VN Ren'Py Between Lines: Re [Ch.5 Public] [Soren]

[Zirenaz]

So let me see if I get this right. This is yet another AI-slop phone game without any noticeable content cash-grab. And just to have a bit of extra fun, it comes with an embedded trojan.

I'll pass

 

[S.SoreN]

The messaging function is absolutely dog shit The choice selection in msgs is only vital when u get to make a choice, not when u having a linear discussion The fact that u have to click on two separate tabs to engage in a conversation is so dragging
make the conversation fly naturally and only force the player to select smth when there are multiple choices to make (talking bout how msgs should work in a game was not on my bingo card for 2025)

Well, I know this might seem annoying, but this tab was made specifically to fix some bugs that were happening with the old message box.

 

[S.SoreN]

hahahah, now that's what we call telepathy, MC thinks it and his wife cheats on him at the same time, hahaha, how lucky MC, hahahah

Well... it's fiction, not a real story.

 

[S.SoreN]

So let me see if I get this right. This is yet another AI-slop phone game without any noticeable content cash-grab. And just to have a bit of extra fun, it comes with an embedded trojan.

I'll pass

Well... The only thing made with AI is the artwork. As for the image quality, I explained that in one of my posts. It's a shame you didn't like it, I tried to make the layout clean and added some small details inspired by other text-based apps.
About the trojan, it's just a false positive (I tested the game myself before uploading it).

 

[gpsywolf]

Its netori? Fucking pass.
NTR >>>>> NTS >>>>> dont even bother calling NTI a ntr game.

We will call it whatever the hell we want. I call it Netori >>>>> NTS >>>>> NTR. I guess we are on opposite sides of the spectrum. Don't worry i will take good care of your woman.

 

[EnTeeArrr]

We will call it whatever the hell we want. I call it Netori >>>>> NTS >>>>> NTR. I guess we are on opposite sides of the spectrum. Don't worry i will take good care of your woman.

Not in this game you wont, I and every player will also be taking care of said women. And that women are some npc's woman that I couldn't give two shits about

And thanks for calling it a Netori game, so you did exactly what I asked for NTR tag was also removed btw, so I'm thinking I was right.

 

[dan-1]

I liked the concept of the game better before it was changed.

 

[Valtra01]

Well, I know this might seem annoying, but this tab was made specifically to fix some bugs that were happening with the old message box.

Annoying! It is ruining the game. Having to click 3 times all over the screen for every line, then at least put the whole message into one. It´s like playing a stupid mini game the whole damn time.

 

[sanchotx]

way too much clicking

 

[S.SoreN]

way too much clicking

Annoying! It is ruining the game. Having to click 3 times all over the screen for every line, then at least put the whole message into one. It´s like playing a stupid mini game the whole damn time.

Okay, since a lot of people didn’t like the new message system, I’ll fix it and make it as simple as possible. Thanks for the suggestion.

 

[ironsmash]

+1 on the messaging dynamics and clicking like crazy, I cannot play it as it is.

 

[cloudstrife]

How are you supposed to move the text down during conversations? When Mikae is talking to Ryder the last line I can see is "It feels like he has no desire to satisfy me"

 

[cloudstrife]

The UI in this game is terrible

 

[~*Kuroi Kira*~]

The game doesn't work... as soon as I'm in the game and the first message is supposed to "write" nothing happens. no matter if enter, mouse click or whatever. there is only an error message at some point after you have tried out your entire keyboard

 

[torakun-1234]

+1

 

[balvenie1401]

That was a tough to get through, gave up about halfway.. worst implementation of texting I ever seen, can't imagine who thought it could possibly be a good idea to have forced double clicks for every text message and not even presenting options, wow...

 

[Master of Puppets]

Wait, so is this NTR or Netori? The description says "you find your wife cheating on you", but the comments seem to suggest it's actually Netori somehow?

 

[viper217]

Wait, so is this NTR or Netori? The description says "you find your wife cheating on you", but the comments seem to suggest it's actually Netori somehow?

Yes but game missing cheating tag, hmmm attention to detail fundamentals right there, doesn't fill me with confidence will wait to see if dev can tighten up the game implementation.

 

[cloudstrife]

The dialogue is so cringy, why are they all talking to eachother like they're rappers or gangstas?

 

[Asuka137x]

Ah. So basically MC has a cuck fetish. His wife's cheating on him. He finds out and encourages it.
I'm a fan of NTS but this leans a little too much on the NTR scale. (Also missing a cheating tag) I mean we even got the wife's perspective having a full blown affair, planning shit without the husband. Yeah, this is not for me. But good luck!