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VN Ren'Py Bargain of Power [Ch.1 v0.1] [Celestial Being]

Celes Being

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Idk dude. Story seems interesting af, but that shit pretty much always bleeds over. Are the other guys all gonna be bigger and better at fucking like most of these "optional" games. Will those scenes kill immersion and character consistency?
It will be a path of its own. Your choice, of course. And on that path, it will affect the plot in a way that will be interesting. So, no, it won't be like the boring NTR you see every day. You'll see when the game reaches that point.
 

Allenebs

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Not a fan of the models. The hips and breasts literally look bolted on. I'm not a fan of the look in general, but these chicks are blown the fuck out and angular where there should be smooth curves. These chicks are also going to all weigh 50% more than all the dudes bc you were so focused on making the chicks "assets" larger, you forgot to scale the male characters. People are mocking the MC, but all these dudes are undersized compared to these massively blown out female character models. Across all spectrums, men are on average 6" taller and 35lbs heavier. That said, good luck.
 
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JabyShrek988

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NTR path and having multiple non-canonical NTR endings are two different things.
For me, having optional NTRs in a harem game is better than just a simple Harem storyline.
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Unless you have super cool and unique storyline.
Optional NTR make these games more interesting and more like a game with a win/loss results.
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All the best dev!!! Hope you can turn this hobby into something profitable. Love and respect!
 

Canto Forte

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There is the crux of it all: do we want to cheer on the bulls, who are bullying MC out of his own game?
Do we think it is a good look and one exciting win for gaming to have the wet noodle, sticks and stone, bleedingheart of our MC, who is portrayed as coming out of a huge trauma, get shit piled on him and do we want to cheer that in this game?
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Because evil/bull/bully story of crushing MC when he is already down in the dirt and discarded, this is a lazy writing gimmick, the low hanging fruit of kicking a dead horse: not a good look wherever you see it - in movies, novels, plays or in games.
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Already here, not in the future, not optional, something to fight for with each and every other person in this game. Fight to save your humanity ... while being down and bleeding .. wonderful construct indeed.
The problem with avoidable NTR is very simple
 
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Xxrizz

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Too bad it will have Ntr for an Mc that wants to improve i guess he won't improve much with the pesky Ntr in it ....kinda boring :LUL:
 
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Ursus4321

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The problem with avoidable NTR is very simple. It lets you know that some or all of the people in the relationship aren't trustworthy. Imagine you have a girlfriend and you know that if you let her go on a night out with friends, she'll cheat on you, for example. Or that if you don't pick her up after work, she'll hook up with her coworker. Or if she goes to the gym alone, she'll have sex with the trainer. Is that a girlfriend worth it? The deception is within her, and you shouldn't base your relationship on keeping her under control. A premise of a healthy relationship is trust. In optional NTR, this trust is questioned in one way or another, and that's what makes some players who don't like NTR not play with optional NTR either. It lets you know that this person isn't trustworthy.
 

Canto Forte

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This is what is coming and MC is the weakest bottom feeder in this game: Blackmail, Creampie, Groping, Group Sex, Humiliation
all those future tags and yet no harem.
You barely have anybody - just a woman by your side and the very first choice is either letting the scripted Hard NTR in the game take her away from you, or say something.
 
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