- Aug 31, 2017
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Hi there,
as i had (and still have) to stay in bed due to a broken leg, what could be very boring, i started to think about a story (fantasy due to the pain killers?) and started to create a VN with Ren'Py with some renders made in DAZ.
The story is still development and i have almost every hour new ideas to add....
Right now i have 44 screens with 856 words in 86 dialog boxes, but for now and to keep the file small, i stripped it down for the first 8 scenes. (Yes, some logic is missing though, due to stripping)
You can download the sneak preview
What i would like to ask the community is
- do you think it is worth to go on or is it so bad to better stop and delete al the so far done work? (And yes, the here missing scenes are "little" hotter and i still do not know where the story will go to....)
- are there any obvious things i should change in Ren'Py (still learning, what a weird syntax....)
- I'm also thinking of distributing it "for money" (yes, i know in what kinda forum i am right now....) but where and how?
Any feedback, as long as it is not personal, is highly appreciated.
@Admins
1) My protagonists are 17, which is a legal age for having "physical contact", at least in Germany.
If this is still not appropriate for this forum, delete this post, give me a short message, but don't ban me immediately.
2) If this is not the right area, pls. move it.
Thanks a lot.
as i had (and still have) to stay in bed due to a broken leg, what could be very boring, i started to think about a story (fantasy due to the pain killers?) and started to create a VN with Ren'Py with some renders made in DAZ.
The story is still development and i have almost every hour new ideas to add....
Right now i have 44 screens with 856 words in 86 dialog boxes, but for now and to keep the file small, i stripped it down for the first 8 scenes. (Yes, some logic is missing though, due to stripping)
You can download the sneak preview
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.What i would like to ask the community is
- do you think it is worth to go on or is it so bad to better stop and delete al the so far done work? (And yes, the here missing scenes are "little" hotter and i still do not know where the story will go to....)
- are there any obvious things i should change in Ren'Py (still learning, what a weird syntax....)
- I'm also thinking of distributing it "for money" (yes, i know in what kinda forum i am right now....) but where and how?
Any feedback, as long as it is not personal, is highly appreciated.
@Admins
1) My protagonists are 17, which is a legal age for having "physical contact", at least in Germany.
If this is still not appropriate for this forum, delete this post, give me a short message, but don't ban me immediately.
2) If this is not the right area, pls. move it.
Thanks a lot.