I'm not going to leave a proper review, so this won't impact the rating and you can fix things, but in its current state I can see me coming back to play so I wouldn't be amending my review.
Its grind for grind sake, there is no feeling of accomplishing anything.
The videos are way to long and of poor quality
Only being able to talk to each girl once a day is again unnecessary grind, there needs to be a limit on interactions but if I want to concentrate on a girl let me. There appears to be some sort of time mechanic in the game so use that as the limiter
Its just not fun at the moment
You can have open world and still have a bit of story element. There have been 3 or 4 HTML real image games launched in the past few weeks that are all starting with a basic open world and a bit of story. They have mostly been well received. There isn't a lot of positivity going down in this thread, so listen to what people are saying they want. T
he unique element you have is a male protagonist so build a story around that, Who is he, whats his background, users can choose this and influence there starting stats etc. ITs basic but it helps put the player in the protagonists shoes
There are a ton of basic bugs, but is a first release so thats okay and you appear to be fixing them as we speak. If you want to avoid people being overly negative about a few bugs find some play testers. I found 4 or 5 bugs within 2 minutes of playing.
At the moment I'd be giving it a 1 out 5
Its grind for grind sake, there is no feeling of accomplishing anything.
The videos are way to long and of poor quality
Only being able to talk to each girl once a day is again unnecessary grind, there needs to be a limit on interactions but if I want to concentrate on a girl let me. There appears to be some sort of time mechanic in the game so use that as the limiter
Its just not fun at the moment
You can have open world and still have a bit of story element. There have been 3 or 4 HTML real image games launched in the past few weeks that are all starting with a basic open world and a bit of story. They have mostly been well received. There isn't a lot of positivity going down in this thread, so listen to what people are saying they want. T
he unique element you have is a male protagonist so build a story around that, Who is he, whats his background, users can choose this and influence there starting stats etc. ITs basic but it helps put the player in the protagonists shoes
There are a ton of basic bugs, but is a first release so thats okay and you appear to be fixing them as we speak. If you want to avoid people being overly negative about a few bugs find some play testers. I found 4 or 5 bugs within 2 minutes of playing.
At the moment I'd be giving it a 1 out 5
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Ceci étant, si l'original était en français, pourquoi ne pas avoir laissé la possibilité de garder le texte en français ? ça peut aussi intéresser certaines personnes
So, if the original was in French, why didn't you keep a french version ? It may also interest some people.
So, if the original was in French, why didn't you keep a french version ? It may also interest some people.
I didn't mean to answer negativly, I'm just trying to understand what's going wrong for people and answering with my point of view (I might look rigid but I'm not).
Videos quality: the quality is poor because I did not want to make an huge game folder so people won't be afraid of downloading the game. I will publish an update folder with 480p videos which should be nicer to watch.
For the background story this is something planned for the next update (have a look at the trello link). Basically you will have to choose if you were: rich/poor - popular/invisible - intelligent/stupid - good/bad in sports. Giving or not giving you advantages to start the game and have a dynamic text appearing depending on your choices.
For the bugs it would be great if you could report them with a screenshot, I know it's not your job but it helps me a lot. My little brother (porn level: expert
) is my beta tester he is trying to report me all the bugs but sometimes like french language is not a bug for him because he used to play the game in French with the first versions.Even if your rating is negative it's a pleasure to get some feedback.
My little brother told me the same but doing localizations with twine is quite hard (or at least I find it hard) and long which means more time before each release. But if there is a high demand I could consider publishing it in French and in English.
Yes she will be added later, in a random gym event.
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Bugs I found...
I suppose going to classes should rais4e intelligence... it's not
going to library "study the whole day" does not advance time
training in the gym or swim in the morning does not advance time either
swimming does in the afternoon though
I suppose going to classes should rais4e intelligence... it's not
going to library "study the whole day" does not advance time
training in the gym or swim in the morning does not advance time either
swimming does in the afternoon though
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I have not finished downloading it yet, but I rather write it lest I forget, are the videos WEBM? Because, as much of an hassle it would be to have to convert them, you can save a lot in size, consider that is 1 GB now and you just released, so imagine in the future. WEBMs can surprisingly even be smaller and look better than most types of animated Gifs.
My recommendation would also be to look here at what the other games with "real porn" (that's the tag for the search you can use) are doing, for example my favourite is "A spell for all".
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-spell-for-all-v14-8-4-cmacleod42.571/
But that's one, I think the important thing is, you gotta ask yourself "I am using real porn, but this is a game, what can I do to make people play this instead of just watching stuff online?", a very important thing for example is to maintain a cohesive look and story, which mean make sure that characters don't change clothes every 5 seconds, of course that means, especially for long term characters building up a gigantic library of their materials for videos to cut and images to find, but at the same time, it means you can have lots of content for each girl, you don't have to render, pose, draw, ecc. Hopefully your game won't have a million stats and won't rely on grind or playing a perfect game.
EDIT: regarding videos again, you could to cut down on size but also to make the game more smooth, because after all a lot of people, used to VNs tend to be used to reading at their own pace, so having a long video might make it feel slow, so perhaps you could take some high quality screenshots, cut the videos into a series of moments where the action might be described in words.
Here is a quick webm conversion test that saved 2 Mb but I am sure that more could be done.
View attachment doubleblow0.webm
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I agree with above comment, others to look at would be the company by westane and Online girl by Rudeboyuk are another 2 examples I think you could look at to get some ideas.
Fixed these two but internet box died THE DAY I RELEASE MY GAME... will be moving up to my mother house tomorrow to upload the new html files because the technician won't be there before 5 PM. Thanks for the report.
Edit: box started working again will update the first post with v0.1 hotfix c in a few minutes
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The background system will be added to the game before the end of next week. It's going to be a small update I know but it seems that it will help some players to wait before I make more content/gameplay mechanics for the university since it seems that polls show that players are rather interested in me starting to make the farmer path.
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For the videos I will make the 480p version and see if I do not get a too big folder. I could reduce the weight of my folder if I only use gifs, do not propose to choose image weights (150 MB for each image folder) or only use one video for each action instead of getting multiple clips of the same sort (if you look into game files I have sometimes 4 blowjob clips for a scene, the game choose randomly one to choose when you play the scene).
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I used to translate mangas from english to french and we were using trello to organize our work, it's a great tool !
I might start writing a new path called "Slave owner", I need a few days to see if I can think about something decent. It's one of my problem I think, I have tons of idea but not enough time to realize everything and I'm sometimes stuck because twine engine does not allow me to do everything I want to do or at least I'm not talented enough to do it.
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@sasuke112
I love real porn games, and I'm very eager to play the rest of you game as you intended with the four paths and all, also because of Alison Tyler, that was on the pics at the OP, and I am very desapointed that I didn't see her in the game yet.
I would like to give you some feedback too: if you will do the game grindy at least let people cheat it, because It's annoying and this way the players have a choice. I like games more fluid, story driven, not clicking and pressing buttons all the time, to realy enjoy the game and my time, but I also recognize that are gamers that like to grind, so this way you can take care of both.
I would suggest you as a reference for you project "Realms Of Lust":
https://f95zone.to/threads/realms-of-lust-v0-4-1b-rmaximus.11792/
This game is the best that I've played so far, I don't like how I have to scroll down the screen because It's in HTML, I would prefer It was in Renpy, but the story caracters, models and stuff was very appealing to me.
There are many other games that I would suggest you NOT to follow, because they are too simple and grindy like:
https://f95zone.to/threads/enchanted-v0-1-2-9-nb-2-january-night.16117/
https://f95zone.to/threads/fetish-hotel-v0-4-1-purzelkraut.15049/
https://f95zone.to/threads/online-girl-v1-0a20-rudeboyuk.12630/
Etc...
I love real porn games, and I'm very eager to play the rest of you game as you intended with the four paths and all, also because of Alison Tyler, that was on the pics at the OP, and I am very desapointed that I didn't see her in the game yet.
I would like to give you some feedback too: if you will do the game grindy at least let people cheat it, because It's annoying and this way the players have a choice. I like games more fluid, story driven, not clicking and pressing buttons all the time, to realy enjoy the game and my time, but I also recognize that are gamers that like to grind, so this way you can take care of both.
I would suggest you as a reference for you project "Realms Of Lust":
https://f95zone.to/threads/realms-of-lust-v0-4-1b-rmaximus.11792/
This game is the best that I've played so far, I don't like how I have to scroll down the screen because It's in HTML, I would prefer It was in Renpy, but the story caracters, models and stuff was very appealing to me.
There are many other games that I would suggest you NOT to follow, because they are too simple and grindy like:
https://f95zone.to/threads/enchanted-v0-1-2-9-nb-2-january-night.16117/
https://f95zone.to/threads/fetish-hotel-v0-4-1-purzelkraut.15049/
https://f95zone.to/threads/online-girl-v1-0a20-rudeboyuk.12630/
Etc...