Yeah I don't know how to explain it but the dialogues felt really natural. Specially the scenes with the kimura and watanabe, both of them forgetting their homework, watanabe realising MC breaking the camera. The expressions and the way dialogues been written, it felt like I am watching an anime . Also I can see a blooming romance Between watanabe and kimura. Interesting to see where that relationship go. Will it bloom or fade in darkness.
Uff, shame
Congratz. I really liked chapter 1.
Isekai Oji-san (in the middle) is a wholesome uncle who never rapes anyone, the only NTR he does is towards the girls who're into him, NTRing them with each other, ha-ha.You know, someone is gonna get r*ped/cucked when one of these motherfuckers appears...
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THX for the share...
I hope you stretch that out as much as possible and don't skip too quickly to the part about their collaboration. I think the most striking thing about this type of story is when the female character is forced by multiple reasons, not just to cheat on her partner for the simple pleasure of it.
I'll be posting my Patreon soon. It still needs to get approved!
So glad you liked the chapter! And yeah, I realized that the images were really ballooning the size. They're all in 4k since I do a lot of pan and zooms. I'll test out webp!Congratz. I really liked chapter 1.
You should save your pictures as webp files instead of PNG. Your Day1 folder has only 91 files and is nearly 500mb.
I really like the tone of your images but there are (the typical AI) mistakes like in nearly every single picture. Would be great if you could focus on that a bit more in the future specially the logic mistakes in that images.
Looking forward for the next update. Well done.
The other thing I suggest is that this type of game can offer a lot, and leaving open the possibility of multiple routes would be interesting, even if you focus on just one at first. If there's one thing that's tiring right now, it's only seeing the perspective of a single character when secondary characters can have their own motivations or have multiple destinies, whether the character is abused by one or several characters individually or simultaneously. It's good that you take the time to tell what you want but leave open the possibility of experiencing other routes in the future with the same characters.
Hey dev please don't dismiss this option so quickly. Noncon-forced sex scenes would be really nice in this game. In fact it would be the best thing that can happen with these ugly bastards
Trust me, I've written an insane plot for this. Stick around to see it unravel! All the characters will have clear motivations and reasons to do the things they'd do. I've spent months building these characters.
I am planning different routes but of course, I'm going to be focusing on a single route. But even in this linear story, I'll be coming up with choices which would let you see varying scenes.
Well in this the MC is really cool and badass. I have some photos of him. Literally beats bad guys.
