VN Ren'Py Ashes of the Sun [v0.16] [Pandarinka]

[snapturtle34]

well just for starters anything that happens at the sun we dont know about for several minutes. And as elasstommer pointed out an asteroid it a VERY unlikely candidate to do ANYTHING of note to the sun. I get that we're a long way from 'the big reveal' of answers but the premise here is VERY shoddy.
The rest is solid, you just need to clean up that intro some.

No offense, but just enjoy the game (or don’t. it’s up to you). Seriously, it’s a brand-new game, and we haven’t even gotten an explanation yet. Let’s not forget, it’s just a game. There are plenty of games with magic and all kinds of crazy, unrealistic stuff.

To the dev: I actually like the game so far; it seems really interesting!

 

[Tyrranus]

No offense, but just enjoy the game (or don’t. it’s up to you). Seriously, it’s a brand-new game, and we haven’t even gotten an explanation yet. Let’s not forget, it’s just a game. There are plenty of games with magic and all kinds of crazy, unrealistic stuff.

To the dev: I actually like the game so far; it seems really interesting!

nothing wrong with suggesting improvements dude, as Ive said already the rest of the game is solid. Just this one area needs work. Esp as the nerd kid(on the school path) would also point these things out

 

[snapturtle34]

nothing wrong with suggesting improvements dude, as Ive said already the rest of the game is solid. Just this one area needs work. Esp as the nerd kid(on the school path) would also point these things out

All good, but again its early. Lets see Also my point was simply "Its a game, everything can happen, even if it doesnt make sense"