RPGM Ashley's troubles [v0.9.5] [granit2000]

[lnomsim]

It's a little concerning when you say an artist redid everything, because AI can do better than that.
And then there is this:

This has to be the longest car in the world, and those eyes... and this ear... and this hair that disappear in the great nothingness.

If a human redid those picture, they did a worse job than a lot of Ais.

 

[granit2000]

This has to be the longest car in the world, and those eyes... and this ear... and this hair that disappear in the great nothingness.
If a human redid those picture, they did a worse job than a lot of Ais.

Thanks for the feedback!
As for the "longest car in the world" - I assumed that sports cars have a rather small rear window. Here's an example:

I can't quite imagine what it looks like from the inside in reality.

And as for the ear - here's how it was originally from EasyDiffusion:


Yes, there really is something to fix.
Perhaps we've already "blurred our eyes" and simply overlooked it
(this scene was one of the last to be added)



We will try to do better in the future!

 

[King Thanos]

AI cg is so fucking awful. I tried with this one but I just cant get over how awful AI cg is.

 

[lnomsim]

Thanks for the feedback!
As for the "longest car in the world" - I assumed that sports cars have a rather small rear window. Here's an example:
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I can't quite imagine what it looks like from the inside in reality.

And as for the ear - here's how it was originally from EasyDiffusion:
View attachment 4424513

Yes, there really is something to fix.
Perhaps we've already "blurred our eyes" and simply overlooked it
(this scene was one of the last to be added)



We will try to do better in the future!

Ok, that's even more concerning, your original picture looks better than the redone one.
The eyes are looking in the same direction, there is no exaggerated shadows, the mouth looks more natural.

Did you pay the "artist"" that redid your images?

Because if you did, I fear you got scammed and they just put your original images in another AI.
And if it's a friend, I'm sorry to say, but they are not up to the task.

You should try to install stable diffusion (or any other good image generator) and find a model and LORAs that suit your taste, you'll honestly get better results. And eventually find an artist to redo the eyes and hands (hands are the biggest quality breaker with AI generated images).

People will always complain (me included) that a dev used AI, especially if there is no quality control (bad hands, bad eyes, obvious AI artifacts and other weirdness).

I'm not really criticizing the image in itself (even though it is criticizable), but when I say the end result after a human applied changes is concerning, I really mean it.

But good luck with your project anyway, don't let what I say discourage you.

 

[granit2000]

Did you pay the "artist"" that redid your images?

No, she is my friend.
We spent a lot of time on this project, on pure enthusiasm in our free time. Just believe me, it got much better

You should try to install stable diffusion (or any other good image generator) and find a model and LORAs that suit your taste

That's exactly what I did! I use about ~6 models + merge them in different combinations.

The eyes are looking in the same direction

The idea was that person was looking in the rearview mirror and she had a smirk on her face.

But good luck with your project anyway, don't let what I say discourage you.

Thank you!

 

[AutismGOD69]

Honestly it's not too bad.
Writing - it's fine. I couldn't notice too many glaring problems with it. It's a bit simplistic at times, but it's a hell of a lot better when compared to alot of other games.
Art - Like average. It's kinda bad sometimes, but it's not horrible and is, all things considered, alright. The AI is kinda mid at times, but for AI it is what it is.
Overall it's an alright game and when comparing to most games on the site it's certainly above average for sure.

 

[MVictoria]

HI, I played the game, I liked it and it intregued me as to where the story is going to go.
I liked the world building, there is a world here that I wished to know more about.

The writing is fine, there are very few grammatical errors but it doesnt really detract from the game.

The art is fine, there is nothing wrong with it, I liked it as it looks like it has the personal touch, people will complain
about the one thing they dont like rather than celebrate the twenty things they do like unfortunately.

Please continue and I wish you luck with your game, I wish I could have seen Ashley in her matching hood

 

[Glitchy Waffle]

Not a bad game at all so far, I'm looking forward to the story's continuation.

 

[granit2000]

This will not be included in the game, but just tested new neural networks...
I'm sooooo impressed!

Wow, just WOW!

 

[Kyle Randall]

This project is almost finished - the main plot and "bad endings" are ready, only a few images need to be fixed and replaced.

This is the first time I've posted something I've done myself, so don't judge me too harshly

Also, English is not my native language, but I'm working on it.
It's quite possible that I made some mistakes, although I've checked it many times.

Is there any ending that isn't bad, yet ?

 

[granit2000]

Is there any ending that isn't bad, yet ?

There is already a "neutral" one, and there will be a good one in the next (final) release.

 

[mtran.hs]

I have a few feedbacks:

1. Please add the option to save whenever we want. Sometimes, we just hit Enter so fast so the new save overrides the saves that we suppose to keep, and this is very annoying.

2. Please add instruction for different route when facing with choice, as the choices are not clear to indicate what might happen.

Beyond that, it's a good game. I hope to see more facesitting with the guard girl.

 

[granit2000]

I have a few feedbacks:

1. Please add the option to save whenever we want. Sometimes, we just hit Enter so fast so the new save overrides the saves that we suppose to keep, and this is very annoying.

2. Please add instruction for different route when facing with choice, as the choices are not clear to indicate what might happen.

Beyond that, it's a good game. I hope to see more facesitting with the guard girl.

Regarding the saves, I placed them at key points.
Scrolling from a point will take a couple of minutes, just hold down the left mouse button.
For some reason, when saving, sometimes scripts working unpredictably, which is probably even worse.

As for the choices, the rule is simple: when Ashley acts cocky - she gets fucked.

 

[mtran.hs]

Hey mate,

I need your help with the walkthrough. I've seen that you said the gameplay will take like 5 hours.

Could you help outline the possible walkthrough?

I got to the point where the girl can select 3 jobs, but she can actually choose 1, which is being a maid at the mansion.

The, the rest of the content for the mansion is not that long, or maybe I missed something. The game is like 1 hour.

 

[granit2000]

Hey mate,

I need your help with the walkthrough. I've seen that you said the gameplay will take like 5 hours.

Could you help outline the possible walkthrough?

I got to the point where the girl can select 3 jobs, but she can actually choose 1, which is being a maid at the mansion.

The, the rest of the content for the mansion is not that long, or maybe I missed something. The game is like 1 hour.

It will be in the final version, about ~3 hours for the main story with a good ending, and about 2 for all the bad ones (If you don't skip dialogues).

 

[mtran.hs]

Ah, I see. The duration is for the completed game, which is not the one you released.

 

[mtran.hs]

When will be the next release?

 

[granit2000]

When will be the next release?

I'm having problems at my day job, but I hope to finish the game in a couple of weeks.

 

[granit2000]

I'm really excited, a little more, and you can get a high-quality 3D model from any image.
All that's left is to insert it into the Unreal Engine and animate it.
And there are already tools for capturing motions.
Literally anyone can make their own movie. WOW.
P.S.
Don't worry, we haven't abandoned the game, we'll finish it soon

 

[Ssato243]

Can we be the dom in lezdom or are we forced to be sub