VN Ren'Py Between Us [v0.1.1] [Serpenthy]

[guyGas47]

It looks good so far

 

[Ozygator]

First of all, a soldier in the American armed forces, whether in training or just in camp, is always on constant alert, considering everything they do in the world, and here you are already wrong, then you made FMC write that the photographer reminds him of Mc but nicer, oh dear, this is more serious than everything FMC materially does, the lies and the sex compared to that sentence, it is harmful, a bunch of flowers and two compliments are enough, and you go to a fashion show in lingerie, I repeat, it is porn, but don't try to make a logical argument, write your game, but don't come and tell us that this girl is not a serial cheater, I repeat, porn and cheating are fine with us, but with logic, here you skipped 10 sections in two days, if you then make Mc write pissed off, you can't make him apologize afterwards like any idiot, this means you don't know the military, maybe you should coordinate the routes first, then determine them, but not you can make it so that there are only a few dialogue differences between the two paths, because these games are all about dialogue, which is the main substance

Yeah, any guy I knew when I was in the military would already have divorce papers ready and have that slut kicked out of housing/evicted if living off post, if this shit really went down. Don't get me wrong, it happens all the time, but most of the men I knew that had balls/courage and an ounce of self-respect wouldn't put up with a cheating slut as a partner.

 

[Ozygator]

It seems that this game's premise struck a nerve. Is it too close to home for you?

Why do you ask, are you someone who would be a cuck and just trying to understand how someone that doesn't think like a cuck, would react?

 

[laraislove]

Another win for mobile ntr enthusiast

 

[cloudshoutarou]

looks good!

 

[mahasambavam]

ntr ....good

 

[TonyMurray]

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Happy New Year - whether it’s just around the corner or already here!

I wanted to say a few words, now that, thanks to you, I actually have the chance to do so. This project started very recently, it hasn’t even been a week yet - which makes it all the more meaningful that you’re already here. There’s something symbolic about it happening right on the edge of a new year, as if it’s a chance for us to write the first lines on a clean slate together.
Thank you to everyone who subscribed, supported me, left a comment, or simply decided to give this project a chance. In just a few days, you’ve done more than I expected in the first month.

In the new year, this story has big plans ahead: character development, gradual escalation, moments of doubt, attraction, and choices that can no longer be undone. Thank you for stepping into this world with me from the very beginning.
The Update 0.2 is already in the works - and it’s only going to get more interesting.

Happy New Year ✨

 

[TonyMurray]

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I’d like to check whether there are people here who actually need additional translations, and whether it’s worth putting time into this for future updates.

Also, which languages would you like to see?

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Head to Patreon to see the poll and let dev know if it's worthwhile continuing with French, Spanish, Italian, and Russian translations. You also have the opportunity to say if there's a different language you'd like to request. Dev is also here, so I guess if you don't have a Patreon account you can probably make a request here instead (my assumption, not dev's instruction!).

You can download the new French, Italian, Spanish, or Russian translations for PC in another Patreon post

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[ExhibitionistNts69]

hopefully the updates are regular

 

[Boogg]

I like it so far. I hope that it continues.