You broke the dev, gamer. Your disdain for the way this game is made disheartened the dev.
MC is single but has a very happy go naughty relationship with the two girls he has known
since for ever, his lil sis and her BFF - so dev had only done the sexual stuff as a funny
break from the heartache of the mom drama - pitty you atacked the dev on ”forced relationship”
grounds when, in effect, it was some playful banter between very tight childhood friends.
Not to mention these girls worshipped MC and had even planned a birthday party for him with mom:
that was the most endearing sweet heartfelt scene in the game for me.
I think the mc can be a bit of a douche.
And the other thing is the forced girlfriend at the start
I'll be honest I really hate that sort of thing.
Some of you already know that I have spent the last two days rewriting the whole chapter. When I was creating Ch1 for the first time, I wrote everything in my language, then translated and proofread. I always had the feeling that the whole game was like a script. It didn't look natural to me, and the characters were talking like robots. What is different this time is that I have written everything one more time, but directly in English. Despite the fact that I wasn't really satisfied with everything, I accepted it because 99% of players told me "it's really well written". The truth is that I thought about it many times after the first release until I really opened Ch1 once again and tried to improve everything. The story hasn't been changed; everything is the same. I just put my own words into dialog. I already have some feedbeck, and they told me two things: 1. It's a lot better. 2. It's more natural. So, I achieved what I wanted, I guess. Anyway, you guys know that I'm not an English-speaking person.
Scenes:
First change: I have removed the third choice from the scene when MC is leaving the hospital. Right now, you've only got two options: Walk home or Take the bus
Second change: MC and Samantha in the kitchen (fingering); this short scene is removed. I have seen a few players point out that it's kind of weird because there is serious talk about mom, and after a few minutes they are kissing and doing some sh*t like that. The reason I created this scene is that I just wanted to stop that serious talk and do something more "funny". I had the feeling that it was too much with that talk about mom and everything, but now I see it quite differently. After all, it's still more depressing than funny, so... There is probably no reason to stop
Third change: the futa/trans scene is REMOVED. The reason is that I was watching gameplay from my game, and I find quite a lot of things weird, especially this scene. At the time I was creating this scene, I was probably emotionally drained by all that stuff about Lily, and naturally I needed to create something funny. From my point of view, it's just a funny story about Martin. No offense, no attack, nothing else—just a joke. Don't worry, the scene has been replaced with something more friendly
Is the dev not on this site anymore?
As we can all see, dev changed so much from the original game, our feedback
must have really sucked the life outta dev.
Deleted member 5954819 - Dev deleted the posts and called it quits with all the critique around here.
Beyond Tomorrow
Game Developer
Elsewhere, tho ... game development is trucking on:
Beyond Tomorrow - Chapter 2 #DevLog 7
Hey, how are you doing, everyone?
So, as you already know, I've spent the last two weeks with full focus on writing Chapter 2.
News from 3 days ago:
Goal: PC with RTX 4090 24GB
Since Patreon has removed the ability to create goals like it used to,
this post is focused purely on the goal I currently have. Creating PC
