Update: after playing version 0.9 I am lowering my rating to 1 star. This has no story, and even as a farce it doesn't work. The translation is really bad, the models have degraded with ill fitting clothing, no attention to details. Completely nonsensical scene progression. It really should be zero stars, but you can't rate anything here zero stars.
This has to be one of the least thought out games on F95. I just downloaded the current version 0.7.2 and all I can do is shake my head. None of the dialog is proofread. Much of the dialog doesn't even make sense. There is no plot, other than the vague game description, and just because there is a description doesn't mean a plot exists. Since I played it from the beginning, what is with the renders of the MC at the beginning, his asset keeps changing, sometimes during the same scene!
I don't even want to start on the translation to English. Nothing in it indicated any effort was put in to translating the dialogue. Incorrect grammar, sentence structure, spelling. So much bad stuff it is hard to list them all. The story is basically a mishmash of scenes strung together, with nothing advancing the story.
Only reason I didn't give it one star, some, but not all, of the renders are pretty good.
Like every other game I have tried from here, I will watch this one, in the hope they hire a true copy editor and translator, that the story actually has a plotline and that it finishes stronger than it started. But for now, it is deleted from my HDD.