Feels like it's got some solid potential but is a bit jumbled at the moment.
So I like a lot of what's in there, the renders are solid and the models largely attractive and whatnot... but there are some oddities and that's what I'll focus on here, but I was into the game the following are why I've given it a 4 rather than a 5, I'm not saying it's a bad game by any stretch.
So the pacing is pretty lightspeed ... a super conservative girlfriend, and then pretty instantly gets slutty (this makes sense on the "lust" path to some degree given the supernatural stuff, but not on the "love" one)... or at one point she has a nightmare, and then instantly jumps to it being a haunted house and moves out - I mean maybe if you knew you were in a game or movie that'd be a rational response, but I it'd take a lot to convince me my house was actually possessed... or how your girl is supposed to come from a traditional background, which is why she's so repressed, but then on the first introduction of the mother and she's dressed crazily slutty for the party, the excuse of her thinking it'd be like something off the TV didn't really sell it.
Mainly my problem is that the way through the different paths just feels jumbled, I can't describe it better ... I think it needs a bit more padding and to be clearer and things, it's really hard to diagnose but it just doesn't hit you quite right as you're playing through.
I presume some moments are due to it being unfinished - like when the narrator tells me the next thing is an important choice so to save, but then the next decision there's only one item to pick (what if I just want to let the friend be in the pool and attend to my girlfriend) or maybe he meant the bit after that as that immediately leads into another decision and that one does change stuff up... and I think the 2 choices there are respond calmly or respond angrily - which doesn't really give you an indication that you're going to kiss the girl and choose her over your fiance... love is supposed to be them into you, lust them into others, but even with no love and her heavily into lust then your friend will pick you...
Also the sort of introduction conversation with the narrator is a bit cheesy.
Oh and it ended before I expected because this is chapter 5, at one point there's a screen telling you that you've started chapter 2, but I didn't see one from chapter 3, 4 or 5, haha ... I guess it's just update numbers but maybe remove the screen for chapter 2 then.
Down one route she can choose an old or young bartender ... turns out the young one has content the old one doesn't (I didn't realise until I looked at the walkthrough after a handful of playthroughs to see if I'd missed any of the different stuff) - it's not a big deal which dude it is so maybe save the effort having to make 2 versions of all that.
One concern of mine is that to really flesh out the story after where things are left off in the current content is going to be such a crazy amount of work as things can go down a ton of haywire paths, that it'll either take forever or need to be simplified and rushed... I do really like that there's so many paths though.
Buuuut, like I said most stuff here is solid and I'm very interested in the game, it just feels like it need to be ironed out a little (and I'm talking about the content that's in there atm) and then once that's built upon it could be really cool ... I'm interested to see how the supernatural stuff plays out, or how the fiance's friend will try to manipulate stuff later... but I did really enjoy it so I'll definitely check back in later and hope it's completed.