A pretty short story. The English was passable although some parts felt blunt/abrupt in terms of transition. Conceptually, the story had a lot of potential to go somewhere but ultimately felt like it ended before it really started (or even just way too rushed). That being said, there is technically a beginning, middle, and end so if you're looking for a quick something to pass the time, go for it. Nothing here to really dive into as it's pretty light and easy to get to endings.
100% could be better but hey, you can always delete it if it's not up to your expectations.