VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Birthday Present [v0.96] [Spooky666]

Im gonna hit it with 3 stars cause even when there are some renders mixed there in situations there shouldn't be, which maybe is an issu scripting or whatever, and even when there are 2 scenes and i think in both the girl is a virgin...(that happens i guess) the scenes are good.
There is one single sex scene split in 2 parts but at least is decent, is detailed, and well, the dynamics are CRingy creepy, and nobody would do that with an adult. Those words they use even teenagers nowadays dont use them.
And well, girls have hair down there pretty early in some cases. I have sisters, i know that for a fact, so telling that "nobody in my school has hair down there" is a little too much.
I guess it serves the purpose of the fetish, but that age number whould really go down a lot to match with the logic of what its being described.

As others said, it lacks some character development and stakes or something, cause its pretty much like any porn video, only that maybe those fail at making lolis, so maybe this works better. Anyway i digress.

If it wasnt for the quality of the sex scene i would have given it a 1 star, but the sex is quite good.

For a learning game of about 5 minutes playtime I have to say I enjoyed it a lot.
Probably even more than another well know Daddy/Daughter games last 5 updates to be honest xD

The daughter looks cute and has braces (more games need to implement braces!).

You can creampie her and even get some pregnant bonus renders in the end.

Everybody that likes incest and loves innocent virgin girls like me should give it a spin.

Perfect for a quick fap after playing a story heavy slowburn game that blueballed you^^

What is not to like? If this isn't your thing then don't download it. You knew what the genre was when you clicked...

It is short and to the point, a testing/proving ground. Probably can be expanded and built upon but will never be a fully fledge game in itself.

That doesn't make it bad, far from it. I enjoyed it and would love to see more development of the charachters. The girl could be more resisting, requiring the guy to be more direct/forceful. A bit of guilt persuasion/manipulation would go a long way. You could even have her willing/coerced to protect another (younger?) sister.

It is refreshing to see a dev take up something that challenges establised norms and morals. Of course this is never going to be mainstream and certainly far from everyone's taste, but there is a lot of contentent out there which is safe and 'middle of the road' so I'm pleased to find the occasional 'darker' nugget like this one.

*Review based on version 0.96*

Not really sure what to say here. The game is short and jumps right into the action. No grind, no character build-up, no investment. This game is closer to a regular porn video on pornhub, rather than an an actual game with a story, in the sense that the "story" is told in 30 seconds and only serves as the intro to the sex scene.

As for the story, here is what I got from what little remained after playing: Dad lives alone with his daughter, who is now turning (?) years old and what better gift than to rape her?
That's right, the dad plans to rape his daughter on her birthday. Now, I don't mind forced sex - in fact it is one of my favourite fetishes. However, forced sex still needs some form of build-up. Some anticipation and reason for why it happens. None of this is found here. Dad just states that he intends to rape his daughter and then does so. Pretty boring stuff.

The daughter seems like a complete idiot. She is obviously supposed to be somewhere in her mid-teens, but she is dumber than a brick. She constantly uses terms such as "Bunny-hole" or "Daddy-juice" and such things, which no teenage girl would use today.
Also, she only resists you extremely briefly, after which she becomes a willing and even eager participant, no matter if you specifically pick the option which makes her hate it. Yeah, great.... she hated it for all of 5 seconds alright.

The rape/lovemaking/whatever the fucking hell this is supposed to be, is split in 2 parts, as far as I could tell: First daddy gets her undressed and then inserts his "Mister Bunny" in her "Bunny-hole" and gives her a quick pounding.
Then you decide to take her virginity (cause she definately still has that after you just fucked her) and she is now completely compliant with your instructions.

All in all, this game is poorly made. It serves the same purpose as the average video on Brazzers: It gives you a scenario, 30 seconds of story and then jumps into the action. This is fine for a quick wank, I guess, if you are into the graphics on offer here.
If you are looking for any sort of story, character development, intelligent writing or a general good experience, you should probably go somewhere else.

Giving the game 2 stars, based on the fact that the graphics are decent and the game works. Impossible for me to rate it higher though.

Good the rape part... and this why I quote 4 stars

But even in rape, blackmail, etc.. it would be greatly appreciated if the characters involved have some kind of personality.

The girl is really dull as fuck and it put everything off.
Strong content like rape, blackmail etcs require the same effort in terms of building characters personality than all the other games.

It is what it is (Not sure why 3 said it massively rapey probably just sjws aka types against this despite the giant flag of what it is for sure is not that it just the typical weak porn thing you expect given the title ).

There 1 good animated rub animation rest are barely animated or not at all.

very short but can take like 10 minutes easily if read it all(so not a 2-5min demo style).

good facial animations, and otherwise it again is what it is nothing more by any stretch.

Good interesting game.

Positive:
- good art and scenes
- you can make her younger than she is
- rape

Negative:
- Maybe she is just too naive or stupid but which 18+ yo girl uses words like daddy, mommy, mr bunny, bunny hole, daddy juice and many more.
- in the first scene he fuck her in her pussy without deflorating her (how is that possible if he pound her hard?) and in the next scene she is still a virgin
- the same with cumming inside, in one scene he fill her up, in the next scene he tells her to fill her up the first time
- she got a slut pretty fast
- first she hates to get fucked, in the next scene she likes the taste of cum

Summary:
Its a good game but it have just to many inconsistencies between scenes. The game needs a full polishing then it would be a pretty good game.

Yeah...I was hoping for a game...what I got was some excellent graphics and something worse.

The graphics are outstanding...the dialogue is horrible, there is no real game here in that there are no choices. And it's rapey as all hell. Sure, if you're into non-consent...but the incest piece makes it the non-consent rather unpalatable.

I'd suggest that the person doing the graphics works with someone that can tell a story and write dialogue...there may be a good corruption story to tell here...but the forced incest parts were a turn-off.

I definitely can't recommend this game but I'll hope the author finds someone that can help with story and dialogue.

Yeah no. Wayyyyy too much of an underage rapey thing going on.

"Daddy I don't consent"
"Until you're out of Highschool, I'm consenting for you"

Yeah, I'm out. I see that the dev says there may be other more consenting routes in the future but to come out the gate like this set's a tone that's just.... eww

There are a bunch of reasons I should take stars off my rating. The dream sequence jammed in the middle, the repeated Daddy: mmmm Daughter: mmmmmm dialogue, and it's just so short. But it gets 4 out of 5 stars because it is so damn sexy and so different every other damn incest game. The daughter is an interesting mix of naive and not quite so naive. Also, it has to be said, the repeated mention of eighteen in the dialogue and plot doesn't really stop her looking 14 to 15.

A great beginner product. A short story of a father and his birthday girl daughter. The narrative is unique in it's combination of relaxed naivity from the father about his "wonderful" gift. It's that naivity that is bizarre and almost endearing despite the initial coersion he applies. It creates a strange differentness to the scene that reminds me of "Long Lost Daughter" which was uploaded here recently. In that game too, the dialog presents the incestuous act as very matter of fact. No ethical hesitation. Simply freed from the usual emotional turmoil. In "Birthday Present" the daughter protests at her fathers actions but only because of her initial lack of consent less because she is insensed at the general idea of incest. The removal of just that one moral conflict whilst retaining all other elements of a normal real world setting makes the game refreshingly different. A narrative tool that I think should be used more often. Change just one element of behavioral ethics from the usual rejection to embracing and watch what ensues. Devs, think about the possibilities.

Anyway, kinky story. Good start.