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granit2000

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Good for a first game. Especially good that the game is finished (unlike 95% of games here).
Good luck and success.)
Thanks for the kind review!
I ditched the typical RPGM combat system — first, to keep the game from dragging on; second, who actually enjoys grinding mobs? And third, the main character’s just a regular bank clerk… who is she realistically going to beat?
Let it be shorter, but not dull.
 

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I have to ask... Is there some missing tags? Because.... how do you "rape" someone when there is no sex involved? Someone will have to enlighten me on that one. I guess I am just not smart enough to figure that one out.
 
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I'll say right now the checkpoint save system is a pain in the arse. Just open up free form saving and be done with it.
 
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strong respect for you for completing the game and actually pretty decent. Though huge warning for a potential jump scare and horror part of the game for the true ending path
 
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Congrats on finishing.
Did not expect a true happy ending for Ashley.

While the female characters look more or less ok most of the time, some poses look off, and sometimes the proportions look weird, the males are truly scary, especially the doctor and his friend and the 2 at the cafe.
 
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granit2000

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I have to ask... Is there some missing tags? Because.... how do you "rape" someone when there is no sex involved? Someone will have to enlighten me on that one. I guess I am just not smart enough to figure that one out.
I’ve always understood non-consensual sex as rape, just to be clear.
And there is one scene involving penetration — but only if Ashley ends up back in prison, and only under specific conditions.

I'll say right now the checkpoint save system is a pain in the arse. Just open up free form saving and be done with it.
Like I mentioned earlier — maybe it’s my clumsy setup — but free saving kept breaking the scripts when loading. So I went with forced saves to avoid having to replay huge chunks of dialogue each time.

strong respect for you for completing the game and actually pretty decent. Though huge warning for a potential jump scare and horror part of the game for the true ending path
Thanks!

I felt there had to be a solid reason for the main character to wake up screaming from a nightmare — hopefully it didn’t come off as over-the-top or annoying.

Congrats on finishing.
Did not expect a true happy ending for Ashley.

While the female characters look more or less ok most of the time, some poses look off, and sometimes the proportions look weird, the males are truly scary, especially the doctor and his friend and the 2 at the cafe.
Thanks!
I believed she earned a happy ending, after everything she went through.

That was the goal — the punks are meant to be downright vile, and the scientist and his buddy are just full-blown paranoids.
 

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I enjoyed the game though I think I only found like 4 bad ends?
loved the latex-heavy parts andin general the tone of the dominators in this game hits pretty nice in a way a lot of games don't, and as others have said it's genuinely rare and impressive for a solo dev to actually be able to finish a game and not haveit hang in slow updates for half a decade.
 
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granit2000

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granit2000 congratulations on completing the game! Have to say, it's very good for the first project. Really enjoyed the game - definitely hope to see more from you in future :)
I enjoyed the game though I think I only found like 4 bad ends?
loved the latex-heavy parts andin general the tone of the dominators in this game hits pretty nice in a way a lot of games don't, and as others have said it's genuinely rare and impressive for a solo dev to actually be able to finish a game and not haveit hang in slow updates for half a decade.
Thank you guys! It really feels good when your work is appreciated :D

I'll try to make something on the RPGM unite engine (which I already bought, but haven't quite figured out yet), and well, I need to decide on the setting and the plot. Make a game in the same "universe"? - There are really a lot of questions.


As for bad endings - there are only 6 of them (+ one neutral).
One of them is too simple - death, it is unlikely to interest anyone.
 
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The game is fairly good. Just think the save points are kind of in poor locations.
They would be more useful just before the question so the person need not go through all the content before it again. Or at least just before the choice information needed for the question.
 
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Довольно увлекательный сюжет, хотя я ожидал что вся игра будет происходить в тюрьме как в bdcc. Если есть желание, то я могу помочь с английским текстом (бесплатно офк).
 

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Довольно увлекательный сюжет, хотя я ожидал что вся игра будет происходить в тюрьме как в bdcc. Если есть желание, то я могу помочь с английским текстом (бесплатно офк).
Спасибо, очень приятно слышать! Я думал над этим изначально, но в итоге получилось как получилось =)
Насчет текста - я пока небольшой тайм-аут возьму, накидаю пару концептов сюжета для новой игры + надо в новом рпг-мейкере разобраться, они там все усложнили зачем-то.
 
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Guest888

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It's pretty cute and funny game (sketchbook episode really touched me :sneaky:), but I would have preferred more gameplay elements. I barely play the main storyline, just watch the "movie" in the second half of the game.
The sidelines contain very little erotic content. How is it that Ashley can make love to the shop assistant, but never sleeps with the owner of the mansion? And I would have preferred more content in prison with the warden.
Overall, the game took me much less than the stated 5 hours.
Good luck, but you have room to grow. (y)

Опаньки. Ты ты русский?
Я просто в такие игрульки редко играю и поэтому боевик с экшн-элементами на подобном-то движке действительно произвел впечатление, хотя, может, это обычное дело для них. Но игра как будто обрывается посередине, а Эшли просто ходит хвостиком за своей подружкой. Когда ее накрыли в кафе я подумал "ага, что-то интересное", но потом опять начались "рельсы". В общем, удачи в начинаниях. Рисунки из блокнота реально добавили ламповости.
 
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Спасибо, очень приятно слышать! Я думал над этим изначально, но в итоге получилось как получилось =)
Нет, это хорошо, что игра выходит за границы тюрьмы (или ИМЕЕТ возможность выйти), но в качестве альтернативы можно было сделать часик сексуальных приключений с той брюнеткой, если Эш решает остаться в камере после взрыва.
Я еще думал, что бдсм-мадам уломает ее стать своей служанкой на веки вечные, упомянув о розыске, но та ее просто усыпила и сдала властям, хотя тут бы Эш вряд ли стала сопротивляться. Пришлось переигрывать! В особняке вообще секс. контент предусмотрен?
 

granit2000

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It's pretty cute and funny game (sketchbook episode really touched me :sneaky:), but I would have preferred more gameplay elements. I barely play the main storyline, just watch the "movie" in the second half of the game.
The sidelines contain very little erotic content. How is it that Ashley can make love to the shop assistant, but never sleeps with the owner of the mansion? And I would have preferred more content in prison with the warden.
Overall, the game took me much less than the stated 5 hours.
Good luck, but you have room to grow. (y)

Опаньки. Ты ты русский?
Я просто в такие игрульки редко играю и поэтому боевик с экшн-элементами на подобном-то движке действительно произвел впечатление, хотя, может, это обычное дело для них. Но игра как будто обрывается посередине, а Эшли просто ходит хвостиком за своей подружкой. Когда ее накрыли в кафе я подумал "ага, что-то интересное", но потом опять начались "рельсы". В общем, удачи в начинаниях. Рисунки из блокнота реально добавили ламповости.
Нет, это хорошо, что игра выходит за границы тюрьмы (или ИМЕЕТ возможность выйти), но в качестве альтернативы можно было сделать часик сексуальных приключений с той брюнеткой, если Эш решает остаться в камере после взрыва.
Я еще думал, что бдсм-мадам уломает ее стать своей служанкой на веки вечные, упомянув о розыске, но та ее просто усыпила и сдала властям, хотя тут бы Эш вряд ли стала сопротивляться. Пришлось переигрывать! В особняке вообще секс. контент предусмотрен?
Well, there is a little =)

As for the action - if you saw the crutches I used to achieve this, I think you would definitely be amused.

No, at least I haven't seen anything like that, and I thought that turn-based battles are completely unsuitable - firstly, they are boring, and secondly, they don't fit the narrative at all.

As for the "tail" - Ashley was planned as a "plant", but with the prospect of growing as a character by the end of the game. The main character there is definitely not Ashley, although we "play" for her.

Rails are an unpleasant compromise - to make a half-dead open world in which you have to look for where to go, or this - I chose the first, so as not to drag it out. I also removed the battles in general, stretching the game with them is very much an acquired taste.

The drawings, yes, are very lamp-like, the person put soul into them, I immediately understood that they should be inserted "as is" as soon as I saw them.

An hour of adventures with a brunette - and then she would not have made it to the bus, and this is an additional branch, and I don't know when I would have finished with this game at all.

As for the mansion: there is one voluntary maid, one "reprogrammed" maid (reprogramming is not exactly sex content, but still), a return to prison after refusing to work for a broken relic, you can agree on the very first day that this is all a misunderstanding, and return to the hotel the next morning.

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Ну есть немного =)

Что касается боевика – если бы ты видел какими костылями я этого добивался, думаю тебя бы это точно повеселило. Не, я такого по крайней мере не видел, и подумал что пошаговые бои совершенно не подходят – во-первых скучно, во вторых совсем не попадает под нарратив.

Что касается «хвостика» - Эшли и планировалась как «растение», но с перспективой роста как персонажа к концу игры. Главгероиня там определенно не Эшли, хотя «играем» мы за нее.

Рельсы – это неприятный компромис – делать полумертвый открытый мир, в котором надо искать куда идти, или это – я выбрал первое, чтобы не затягивать. Так же убрал бои в целом, растягивать ими игру - ну очень на любителя.

Рисунки да, очень ламповые, человек в них душу вложил, я сразу понял что их надо вставить «как есть» как только увидел.

Часик приключений с брюнеткой – и тогда ГГ бы не успела на автобус, а это дополнительная ветка, и я не знаю, когда бы я с этой игрой вообще закончил бы.

Что касается особняка: там есть одна добровольная служанка, одна «перепрошитая» служанка (перепрошивка не то чтобы секс конент, но все же), возврат в тюрьму после отказа отработать за разбитую реликвию, можно в первый же день договориться что это все недоразумение, и вернуться в отель на следующий день утром,

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Powered through the language barriers and AI art to say, I quite like this game. It was fun to play through the different paths; it felt rather like the old Choose your Own Adventure novels.

I can definitely appreciate the effort you put into this.
 
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