Thanks for the feedback. I will try to fix as much as I can for the next version.
As I made clear in the OP notes, English is not my native language.
So I apologize for the mistakes.
I wasn't trying to be insulting.
It is more than just not being a native speaker, it is as if all the characters have the same speaking habits. You can't tell anyone apart from each other outside of a random name usage.
During some sex scenes some sex actions seem to stop existing, like you will be able to do 1 pussy lick then you can only ever do ass licking, and sometimes go to other further things.
Another small issue is that most choices seem to be the same outcome. Now there are choices which diverge like going to the bar vs staying home, but charging your assistant for training versus complimenting them has a lot of the same text.
The passages are very long with a lot of scrolling. I would say shorten the passages and instead make it a few pages to click through, less stress on the player's wrist.
I would also say to make it so it is easy to press a button like numpad, "c", or other keyboard shortcuts to get through the text choices.
That is a lot of sex to happen for a man first out of jail, and somehow he is still porn star worthy instead of having to get back his stamina, and maybe space the sex out a bit more. It is very much quickly one after the other. The wife sure that makes sense, but everyone else seems a bit too early.
And as I mentioned my previous issues.
I wish you luck on this game.