RPGM - Completed - Black Paradise [Final] [GraverobberAXDX]

This was hot. Basically same type of situation as the other unfinished game, leaning more towards cuckoldry, but I really dig it. And ending is simple but doesnt leave things unfinished.

Make a save at the beggining of a day, to wander and talk to characters and see where you're supposed to go, cause time goes forward based on real time, no on screen transition and actions, and you walk slow. After you kind figured it out, load and complete the day.

The most criminal flaw is the walk speed, its horrible.

I would have given it a 3* for being a short and straightforward BBC NTR game with a rushed progression, but the game design is literally trolling you.

It disables dashing on all maps. It's essentially unplayable at the default walk speed. You will die of frustration as you crawl around the map. There is a patch in the forum somewhere to enable dashing. Use that.

Secondly, as far as I can tell, absolutely nothing you do during the course of the game affects anything. Winning the contest by getting the most tickets, finding gears, getting all the plushies to gift to the gf, deciding to check out the social media thing, calling the gf throughout the day, your final answers during the last act, none of it matters. That's pretty stupid honestly.

Is it worth a quick playthrough with a save editor and the dashing mod? Maybe. It's exactly what you would expect from a short game of this genre. The fact that there is only one ending when the entire game makes you think otherwise really annoys the shit out of me though lol.

I won't say anything new. The plot is nice, the sound is good and the way the game involves you with "almost catching her cheating" , as in other games like short escape ones is fun. It would be a 4 if the art was better and a 5 if we could dash.

The character moved too slowly, even after turning on "Always Dash" which made me lose patience. Badly drawn character makes me just want to delete the game and I did it. Anyone who intends to play this game, get rid of that intention, it's not worth the time you spend playing.

A good cuckhold game, but could be much better with some changes. First, the walk speed is a big problem. i would say, it is a torment for the player to have to walk that slow. Changing to "always dash" dp nothing. The clock-based system works well for this game, but could be better if the game slowly burned the corruption of the Girl Alice. But the game went from 0 to 100 in 5 days.

In the writing aspect, i would say mediocre at first, but it gets better later. abuses of the BBC fetish, like this girl Alice, sees a Black Cuck and becomes a bitch in a day. But when you read her diary, it is kind of hot how she narrates her fall, so it is a plus, and at the end the narrative is also kind of hot if you like NTR/cuckhold.

The art is not good, but i think it works and gets a little better at the end. But nothing too special.

A short but good NTR game with the main theme being blacked and submisive slutty gf.
*I really liked the script, hell the dev even wrote small dialogs for the random mobs depending on the activities.
*The art may not be the best but it's right up my alley.
*Simple but great bgm and sfx in scenes.
There are things to improve like not being able to advance time or walking too slow but overall is really worth a play.

If you could stop the NTR it would've been absolutely perfect, but even now I can't help but come back to thinking about this game. Excellent BBC rival, nice scenes and awesome atmosphere. We need more games like this, games for people who know what they want and that give those people precisely what they want

Good writing for my taste, but overall slow gameplay.
Art in 4/5, but still does the job done.
Short, like 30min-1hr, we need more of this type of games.
And it also would be nice to have gallery in this type of games.

Ok I didn't expected to like it. But I liked it because the ending was amazing for cuck lovers. There was choices for the protagonist to choose how far to go a lot of short NTR games lacks this.
There are some issues. Like walking was way too boring as it was very slow, even with dash always on.

I really wanted to give this game benefit of the doubt, but I just can't. This game is just not fit for RPGMaker.
+:
- Art style (it's looks more or less pleasant);
- Soundtrack (fits for this game).
-;
- YOU CAN CHANGE NOTHING (there is absolutely nothing you can do to keep your GF faithful, no matter what you do);
- False advertisement ("Will Alice be able to remain a faithful girlfriend during the 5 days of the school event?");
- Overused NTR and BBC fetish mix;
- Daytime system (you have to do something until you can access one of the scenes);
- Walking speed (you can't run, only walk)

VERDICT: thinks twice before downloading. If you are a normal guy - don't.

So I'm kind of on the fence for this one, for an NTR game its ok, for a BBC game its good, for an RPGmaker game it isn't good enough. The art is pretty bad in my opinion so thats a big knock from me sadly. just left me feeling like they could have done it better. Some good and bad,

GOOD
- NTR: Its done well enough but you have to know its BBC NTR and kind of bare bones but it held my attention enough to finish it.
- short: This is a good thing and a bad thing, but for the good I was able to finish the game.
- BBC stuff: the BBC stuff is done well enough if that is something you like.

BAD
- Art: I dont like it, while I wont say its horrible I just personally was not a big fan. I tolerated it enough to play it and it gave me a boner here and there but too plain and rudimentary to me.
- No Slow Burn: To me NTR needs slow burn before you get to the dicking and this jumps right in to the action. Honestly this is not even strong NTR because the girl chooses to cheat but either way it all happens way too quick.

-.5 because dashing was not implemented.
The female MC is actually If that's your thing you should try it. The art is fantastic, the story is nicely executed. Overall, 4/5

It's a good enough game but has some problems.
On the good side the plot although pretty standard is written well including all the background NPCs. The art is fine although I wish there was more of it. The map is large and detailed although some areas seem to go unused as far as I could tell.
As for problems the biggest are the lack sprint making moving around the large map a chore, The time system is mostly fine but needs a way of progressing forward easier than what I did which was just run back and forth through a door and The lack of a memory replay system which is made worse by only having a few saves means you really have no way of looking back at previous scenes. I think all the problems could be patched pretty easily but seems unlikely as the version is down as "final", I am looking forward to what they make next though.

Excellent work in terms of erotism.
Fantastic artwork.
The main thing that catches some good NTR/Cuck audience is gonna be the Storyline, unmatched scenes, and some good NTR moments.
If we talk about animations, this game lacks animation, I would suggest dev to add a little bit of animation in upcoming updates if possible.
It's a new game so don't know about future updates, but this game has some serious potential.
Rating :-
Plot = 5/5
Genre ( Including NTR ) = 5/5
Artwork = 4/5
Erotism = 5/5
Scenes =4/5
Overall = 5/5

Just look at the images in the game's files, they aren't anything special anyway, this game has no respect for the player's time. RPGM was a poor choice for this game, the maps are full of empty space, you can't move fast and systems like time are clunky. This game is just another entry into the long list of black ntr games that just aren't very good.

Review:
All in all a great little NTR game, story is great, elements to set up scenes are great. Sounds/moaning is great. Scenes are also great. For his first game its a good damn job I think!

Pros: Great NTR story(short and realistic'ish) Mechanics / Functions like day/night cycle or phone calls are a great addon Great with the perv forum(could have been used even more)

Cons: No dash, this is IMO at MUST change - Make it the players decision if he/she wanna go fast or not. - Because of no dash some quest are really cumbersome(forest) A bit short for my taste, but for the first game acceptable. Art is pretty decent overall but there is some rough edges here and there, perhaps maybe just the artstyle?

Improvements to be made IMO:
Dash Options to "go back" when checking diary / saying no to reading diary There was also a few typos here and there A bit of movement in scenes would not hurt, so it matches the moaning sounds!

Comments:
Developer have already changed the dash option in the next version of the game.

Great job overall! will be looking forward to the next project!

If you love NTR, stay away from this game.
You spend ages walking around for just 1 scene a day in game time.
Even though most fappers don't value their time, this game will make you wish you'd moved out of your mum's basement years ago.

Story is nothing special, the corruption is a bit quick and there is a lot of needless walking around, but is fantastic if you like ntr. Its not very long (about 1hr 30) so if you like ntr its a must play

its rpg maker used to make a non rpg game, it sucks.

like ok you don't know how to make games in other engines thats fine, but surely you know how to make rooms smaller?
so much needless walking in empty spaces to talk to someone. there various areas you can go to at different times of day so this constant walking through empty spaces makes up the entire game.
"its too early to go to sleep... maybe i can walk around a bit." lines like these are insult to injury.

the writing in the game isn't bad at all but its just not worth playing through. as far as actual porn goes its just a few images. its not bad but no way in hell worth the hours of watching a your character slowly walk the lenght of a football field over and over again. you can't even click where you want to go and then do something else why they guy gets there. the game wants you to stare at him slowly get to the next screen. Its just awful.

don't waste your time playing this.