Im not gicing 1 satr cause it is not that bad, but the writing is terrible. The husband is either blind, or sleepy or drunk.
The Male protagonist has 1 half of an eye cause anyone with his peripheral vision working can see a guy who is at 2 feet distance sticking his dick in his wifes mouth and there are so many of these "I cant see from here" moments that my teeth are eroded from cringe.
And then you have the sex ninjas that appear, put their penises inside the girl, cum in 3 seconds and go unnoticed. It is not well written, it sucks pretty much.
And then all the times the MC explains the NTR kink to us with "im feeling something in my stomach"+ "im having an erection". I dont need you to explain me what it is, i need you to explain what you do about it and why, not repeating over and over the same thing without actually making any decisions about it.
And that's pretty much it, well the sounds are also cringefest.
So, why the 2 stars? Cause soon it turns into a silly and repetitive fuckfest and characters are not that interesting, and besides some renders being interesting, in my opinion the rest is boring.
The Male protagonist has 1 half of an eye cause anyone with his peripheral vision working can see a guy who is at 2 feet distance sticking his dick in his wifes mouth and there are so many of these "I cant see from here" moments that my teeth are eroded from cringe.
And then you have the sex ninjas that appear, put their penises inside the girl, cum in 3 seconds and go unnoticed. It is not well written, it sucks pretty much.
And then all the times the MC explains the NTR kink to us with "im feeling something in my stomach"+ "im having an erection". I dont need you to explain me what it is, i need you to explain what you do about it and why, not repeating over and over the same thing without actually making any decisions about it.
And that's pretty much it, well the sounds are also cringefest.
So, why the 2 stars? Cause soon it turns into a silly and repetitive fuckfest and characters are not that interesting, and besides some renders being interesting, in my opinion the rest is boring.