I find that only a fraction of the potential audience is receptive to this format. I do not know why.
never clicked on your stories despite having seen them, so I'll make a guess on why we who don't click on them do what we do.
first thing I spot is 'marlowe' which makes me associate detective story, then I spot 'noir' and it's confirmed. at this point I'm already mentally skipping it because I'm not looking for detective stories (even though I like them). I don't think anyone here is looking for detective stories when they go through a million new games, they're looking for some fetish complexes. and nothing in your game communicates a fetish that might hook me in.
that's one of the problems with 'original stories'. nobody (here) cares about those stories, no matter how they claim they do. so it doesn't trigger the response of stopping browsing and checking out what it is. when you're browsing for big milf tits you skip 'detective story', 'mafia story' etc. because it's not the grain of sand your brain is trying to filter out from a pile of sand.
just like while googling we jump over ANYTHING that doesn't directly associate with what we're searching for.
but now that I look at nick marlowe previews, I instantly love how much storytelling you have in the images alone. that already tells me you're probably a good storyteller and the shorts are probably very good.
it's just that a gay cliche like an unshaven macho dude in pilot glasses doesn't pull me in when I'm looking for thicc milfs. (not that the dude isn't a great character, hejust isn't what might make me stop browsing for milfs. and I think that applies to 99% of fetishes people look for).
and I don't mean the first image I see should be tits in my face, it just needs to associate with the fetish I'm looking for. a picture of a suburban home with the title "soccer mom" would pull me in instantly because it connects to what I'm looking for, no women in preview required. where as 'suburban mystery' would not pull me in even if it were the same exact game and preview. one triggers me to check it out, the other makes me skip.