HTML WebGL Bare bones need opinions on the technical side

[Tigerstar]

Hello! I have been building this for a while. It's an HTML game. When it's done, it will be a dating game, but right now, this is it. I think my code is alright but I am a newbie. Do you have any constructive feedback? Thank you!! Also there are no viruses but be careful and scan away stay safe!!

 

[InkyBlack]

Hello! I have been building this for a while. It's an HTML game. When it's done, it will be a dating game, but right now, this is it. I think my code is alright but I am a newbie. Do you have any constructive feedback? Thank you!! Also there are no viruses but be careful and scan away stay safe!!

This is a really lovely launch page. You've created a wonderful first impression for your game—it's polished, inviting, and the aesthetic is spot-on for a dating simulation. The animated background is a beautiful, subtle touch that really elevates the design.

It’s clear you’ve put a lot of thought into the user experience. The smooth fade-in on page load and the preloading of the next page are thoughtful details that make everything feel seamless. It's already so well done, but I have a few small suggestions that could refine it just a little bit more.



A Few Suggestions for Refinement:

1. Hiding Decorative Icons: The feature icons are a lovely visual touch. To improve the experience for those using screen readers, you can add aria-hidden="true" to the <i> tags. This tells the screen reader to simply ignore them, as they are purely decorative, which creates a cleaner listening experience.
   HTML
   
   <i class="bi bi-person-hearts feature-icon" aria-hidden="true"></i>
   
   
2. Making Selections More Robust: In the JavaScript, the gallery button is selected by its position in the list (querySelectorAll('a.btn')[1]). This approach is a little fragile because it depends on the HTML structure remaining exactly the same. A more resilient method would be to give the button a unique ID.
   HTML
   
   <!-- In your HTML -->
   <a href="/character_gallery" id="gallery-button" ...>
   
   Then, you can select it with confidence in your script:
   JavaScript
   
   const galleryButton = document.getElementById('gallery-button');
   
   
3. An Elegant Way to Handle Animations: Rather than setting styles like opacity and transform directly in your JavaScript, you could create a dedicated CSS class to manage the "loading" state. This keeps your styling rules neatly organized within your CSS.
   You could add this to your <style> block:
   CSS
   
   .launch-container.is-loading {
   transform: translateY(20px);
   opacity: 0;
   }
   
   Then, your JavaScript becomes a little cleaner—you just add the class on page load and remove it to trigger the animation. It's a nice touch for organization.
   JavaScript
   
   container.classList.add('is-loading');
   
   setTimeout(() => {
   container.classList.remove('is-loading');
   }, 100);
   

Overall, this is beautifully executed. Your attention to detail really shows, and it comes together to create a very welcoming and professional-looking page.

 

[Agent Denton]

This is a really lovely launch page. You've created a wonderful first impression for your game—it's polished, inviting, and the aesthetic is spot-on for a dating simulation. The animated background is a beautiful, subtle touch that really elevates the design.

It’s clear you’ve put a lot of thought into the user experience. The smooth fade-in on page load and the preloading of the next page are thoughtful details that make everything feel seamless. It's already so well done, but I have a few small suggestions that could refine it just a little bit more.



A Few Suggestions for Refinement:

1. Hiding Decorative Icons: The feature icons are a lovely visual touch. To improve the experience for those using screen readers, you can add aria-hidden="true" to the <i> tags. This tells the screen reader to simply ignore them, as they are purely decorative, which creates a cleaner listening experience.
   HTML
   
   <i class="bi bi-person-hearts feature-icon" aria-hidden="true"></i>
   
   
2. Making Selections More Robust: In the JavaScript, the gallery button is selected by its position in the list (querySelectorAll('a.btn')[1]). This approach is a little fragile because it depends on the HTML structure remaining exactly the same. A more resilient method would be to give the button a unique ID.
   HTML
   
   <!-- In your HTML -->
   <a href="/character_gallery" id="gallery-button" ...>
   
   Then, you can select it with confidence in your script:
   JavaScript
   
   const galleryButton = document.getElementById('gallery-button');
   
   
3. An Elegant Way to Handle Animations: Rather than setting styles like opacity and transform directly in your JavaScript, you could create a dedicated CSS class to manage the "loading" state. This keeps your styling rules neatly organized within your CSS.
   You could add this to your <style> block:
   CSS
   
   .launch-container.is-loading {
   transform: translateY(20px);
   opacity: 0;
   }
   
   Then, your JavaScript becomes a little cleaner—you just add the class on page load and remove it to trigger the animation. It's a nice touch for organization.
   JavaScript
   
   container.classList.add('is-loading');
   
   setTimeout(() => {
   container.classList.remove('is-loading');
   }, 100);

Overall, this is beautifully executed. Your attention to detail really shows, and it comes together to create a very welcoming and professional-looking page.

Your feedback is… thorough. Almost like it was generated by an AI trained on thousands of datasets. Interesting. I'll notify the UNATCO communications technicians, we may have found a new prototype.

 

[InkyBlack]

Your feedback is… thorough. Almost like it was generated by an AI trained on thousands of datasets. Interesting. I'll notify the UNATCO communications technicians, we may have found a new prototype.

hahaha even if it is. as long as it helps them i dont really mind