I’ve said before, elsewhere, that it takes a particular set of balls for a male writer/creator to create a story where the main character is a woman… I’ve seen some good results and some… well… not very good results from various offerings and excursions in the attempt.

Most times the female character comes across as a horny, prepubescent slut whose only mission in life is to become the neighborhood cum-dumpster in the very first release, lacks any social skills or culpability for their choices…

…such is not the case in Angelica Origins.

Angelica doesn’t start as a slut… in fact, her whole life has been a series of choices to PREVENT any sort of sexual contact… either with males or females, particularly her boyfriend - who is an idiot and the best reason to cuck someone ever created.

So, don’t expect to jump into the game and expect to have Angelica willingly spreading her legs or trying to hump every character in the game… if you ARE looking for a slow build into corruption, sexual exploration, culpability for choices you make as her, than THIS IS YOUR GAME!!

It is OBVIOUS that Mike [Kelo Games], not only LOVES Angelica’s character, he’s also worked hard on designing an engaging story and characters that surround Angelica… each character has their own quirk, their own reason for being close to Angelica and there are those who seek to use her for their own purposes or desires (including a part of herself).

Also, Mike (the creator) takes particular interest in making sure that his story he wishes to share is done in a variety of ways for players… if you don’t like RPGM Games, he went out of his way to find someone who would convert it to a Ren’Py Visual Novel… so that people who don’t want to run from Point A to Point B can move quickly and easily in the VN.

Additionally, he’s also worked hard at getting better and better with his renderings, posing and animation to make sure that players can fap off to something if they want or repeat scenes they’ve unlocked if fapping is their thing.

I’ve seen some people here giving negative reviews because Angelica didn’t get a sausage stuffed into her within the first 5 minutes of game play… to each their own, I suppose; obviously they have no concept as to the truest definition of what a ‘corruption’ game means… who’d have thunk it!

Regardless, if you like slow corruption paths, character exploration of self and sex, teasing moments of cuckholding wrapped up in a complex story with a delightfully wonderful female Main Character, this is a game for you to try… it is worth the playthrough and the support!!

Wonderful work, Mike, KEEP IT UP!!

Damn, i wanted to like this game, but its such a freaking grind that turns me off completely, i tought this was about corruption, and making her a slut, cuckhold the boyfriend, and dirty men to take advantage of her innocense.

i played about 4 HOURS! still no sex scene, just nonsense, like friendship and dumb crap i dont want to hear in a porn game.

dude this is supposed to turn me on, not OFF and this incredibly turns me off.

i know its all about tastes and all, but really... people like this? people want to spend hours in this game just to get to "know" this ficcional characters?

damn, in that case i would go ahead and get a real girl.

what i am trying to say is, why make it like this, i mean this is about corruption NTR, still she is still a regular girl, wearing horrible clothes.
wtf? its beyond me to be honest, i spended 4 hours of my life in this thing, that its supposed to be a sex game, a corruption game. and it looks like a game made for 13 years old who cant get a girlfriend, and need something like this.

sorry for the rant, its just that this is one of the most boring games i have ever played. and its beyond me how can a person create this and call it "hot" or "sexy"
sorry but this sucks

The graphics are decent.
The plot has a few holes in its internal logic, but manages to remain interesting. The developer appears to have story more-or-less planned and is not lurching around, making it all up as he goes along. This is good!
The MC's increasing lewdity can reasonably be explained as part corruption, but mostly a result of her developing abilities. Fair enough!
Apart from the MC's mother the female characters have realistic character quirks and are generally likeable. The mother's sexual behaviour seems odd -- even for a pornographic fuck-fest.
With the exception of Nicola, the male characters all seem to be pretty shallow, immature and self-obsessed ... Ah!, the joys of (over 18) adolescence.
The absolute worst would have to be the diminutive, whining, parasitic boyfriend. If Angelica wishes to retain any self-respect she needs to dump this snivelling (Would you be my mother?) twat a.s.a.p.
All in all, this game manages to retain interest, even though I find most of the male characters pretty embarrassing.

Verdict. great story, great renders, but the show needs to move on quite a bit faster if the developer wants to be get better funds from the punters. I really want to give it a 5-star rating, but cannot.

game released (on f95zone): May 2018

total months to date: 25

version: 0.5.3

Quite a few titillating or tease worthy scenes, but MC is still a virgin.

Pros: very sexy female protag, cool supporting cast, and great renders for the most part. Nice story, a bit clicky, but not overly so.

Cons: Too little actual sexy time (plenty of tease though). 25 months, that’s 8 updates if updated every 3 months. The corruption or sex progression of the protag is taking too long, 1 year of story building is acceptable, but 2 years to be still “shy virgin” is “a bit much” me thinks. Throw in the fact that this is a re-boot from 2017, well, to say more would be offensive, so I won’t.

I played the game again, and I take back some of my opinion about this game. I understand the story better my second time around, and hence I will take me foot out of me mouth now.

Please, get a MAC one out, and a Android one too. Not having that just killed off 30% to 40% of the player base, it’s economically unsound. Besides, it’s almost past the middle of 2020. MAC and ANDROID distro's are just a click away now.

For MAC, the main issue is permissions on the saves if you do the old PC version “app.nw” rename and dump that into RPGM maker. As of SIERRA, it doesn’t work anymore vis-a-vis the old write-only-system issue.

The theme of the game gives the idea of a standard school setting but there's a deep dark secret hidden.

The story is slow but steady, slowly you start to unveil parts of the secret. How it'll influence the MC is up to you to decide. Aside from the teasing and adult theme'd parts the story holds up on it's own as well tying it all nicely together. Looking forward to how it will continue to evolve.

The characters are quite well done with each having a defined personality and not just blank fillers. I think the art with the characters is also quite fitting for their personality and role in the game. With some being intentionally annoying and others being alluring.

Definitely something to keep an eye on.

Partial Review but... READ PLEASE!
Usually i don't release reviews on incomplete products, but when you find one that makes you excited with every update you MUST let everyone know. OK let's go!

Characters
And here the question is: how it's possible not to fall in love with Angelica? It's beautiful, sweet, naive, curious, tenacious, stubborn and above all VERY VERY sensual... (OK i love her). Rita is a fantastic milf, i like also Larissa, Ping and Nicola but overall all the characters are definied very well (including Simone 'Pee Wee').

Story / Script
This is one of the few products of its kind in which it's worth reading the dialogues and following the story. He catches you from the first moment and intrigues you more and more as he goes on with the narration. And the story has increasingly interesting developments (!)

Animation / Rendering
Absolutely one of the maximum points of the game, the 'interactive' parts are not ends in themselves but perfectly integrated into the story, the quality of the renders is very high with a superb use of lights and shadows. Congratulation Mike!

Conclusion
What can i say: Angelica Origins is truly an excellent product, made with patience and care by an artist which takes a great passion. And believe me, there are very few people who put passion before money. So if you have a few extra coins invest it in this project and give Mike a chance, you won't regret it.

My favorite Female protagonist game can’t wait to see more of our lovely Angelica
Overall I enjoy every character even if some are hated by others. I enjoy the regular RPG feel to it; being able to walk around the city even though some hate it. I also do enjoy the story behind the character and how much time the developer spends on the dialogue.

Interesting story but what a pain to play.

This is what happens if you take the things that are aggravating about RPGM and use them every chance you get.

Don't get me wrong, it is a fun and interesting story with a bit of suspense, good characters... It is not "just" porn, I like it.

BUT the mechanics of the game make me want to scream. Everything (EVERYTHING!) phases in and out:

Char1 says something
*phase out*
*phase in char 2*
Char2 says something
*phase out*
*phase in Char1*
Char 1 says something

What the hell? Every scene is like this. Everytime at the end of a scene I get the silly emotion bubble over the character before I can move again.

After every sentence the text box (you guessed it!) phases in an out before delivering the next sentence. It's torture. How can you design an game like this??

I am ok with RPGM, really, but not like this. As it stands it's close to unplayable unless you are really patient.

i like the idea of the game and how the gameplay mechanics work. BUT.. the character switches are annoying especially in sex scenes. thaat you have NO WAY of thats the reson i gave the game only 3 stars.the background story is great, the graphics are nice, cant plain there and without the reason mentioned in the spiler i would have given the game 5 stars, but it was sadly not meant to be

5/5 Animations = They are looking good and most of the rpgm doesn't have them

5/5 Localization = I really appreciate this one (if a game doesn't have at least a quest bar i instantly exit and delete the game without even trying it) It's have a quest bar and what to do and it's put some mark on the ground for you it's pretty nice.

Story ?/5: It's to complicated for me, I'm a skip to the action guy.

But Let me tell you, so you don't do the same mistake as me, If you got your eyes on the MC and think "Can't wait to see her bang all around the school" you're wrong very very wrong. you don't have the option and the MC stay virgin till the end of the game

This game is for people who dislike the tag "Female protagonist" that care about the woman so they try to end the game without allowing anyone to sleep with her



At first, I was clickbait by the description of the game and the first 30min of the game so I left a negative ratting but now that the dev pm me and he update the description of the game I felt guilty for giving him a negative rating for something that wasn't my cup of tea.

It is kind of promising at the start with some interesting characters, but the game on the very first day already crashes with multiple images not loading, and then a final inability to load another image causes an infinite feedback loop of failed load, it tries to load again, fails, tries again...and so on. Unacceptable to have that many images (I think it was at least ten or more failure) failing to load on the very first day in the game. (testing????)

When there are many choices of games to try, you have to make a good first impression. I probably won't be back, but wish the devs a lot of luck and hope they fix the bugs.

Edit 1: I have tweaked the review from 2 to 3 stars for right now (pending further review) just because the dev was really responsive in addressing my specific complaint for my review and that alone is worth a star. Many devs do not do that, although I still think better testing before release is a valid issue to mention. I will update again after I have the chance to try it again.

Edit 2: I wanted to leave the entire original review thread just to show how the dev responded so well and why he deserves consideration for support. He personally wrote me and also responded well on the forums in directly addressing very legitimate criticism regarding a fatal crash bug on the first day of the game. That issue has now been resolved and I have been able to play the full experience of the game until I think Day 6? when it ends.

So the real objective review is that I think this game has a lot of potential and already a lot of content. It's a really great game for this engine (I prefer Renpy) and I was surprised it was as good as it was...my only reason for dinging one star is that I feel like a lot of the choices are forced at times without real divergence of options at times. More than once I made a choice and then went back and tried the other choice but then the scene played out the exact same. Still, it's a good game in my opinion!

RPG. Why!? I started playing the game and it is unbelievably slow, this wouldn't be a bad thing if the story was good but the story is bland too. Plus I've played a lot of RPG games and some are great, but games like this where that space isn't utilized just makes the game extra boring because you can't do anything!

I can say without a shadow of a doubt that this game is one of my favorites of all-time. I have been supporting this game since the the very first release and I am glad that I have stayed while this game develops.

Story- is what I enjoy most out of the game. I am most often left with a good sense of excitement for the next update to be released. I cannot wait to see what happens and how the characters react to certain settings. The pacing of the story itself is pretty nice. It is not too fast paced, but enough happens to keep me satisfied.

Characters- there are a lot of characters that Angelica interacts with that cover any taste for the person playing the game. From her idiot boyfriend Simon to the man himself....and main event man Ping! I do hope that everyone has their turn with our favorite curly haired Italian girl!

Graphics- I like the look of all of the characters because it seems like I have never seen a game that is a vibrant as this. The models themselves are also unique which is a breath of fresh air.

Writing- The writing is very well written especially for a non native speaker. I know for certain that he has a great translation team so it is good to see that there are barely any typos and spelling mistakes in each release.

Sexual Scenes- Finally the main course of every adult game the sex scene. Every erotic and sex scene is animated very smoothly. It is always a pleasure to see Angi in any scene. Each scene is easily a 10/10.

Conclusion- Angelica Origins is what I consider a fantastic game made by a great creator. Now I will say I like to consider myself a friend of the creator himself so there could be bias, but I tend to not pull punches on my criticism of a friends work. I appreciate the work of all indie game devs on this site. I know this is a pirate site, but if anyone reading this that enjoys the game can please consider supporting this dev to keep this game go through the development process. I know Kelo works hard in tough environments to push out updates for his patrons and supporters and I think a dollar a month will show him that you care about this game as much as he does. This game is worth it!

Sorry if my english is not good but i will do my best.

I'm kind of new in this "Adult Game world" and I discovered this page alongside with SvsComics and I found myself quite amazed by these type of games and I started to search for an specific type of content such as NTR. Then I was looking for also a good story, good renders and good characters just to be kind of related to.

So I discovered this game, this AMAZING girl called Angelica. I loved the first version not just because of the tags or renders, but because i sensed a great story behind it. Then the re-released came out and I just found that this game was everything i've been searching for so i decided to support the dev because i would like to know what the story can bring.
I think that what is important is just to give a little of yourself to every dev you consider worth it because they are putting so much of themself to develop a great game. And even so understand that the dev is just a normal person like us working hard to do something they love and hopefully one day you love it too.

So if you like the game, please consider support the dev, just U$S 1. I don't think the economy of yours will drop but it brings so much more for the dev.

Great game, enjoyed the old version and cannot wait to see what this reboot brings.

Graphics and Animations are far better than the old version and the story has much more depth this time.

If you do not like NTR then this is not for you but if you played the old version and she did not have a Boyfriend then you are wrong, she did so you might as well play this game too.

I also decided to pledge to this game creator on Patreon to see this game carried on.

EDIT: It has nearly been 1 year since this game launched and it has only gotten better, the quality is amazing, animations are grate, so i decided to review this game again, now I give it a 5 star simply because it has not been abandoned.

So please if you enjoyed this game then please consider supporting it as this really helps the games development, even just $1 a month will be very welcome.