I am currently watching/playing the Re-boot of Chapter 1/Chapter 2
Let me just say, IMHO that the "Older version" was better.
All the Crap the DEV was trying to do with the graphics & animation took away from the story
(especially when Lily was talking to MC about his father)
Query: was it REALLY the fact that Lily was pregnant with 2nd child the issue? or was it that 2nd child was a girl?
(I am also quite surprised that the 'father' did not kick Lily in her midsection (belly) several times. This could have the desired effect of an abortion (miscarriage), and let's face it; it was not outside the realm of possibility, Lily was already down and passed out)
Chapter 2 (??)
2nd problem: There was only 2-3 yrs difference between MC & Olivia, but the segment/clip discussing MC surprise B-day party there had to be at least a 10 yr age difference.
There are some good things too.
I would recommend going back and concentrate on Chapter 1; continue building your story.
Creating a game with 'time jumps' without past or present labels are difficult enough to follow, but you seem to be doing well so far.
- Point is NOT To Ruin your game by adding a bunch of unnecessary garbage.