VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - AVALON Conglomerate [v1.0] [DevKariAV]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    wrarar

    draws: very good.

    story: is luring and feels autentic but needs a lot of work on it.

    scenes: some are a mess and some are kinda ok.

    characters: mmmhh... they could use more work but they are ok.

    music: is good.

    conclussion: ok, the IDEA of the game is autentic and original, ( the lesbian assasins adopting the MC is a nice start) and the story got lot of effort on it, and a nice flow, so is kinda easy to follow. with THAT SAID, the story also needs a lot of improve and fixes like the translation, but is a WIP so it cant helped.

    i made this rewiev on 1.0 (and im wiling to change it, if a see it necesary)