VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Bathroom Therapy [v1.0 Fix + Extra] [VoidGodAVNs]

I liked the twink he looks cute and hot, the MC has a weird face and his hair doesn´t look good.

The dialogue is written okay but there needs to be a background behind the text so it is easier to read, and the choices needed another color too they are unreadable except you hover over them, instead of white the boxes should have been grey or black.

The sex scenes had good enough animations, but the cock of the twink should have been made whiter it just looks weird.

And the music is bad.

It's exactly what it says it is; a quick self-contained vertical slice of two gay guys fucking in the bath, nothing more.

It's a sloppy production; the player character is called 'X' for no real reason rather than having a fixed name or allowing you to choose one, there's no text box so the text often blends into the background, making it hard to see, there's exactly one choice (which is also hard to see against the background) and while the script isn't too bad with its relatively naturalistic dialogue, there are a lot of typos and bad punctuation. I'm also not fussed on the heavy-handed use of samples of licensed music ('Aerials' by System of a Down, really?).

But for a game you play through in 5 minutes, it gives you exactly what you came for- a cute trap (who still actually looks like a pretty GUY, not a literal female Koikatsu character model with the tits turned down and a cock stuck on) who lets you (optionally) eat their ass before they suck and ride your cock. So as long as you're not expecting any more, that's what you'll get. And it's admittedly pretty hot. Keep expectations low and you should be only slightly disappointed at worst.