VN - Ren'Py - Better Future [v0.1] [Mr. MiBo]

Not a bad first step.

Pros:
- Models are ok with the renders being of good quality.
- MC is not some weak minded little f**k
- The story over all has some depth to it

Detractors / Opinions
- I feel the story had to much going on for the first chapter to get invested in the MC or the LI.
- Some of the people introduced had little to no back story
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Not a terrible first release. Decent length to the game play. I didn't hate it, but I am also having a hard time really liking it. I wish we had an intro to Lynn and Evelynn, they seem like they're going to be part of the story or at least significant to the MC, but I have no idea why.

Some of the early ground work for Mia could have been handled better, it is all kind of vague and comes across half hearted.

Dialog wasn't too bad, but could definitely use some polish.

Going to keep an eye on this one, GL with future releases.