VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Bare Witness [Steam Build] [AlterWorlds]

ok, i had this game on my watchlist for a while and i thought today is a good time to start a run.
I have to say what I've seen / played so far was very pleasant.
likeable girls/milfs, MC is ok so far and story could be interesting in the further course.
there were grammatical slips here and there, but not that bad.
a little work on the transisitions between scenes couldn't hurt.
just a few little things that will definitely improve over time(i hope) and it can turn out to be a really good game.
thumbs up so far

This game is excellent, it really is. First of all, it looks great, the renders are gorgeous and the cast of potential LIs is packed with stunning women. It's also one of the better written VNs I've played, and the LIs feel like distinct and consistent characters. The game gives you some freedom to pursue multiple LIs, though certain routes will eventually force you to make choices. There are definitely ways to get multiple LIs without the guilt of cheating though, which I appreciate. The sex scenes look good and are animated, but even so they didn't do a ton for me. I kind of saw this more like an unconventional love story than any kind of porn, and really enjoyed it.

Game is very good. Great models, Interesting story. Only things personally I didn't liked, it was MC swearing in every two sentence. it feels very amateurish and mood killer. And he also gives very Beta & Cuck Vibe. Its as if all masculinity was drained from him.. Dude needs get some spine and act like man and not like "Fuck Yo slayy queen, "Insert Soyjak meme"".. I hope they will fix that but doubt it

I am genuinely surprised how awesome this game is, interesting story, with an intriguing plot & the characters are layered too, which is rare for a graphic novel, I will no doubt be contributing to this game on Patreon I want to see how this story plays out, the choices you make ACTUALLY matter in this game & you genuinely care for some characters more than others, hell even the Protagonist is likable & that is even rarer lol

How do I begin to talk about this excellent game... Let me preface this where I started playing tonight and was in a running commentary on Discord with the devs while I was playing it. THAT's how responsive they are! The renders are top notch, Heidi is, for anyone with a modicum of taste the best girl out there rivaling such gems as Melody, Avalon, Alexandra. The writing is well done and has a coherent plot. There are some twists I won't spoil for you. The Devs even had me fall for characters I wasn't initially attracted to based on looks, but the writing made the personalities shine through. If you do try it remember a HAM sandwich is great food! For those who are idiots that means: Heidi, Athena, Mora. Figure the rest out yourselves. This game rivals the great ones IMO Once in a Lifetime, LLTP, MBIML, Now and Then. I am left waiting with baited breath the next update and am an unabashed fanboy.

Great game! The characters feel very real. There's a lot of diversity in here from backstories, personalities, and bodies. If you're a fan of pretty girls, then why aren't you already playing? All of the girls are great to get to know, but I personally recommend Mora.

Monty Python and Firefly references?! I'm in!

Starting at the 2.2 update, how did I miss this one before? So far, turning out to be a very good story. Relationships and intimate encounters are moving a little faster than would be preferable, sometimes feeling rushed, but that isn't exactly a bad thing. Decent range of female characters, from young to cougar, from geeky to vixen, from petite to athletic - you get the point. Renders are great, and animations are above average. Looking forward to seeing this VN through.

Played this yesterday and absolutely fell in love with it. Especially Mora and Val. All of the girls are great and unique in their own way, but something about Val is very intriguing and Mora just seems so nice and innocent. The story is great so far, has some mystery to it and I can't wait to see where the witsec storyline takes us. Writing is terrific, renders are beautiful, and the sex scenes are wonderfully done. The animations could be a bit better, but still decent none the less. Theirs also a decent amount of content for 2 releases. Bravo Storm and Slockie

A refreshing VN
Very nice looking girls, lots of different morphotypes, and not straight out of the box. You can tell there are some hours of work on them.
Good renders
The plot is nice. Not the classical "landlady", too bad for the incest fans, although there is a cousin around.
Relationships in between MC and the girls are plausible and on a easygoing "friends with benefits" spirit.
And there is already a lot of contend, with very decent sex scenes, with just 2 releases as I'm writing.
Definitively worth a try

talented, brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique and I simply love it.

Valeria and Athena are such amazing characters, they both got their charm that make them irresistable. and when you play through the gameI'm sure youll feel the same as me

So far it´s kind of interesting, but not interesting enough. You dont get much story action, but i guess there are a couple of fanservice sex scenes out there that i rejected cause i really dont care about this meaningless sex, when i can clic "live sex cams" on the top of the screen and go to stripchat and have more options and quality.

The word that describes the game is average, and short, i think im being generous giving it 3 stars really, with the amont of content in chapter 2 so far there is nothing remnarkable to make it reach the average mark, so im putting some expectations into the rating.

Sex scenes are nothing fancy, average, short, and barely satisfying.

Great game guys. Outstanding Script and English 5/5, beautiful renders/artwork 5/5, nice animations 5/5. I like that the script is actually telling a story, rather than just being filler between sex scenes. One of the best virtual novels I have seen. Looking forward to your next update. Good luck

The reasons to love this game:

• Really beautiful girls.
• Inspiring sex scenes.
• Good renders.
• Nice music.
• Sweet story. (However the story is simple; some would say “porn-driven”. It's not bad though.)
• You choose to date or not to date this or that girl via direct choices (not some cryptic hidden conditions). Though there are hidden love points, it is very obvious how to get them.

Con:

• The developers don't plan to make it a long story.
• It's disappointing that a shy nice girl enjoys watching "Dexter" (really?) with her almost boyfriend. It's a shitty show, full of blood, dismemberment and cruelty. Unless you like all that, the scenario is mostly boring and ridiculous (only 3rd & 5th seasons are generally a bit better).

[Ch. 2a]

Excellent writing, music and character models. The characters feel real and relateable, the scenarios plausible if slightly fantastical. The plot flows smoothly and hints at being more than just your average harem fuck fest. Up there with the best of F95's visual novels. Can't wait to see where this takes us!

Great game. Loved the second update which had a lot of content. Definitely worth the wait. The girls look good, have fun characters and the lewd scenes are really good. The game is fast paced, so won't leave you hanging, which in my opinion is a good thing.

Played v0.2 and this on catched me off guard, being surprisingly good.
There is a fair amount of content considering the development time.

The Characters are well written, interesting and different in character and appearance.
The biggest selling point for me however are the sexscenes. After playing a fair amount of games on here, there arent many anymore, that really get me. The few secenes in this game at the moment, have imo the right length, spiciness and set up and one in particular i would count to the best on this site.
The only downside i could see in future updates is the relatively fast development with certain characters.

Tldr: Overall at the moment the game is right for you, if you are down to immerse yourself for a short time in a lighthearted story with well written charaters and if it keeps up the quality in 2-3 versions its probably a must play. Cheers

what a great update. girs and writing is looking great. i like all of them so its hard to choose, but valeria and heidi have to be my favorites. I really like how the story is progressing, the sense of mystery really adds to it. A good amount of content for only 2 chapters. Looking forward to the next one!

I was surprised to see Mira here from three rules of life, lol. Now it is obvious that Mira has many badass friends around her.

The game is okay, emo girl looks fine but I'm not really into threesome with lesbian so I'll pass on that one. Other characters are quite unique in appearance but with lack of personalities.

really nice looking game with an interesting premise and some well written characters. Introduced a lot of characters in the 1st chapter and not all were developed as deeply as the roommates, but I'm sure that will be remedied moving forward. Looking forward to seeing where this goes

Full disclosure - I am a long time friend of Slockie (one of the devs) and when he told me he made a porn game I couldn't believe it, I thought he was kidding. I kinda made fun of him for a bit, but when I actually sat down and played it I was amazed. I didn't think a porn game could be as captivating as it is,. The storytelling from the other dev (Storm, I think it is) is really really good. The writing is phenomenal and the pictures look really good. The girls (especially Mora and Zenda) are super cute. I like the fact that it's essentially a choose your own adventure novel, meaning that the choices you make actually have consequences. The music was really good and worked well with what was happening in the story. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds in the future, and hope we can get some more backstory with the MC and why he's in the situation he's in. Bravo Slockie and Storm.