VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Bastard Girls [v0.1.5-2] [Leocid2]

pros:
- interesting idea
- renders is ok
cons:
- bugged like hell (ver 0.1.5-2)
- eng translation is unacceptable
- mansion navigation may cause madness (rly, what sort of drugs author used to create this navigation?) . simple- mansion is unplayable.
- many minor things- no acces to "options" from game (u cnt change sound value etc)
- besides game bugs, exist some critical bugs (like random scene in school cafeteria).

conclusion : if dev fix at least half "cons" - game ll got 4 (or more) stars.

Gave it an extra star because the character models and animations are pretty solid. But the end of the day both the story and the english....is just so god awful bad. I mean like worst translated and biggest mess that is literally impossible to follow of a script I've seen in any game I've played on this site, and I've played some bad ones.

If you are looking for anything other then a few solid scenes between some fairly notably grind periods...this "game" should be getting a hard pass in favor of just going to watch some porn clips.

the is story bad unreasonable , the navigation makes it hard to play some other elements could use better coding and less bugs, the character models are disproportionate and the translation looks like its coming from some machine translation or other

i like the game, is a bit grindy that is common in every sandbox nsfw game, have really good renders, gorgeous animations and girls, a lot of sex scenes, a story so much better and original than the every incest,corruption,mind control game, a really tasty sex dialogs(are so latin like), good music(from soft to heavy metal), but the only bad thing for me is the navigation sistem so confusing i literally get lost every day in the masion.

pd: the best outfits ever

7/10 game
-1 for the grind and don't know how exactly so much you have to grind
-2 navigation sistem

Yes, this game has some bugs and the navigation to other rooms/places is way too complicated and frustrating.

BUT:
The girls and the animations are hot as hell.
Although i don't like harem games, this one is special!
The Dev really knows how the make the scenes sexy and kinky. And all girls are some kind of slutty, but in a good way. I don't know how to explain it, but it's some kind of realistic and just feels right.

I really love it when the girls pretend to be "good", but in the end they scream for more.

Another thing i really enjoyed (and what most other games lack of) is the fact that the girls get jealous. It makes the whole story way more entertaining if you see them arguing with each other because of you.


I'm really looking forward to new updates!
Keep the good work up, Leocid!

This is an alright game so far. There is still the language barrier between spanish and english and there seems to be a few bugs still. Also the story does not glide through like a normal story. It's a little choppy and without cheats, would be a headache to play.

Wow. What an awefull "game". Horrible navigation, nothing to do. action icons you have to guess what they are for. A "story" thats stupid as hell - but thats not a real problem, just for me its a downside. And an not understandable "translation". Then you add some bugs and a lot of grind to it and you get this.

Maybe with someone who translates it at least on a school level of englisch and a lot of polish (improved UI and navigation) this can become a quite good game, but in its current form its not really enjoyable or entertaining.

[Rev v0.1.3] Hoooo boy.
I think this is a rough draft in game form. Like pre-alpha.

The art's okay. Effort went into it, and some girls are pretty nice looking if 'idealized'. Some are just silly-looking experiments in seeing how far various proportion sliders go.

All the practice with shitty machine translations of Japanese games must be paying off; I think I got an alright grasp of the plot even without being able to understand the many times the Ren'py translator just gave up.

The execution bogs this game down; there're tons of logic errors, several syntax errors, a persistent issue with really obtuse progression requirements, less than zero tutorialization/hinting (meaning the game dialog itself will mislead you, and not in the clever writing red herring way.), and some known UI and quest bugs that have persisted through updates.

And the dialog. Wooooo. Ya know that scene in Spaceballs where he's playing with his dolls? That. I have a pretty active imagination; characters in many games will just give themselves a voice in my head. In this all those voices were the same mid-30s basement dweller rubbing dollies together squealing "pregnant me!!!".

Surprisingly, nothing squicked me. Maybe it's cultural, but I for one am glad we avoided the usual Russian devs' zeroing in on anal like it's the holy grail of sex. Would like more girl/girl interplay and actual preg content, once the major glaring issues with the code get sorted.

TLDR: I can't hate this game, but it needs LOTS of work.

First off, I love this game, even though there are some pretty big issues, the game is awesome and totally addictive. I can't give it five stars though because of the issues. The english translation really needs work, especially in reference to gender. He's and she's are totally mixed up. I believe some of the game play is also affected by the bad translation, it is hard to figure out sometimes if you are getting points or losing points, or don't have enough points.

The game itself is huge and there are lots of things to do, but there are problems with triggering the right events and things that affect game play, but you don't know about them. For instance, spoiler, you need to have Miranda before you get Elena, in order to have a really good relationship with Elena, but you have no way of knowing that. The mansion is just completely messed up, I think the developer was trying to convey the sense about the size of the mansion but it ends up being just a frustrating area.

This is a work in progress though and it is just an amazing game as far as I am concerned. My fear for the developer is that it will end up being too big to continue with and enough errors will crop up to just make it a big mess before it can be finished.

Terrible English translation, you can't get any hints or what the story is cause you can't understand anything. There are like 10 complete understandable sentences in the entire 2.9gb game.

Due to the above you have a hard time to do anything without a walktrough because you don't understand anything that's going on.

Crashes often, and the grind is high, 0 explanation or clues on what you do, and if there are any they are in Spanish or Spanglish

The game is really amazing and nice. The models of girls is perfect and the story is just awesome. Every time I just cant wait for new update and this maybe one big minus of this game. Because the author of the game not saying the dates of new releases of this game.

I like the game's character models and I don't mind the story being a bit exaggerated. The characters themselves sell the game to me and it actively gives new content every 1~3 months. Which is like 20~40 mins of content but adding replay-ability it'll be awhile. I enjoy this game for what it is and its a fun although it takes the story too seriously.

I have played this too , here is what I think

Great Renders
Many many girl

Now the bad :

No clue what to do.
Stats do not give jack shit info about the girl
A quest log would be helpfull
Also when you done talking to a girl.. Do not end the scene with a notion "you need more effection" Let us try different options , not only one > makes the grind less irritating
Point Above : Makes us able to visit scenes more then once . This is very irritating that you have to wait one full dat to talk to a girl again.
Also have more different options then just peek at a girl and let her buzz you off.. I have used the cheats to get effection , still every girl kicks me out.
There is a bug in the temple.. When I hover over a guardian the game crashes with a missing error
At the current state of the game.. I would not play it again. The storyline doesnot help one bit and the actions are to much grinding.

So would love that you could fix that

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.0.8...

Originally Reviewed on 12/03/2017

Extremely poor English translation, as it looks like someone just googled the Spanish and cut/paste without interpreting the actual intended meaning and changing it to make more sense... It majorly detracts from the story and IMO makes the game very difficult to understand and play properly... Even the Title sounds like a poor translation...

Add to this the very unrealistic boob sizes for some of the female characters... They in no way shape or form belong on the body types of the characters that have them, which also detracts from the story, making the characters unbelievable... It must be a cultural thing, because in some cases it was borderline (which is somewhat believable) while for others it was just insane, with the sizes...

I know someone made a somewhat better English translation patch, but with the other flaws I just can't see myself continuing this game/visual novel... Especially if patches continue, requiring a volunteer to re-interpret the English translations to keep them up to date and making sense... I shouldn't have to read a line multiple times, on occasion, just to get the real intended meaning of the authors... Add to the translation issues, how rapid the story goes, which makes it all even more confusing...

I wish the authors luck, and I'm sure the Spanish version probably makes more sense and is more culturally in line with the visuals...

Very good girl and sexys pls footjob and yoga pant scanes thx Why 200 character limited why 200 İs so more and not complated my english hmmmm more? okey more But dont stoped eror mesage 200

I love this game the characters are nice and sexy my maid is the best she is a vary loving maid and the plots are great the cematary was a great touch and of course all ghosts have huge tits and and the caretaker is more like my sofie the only thing i dont like is some of the girls have enormis tits and i dont know how there walking with them looks like they should fall over

tiene buenas modelos, bien tetonas, y tiene varios personajes,
hay misiones para poder acceder y juntar dinero
tiene una jugabilidad moderada, le falta un a guia de recorrido, pero esta bueno, espero que lo actualicen

Righty, first off, I am not going to be.. "icky" like that bloke that tallies how often he jerked off to a game.. Frankly I dont care about him pulling on his spring, his fetishes are likely different from mine, + I dont need to know, too much info.

Second of all, I dont like this game.. It seems like the guy who made it was playing around with the Daz engine and ended up with a tonne of pictures, and decided to make a game around the pictures, rather than a story, the English is horrible, even worse than The New Life from Beggar_Of_Net at least in that game you get used to it and its understandable, in this game it honestly seems like he thought Google Translate would be too good a tool to use, because I swear, if he used Google Translate, it would be more coherent.

The game is buggy as hell, theres no real objective or quest to push you forward, theres no stats to get up or anything like that, you just move around from picture to picture, clicking all over the place, hoping to find one of the buttons on in the picture that moves you to a new area until a swarm of girls surround you and you get taken home. More than once I've clicked on a button clearly meant to serve some function, only to quit out to the main menu, not only that, the buttons arent highlighted at all, only in a few rooms will the dev give you a button with a door on it to show you "This is the way to go" rest of the time? Naaah, click away until you find a spot on the picture that highlights, theres no rime or reason to how the doors work either.

So, that was a bit of a mouthful to swallow, and likely didnt make much sense in my rantyness, but I'm not done.

Sometimes you click a button you've clicked a hundred times before, only for the game language to switch from English to Spanish.. and the only way to turn it back is by scrolling your mouse wheel up until you find the conversation choice that switched it..

Okay, onto the "story".. Theres not much of one.. Something about your dad being the master, but hes gone, so you gotta be the master now, then you get a maid, then suddenly an action scene happens with 3 other maids coming to attack your maid.. But dont worry! The maids dont want to hurt you, they just want to fuck you as well.. And speaking of fucking(Horrible segway, I know). Theres random fucking sex everywhere.. You go outside, suddenly a girl is mastubating, no suddenly its TWO girls mastubating, then its suddenly two different girls mastubating, its so fucking weird and it comes out of the blue, the CG is decent, but the dev just throws the pictures at you like he has no idea how to build up any sort of excitement. Like a girl giving her first handjob by smacking your dick around (And yes, I know someone is into that, but just imagine she smacks it around with a pillow then. My point is, its not sexy).

Right, I am going to end this here with one last thing before my head explode; As I've said before, theres no direction in this game.. Like, you click stuff and find out stuff, I saw you could buy items. Great! I thought, maybe I can get a job.. I werent sure because the headmaster tells you to study and you promise her to do it.. However theres no way to study.. But this time, you could actually work.. Except it does not work, the job gives you no money.. Basically making it impossible to move on in the quest..

This game is thoroughly amateurish and it tries to make up for it by throwing pictures everywhere with its fingers in its ears going "lalalalala"