* Name entry is a little confusing.
* The font is not as easy to read as one might think.
* The language is kind of stilted. I'm guessing the dev is a non-native English speaker.
* I think it would be better to give the assistant a name right away rather than call her 'assistant'. Also could just show her instead of telling us she's approaching.
* Yup, Engrish.
* The minigame is kind of pointless.
Eh.
The poor English hurts this game a lot in my opinion.Other than that, I suppose it could be okay, but I wasn't that interested, As the MC, you do have choices, but they don't really give you the sort of control you'd like. Aslso, the MC is pretty much a loser with a poor attitude, and you get pretty annoyed with him fairly quickly.
This just isn't something that interesting.
