Looks great (aside from a lot of noise in the renders that is most visible in the depth of field effects), but commits the cardinal sin of being incredibly boring.
Dialogue is good, but there's no hook to the plot. An aimless protagonist who is wishy-washy and over-delicate is one I would tend to avoid. This is fine for a secondary character, but it makes it incredibly hard to get into when it is the one who is supposed to be driving the action.
Oh, and the transitions are really jarring. It is really uncomfortable to change scenes abruptly with a straight cut, and this happens multiple times. The framing also causes a problem with the transitions, because some camera changes feel jerky because the composition doesn't complement the one before it. You need to hide this with softer transitions, or be more cognizant of what angles can be cut between without giving the viewer a headache.
My personal score is two, but it would be unfair to give it that given how nice the VN looks, and how crisp and readable the dialogue is. So three it is.
This could have the chops to be good, but the reviews here are a little overhyped. There's a lot of room for improvement.
Dialogue is good, but there's no hook to the plot. An aimless protagonist who is wishy-washy and over-delicate is one I would tend to avoid. This is fine for a secondary character, but it makes it incredibly hard to get into when it is the one who is supposed to be driving the action.
Oh, and the transitions are really jarring. It is really uncomfortable to change scenes abruptly with a straight cut, and this happens multiple times. The framing also causes a problem with the transitions, because some camera changes feel jerky because the composition doesn't complement the one before it. You need to hide this with softer transitions, or be more cognizant of what angles can be cut between without giving the viewer a headache.
My personal score is two, but it would be unfair to give it that given how nice the VN looks, and how crisp and readable the dialogue is. So three it is.
This could have the chops to be good, but the reviews here are a little overhyped. There's a lot of room for improvement.