Ren'Py - Become French [v0.4 Beta] [TheFrenchBaguette]

Become French aims to be an interactive VN which gives the player choices. Unfortunately, it falls flat with linear paths, forced waiting, and a clunky UI. Where similar VNs offer a room/map UI, this one makes you click room to room. Completely respectable that the developer speaks English as a second language, the game direly needs a translation partner as pronouns are mixed and sentence structure is rough. I think a few tweaks of this game can go a long way and I hope to see the dev really step it up in their next releases. Unfortunately v0.4 wasn't ready for release.

There is no flow to the game at all. You have no idea of what to do, you can only go around and maybe get lucky enough to see something to click on to get a scene. The game in it's current state would be a first start alpha release at best. Get the game a little better developed before you post it.

Short summary:


Skip this game.

Play only if you enjoy the phenomenal dialogues, like:
“Let’s go to the kitchen. Follow me” “We follow you” ”This is the kitchen” z
and
”Tell me about yourselves, you seem to be a real little family”



Good Things

• One of the girls is pretty hot (mostly stock model)

Bad points

• environments, light, everything is low quality
• story is stupid
• terrible writing
• horrible sandbox implementation
• essentially nothing to do