I like the story so far, looking forward how it finishes.
Your art style is also very nice, I like the closeups and portraits, but the full bodies seem a bit off to me.
I can not really place it, measured it out as it felt as the heads are too big, but they fit.
Guess it is the more pasteltoned skin against the shiny Latex or leather.
Anyhow, looking forward to the finished game.