VN - Ren'Py - Between Worlds [v0.1.8 PI Full] [RolePlayer]

So far so good! The writing here is better than most, even with some very minor translation issues. (Slight grammatical errors)
The story is immediately accessible and quite entertaining so far. Only a small bit of lewd at this point, but it's all contextual to the storyline, and even a little wholesome. The visuals are pretty decent as well. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this VN.

The nice graphics made me play and the slow burn made me stay, really good writing the relationship between the protagonist has a real feeling of progress and you feel immersed in thir world congrats to the dev, the future is bright ✨️.

As someone who cares a lot about characters looks in every game, I would say that this has an excellent, decent story, but the characters are good. The swinging content might be good for someone who enjoys them, but overall I would rate it a 9 out of 10.

Between Worlds has the potential to be a fairly decent game that captivates an audience, but the current dialog is horrendous. I drifted to sleep and deleted the game during the game introduction. To mitigate the abuse to your eyes, you'll find yourself hopelessly smashing the enter key seeking fap material.

Very good quality renders, nice time period and outfits but I'm not sold by the story and dialogue or the inclusion or orcs/non-humans.

The dialogue is extra hard to follow, different font size,to much inner monologue, characters having separate conversations at the same time and imperfect translation add up to an unreadable mess. Hopefully that can all be improved on

There's no content as such in the 0.1, but that's fair, the developer is looking for input. It's worth checking out anyway, the render quality could be good enough to convince you to check back to see if there's improvement in future updates