Buddy! Talk about packing up the taste buds for a weekend trip to smut-town.....cuz nice writing and lesbos make my pp go brrrrr........
Pros:
I cannot express to you how happy this makes me. Hope you give this a go.
Pros:
- Amazing writing! Current piece is <20minutes but I am already so immersed. That's fcking talent!
- Amazing renders and scene setting. Very immersive like the small sounds, or eye blinking or facial expressions.
- Amazing humor and playing the awkwardness in parties lol
- MC is normal like not a hormonally deranged fck everything that moves kinda MC. Actually acts human adding to immersion. Body shape is also believable.
- Fun side characters. No sex yet (almost) but dude trust me sex will be second thing in your mind cuz the piece is so well written.
- I have no constructive criticism as it stands. If this piece finishes like a short story I wouldn't be mad whatsoever. The amount of effort in first release is showing and I would hope dev values quality over anything cuz they have very good skills and understanding.
I cannot express to you how happy this makes me. Hope you give this a go.