Short Review for Version 0.1
<--- Visuals --->
The creator fixation with the weird angles is simply said, stupid. Every still is weirdly proportioned, it may be ignorance or an attempt to look edgy, but, it is really UGLY.
<--- Writing --->
Weird English. Bad grammar. Incoherent sentences.
Either get a decent proofreader to take a hand at this, or, simply don't make an English version.
<--- Story --->
Very thin and almost transparent story. None of it seemed even remotely plausible. Every step of it is forced, everything is really weird.
The sister is weird. The MC is really dumb. The BadGuy is too stupid to be alive. Pearl is just not believable AT ALL.
This needs to be completely re-written.
<--- Conclusion --->
The images need to be scaled, too big for no reason at all, this is a very old engine after all, nothing is gained by having stupidly big images. Especially with this weird angles the Dev is shooting.
The entire text needs to be wrote again, this time please use an adult brain, this, as it is, could barely pass for a story written by a 12 year old.
The story has NOTHING in it. Zero. No substance, no depth, no reason.
If you have loads of time on your hands AND/OR no critical taste whatsoever, this could be for you.
Otherwise, really NOT RECOMMENDED.
<--- Rating --->
I struggle to give this a 1 star, because it seems cruel. But there is simply nothing good here. Consider the 1-star for effort.
<--- Visuals --->
The creator fixation with the weird angles is simply said, stupid. Every still is weirdly proportioned, it may be ignorance or an attempt to look edgy, but, it is really UGLY.
<--- Writing --->
Weird English. Bad grammar. Incoherent sentences.
Either get a decent proofreader to take a hand at this, or, simply don't make an English version.
<--- Story --->
Very thin and almost transparent story. None of it seemed even remotely plausible. Every step of it is forced, everything is really weird.
The sister is weird. The MC is really dumb. The BadGuy is too stupid to be alive. Pearl is just not believable AT ALL.
This needs to be completely re-written.
<--- Conclusion --->
The images need to be scaled, too big for no reason at all, this is a very old engine after all, nothing is gained by having stupidly big images. Especially with this weird angles the Dev is shooting.
The entire text needs to be wrote again, this time please use an adult brain, this, as it is, could barely pass for a story written by a 12 year old.
The story has NOTHING in it. Zero. No substance, no depth, no reason.
If you have loads of time on your hands AND/OR no critical taste whatsoever, this could be for you.
Otherwise, really NOT RECOMMENDED.
<--- Rating --->
I struggle to give this a 1 star, because it seems cruel. But there is simply nothing good here. Consider the 1-star for effort.