VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Atonia: The Holy Church of Ascension [v2.0 Final] [3Diddly]

Oof, 3Diddly has done it again! Incredible work!
Good writing and plot. Really loved the story of how Mina is slowly corrupted and brainwashed into believing her role as a Confidante to serve her Bishop emotionally, sexually, and physically
10/10 would recommend if you're a hardcore masochist

Short and to the point. For those looking for a straightforward, no frills NTR, this is a good playthrough. The renders are a bit pedestrian for 2023 but still, it does the job. I always like the cliche of changing appearance with increased corruption. No choices and branches so you'll be done with this in 30 minutes.
Edited: Replaying this and one thing I forgot to mention is that I enjoyed the mythology of Atonia as well. Interestingly written and serves a part in the overall NTR narrative. Hopefully the dev will revisit this world again.

One of the unique experiences like the Antonia Blues, which need to be cherished and supported much more.
The NTR prospect and the storyline is so unique however it's a bit short and needed a bit more of adventures without spoiling the story's uniqueness.

Fantastic NTR Visual Novel. The corruption was at a good pace. And the implementation of the changes in appearence of the wife was a grat idea.

I thought they could have use another tatto designs. The crotch ovaries tatto is too cliche. Maybe his lover name in some part of the body, or two stripes in the leg would have been interesting.

The wife was pretty, but the secondary character was more pretty, the blonde one. It's common to make the protagonist in porn games more average looking than some secondary characters. And is something that I don't understand, why not make her the most attractive possible, besides being somewhat credible in personality.

That where some of the cons. I'd have liked to see more humillation from the wife to his husband. More badmouthing and more humillating comparations. But what was there was good.

The game has a decent lenght despite the small size of the file. I was pleseantly surprised.

To finish I must say that the Mc was hot enough, the NTR was very hot and I like they chose a white antagonist and not the cliche black bull. I hope the developer continues making this kind of games.

Good NTR VNs are hard to come by and this one is very good. It isn't groundbreaking or anything, but it looks good, the models look great and it executes on the base NTR premise very well. Very good overall. Looking forward to future releases.

Pretty decent short kinetic NTR novel. Maybe there is not much new to the genre , but the main model is nice and the storytelling is fair. Recommend to those who are into NTR and are in for a quick fap. Will be looking to Chapter 2.

3Diddly has always been great with the NTR content and this visual novel is no exception. The steady corruption of the protagonist's wife to the leader of the "Holy Church" is nice but perhaps a little too fast compared to his other corruption NTR VN's. The wife is amazing looking and I can't wait to see what more will happen as she's corrupted further and further while the MC can only watch it happen in part 2.

I thought this was excellent - the artwork is great, the plot and characters are well fleshed out and entirely believable and the lewd sceses are crazily hot. You dont get to influence the plot in any meaningful way but as its a kinetic noved that came as no suprise anyway.

Critique - 1.0

This is a kinetic novel featuring a cuckold story-line, there is no deviation from this fetish at this point in the novels development.

It's very unrealistic in that there is zero emotional discourse between the MC and his LI.

I'd like to say your wife is brainwashed, but it comes across as more of her being a whore with no conscience, she'll happily lie to your face and go cheat.
Note to Dev, if you're gf is meant to be brainwashed she wouldn't be lying to you, it implies that she knows exactly what she's doing.

Even though you're warned this kinetic novel is a no win scenario, it could have been made far more realistic. ie. you know she is about to go cheat but are given no options to stop her or even accuse her...
A no win scenario implies that whatever you try (choices/pathways) the result ultimately ends up being the same, however you are not given any choices and so cannot influence the plot in any way.

So it's not so much a no win scenario as it is a very unrealistic cuckold kinetic novel.

You feel disconnected from the MC due to the fact that you cannot make any choices for him.

I found the cheating (not NTR, sex is fully consensual) to be a turn on, but the plot is so simplistic/unimaginative I can't help but feel let down.

I really enjoy such shorter stories like Atonia Blues and this one.
In fact they are very well written and scripted and not very long.
And the characters are really good made as well as the sounds.
Just hope the dev is continuing all the different games he has started.