VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.2] [Torimiata]

[alyssssssssss]

The game and the Dev started with many convictions about not being the usual NTR game, but like all devs, along the way he gets carried away by the usual worshipers of pure NTR, this is a bit sad, but not for the game, for like every game starts with an idea, then ends in the same way as all the others, everything is legal without a problem, but why then make all those initial declarations, of a new game, etc. etc., then you always end up with a weak and single-endowed MC , in favor of another more handsome and super gifted boy, perhaps there won't be the boy who steals the girlfriend, although at this point, the Dev could also add this choice.

 

[m7md90]

After fucked GF, most NTS/NTR games lose their hype

 

[alyssssssssss]

After fucked GF, most NTS/NTR games lose their hype

The real problem is that everything else happens like in other similar games, that's the real problem, everyone being repetitive in the dynamics of the story, never someone who has a unique and different idea, people think that I hate NTR, but I don't they understood that I hate that they are all the same in terms of story, a standard script, weak MC, shy girl at first, then super slut, and the bad guy with a monstrous cock who does what he wants.

 

[baka]

alyssssssssss
calm down a bit.
the VN in not there yet to trash it like that.
theres no indications that terrace is a bad guy.
also Ayumi is not a shy girl. she has been a teaser from the beginning.
surely the Mc is a introvert and it seems to be a typical passive dude.
but the dynamic between him and Ayumi makes it ok.
remember that the Mc told Ayumi to do more in the paint-event.
he is not that weak as u think.

at this moment its not productive to trash the game like that.
not sure whats the deal with "alyssss..."
its almost like he want the VN to fail and try with all his power to make people not play it.

m7md90
depends on the user. I know people that enjoy playing VN/Games like that, as it doesn't matter if she's fucked multiple times, while other users lose interest after that part.
Im the latter, I enjoy the corruption/seduction and the goal is the sex. when we reach that, whats next? what other goals?
I enjoy slowburns because of that. also I like the "typical" steps where penetration is the end goal.
a VN like ProjectSage I found interested where she wanted to keep her virginity but was ok with almost anything else.
its kind of hot that she protect that one. and surely I wouldn't mind Ayumi to do the same, that her pussy is no entry. at least for a long while.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

After fucked GF, most NTS/NTR games lose their hype

You're not wrong, but that's more a symptom of bad writing and storytelling because it means the only 'buildup' was purely the sexual acts regardless of words on screen.

In this vein, a lot of games also just lack the creativity to envision new and novel sharing setups...... when's the last time you saw an ntrs game where the gf started out teasing other guys, then did some threesomes and foursomes, then started to perform on a stage downtown, then had a stint as an onlyfans girl with private shows, then brought her friends in to tease mc and fuck other guys, etcetcetc - those are just a few quick examples of story ledes possible, but instead games usually default to sexual escalation and nothing else: she handies a guy, she blows a guy, she fucks a guy, she anals a guy, she groups with guys, she gets gangbanged etc the end.

Not saying any of this is applicable here, time will tell, it's too early.

 

[MarvinP]

How is 0.5.1 different to 0.5.0?

 

[Joshy92]

You're not wrong, but that's more a symptom of bad writing and storytelling because it means the only 'buildup' was purely the sexual acts regardless of words on screen.

In this vein, a lot of games also just lack the creativity to envision new and novel sharing setups...... when's the last time you saw an ntrs game where the gf started out teasing other guys, then did some threesomes and foursomes, then started to perform on a stage downtown, then had a stint as an onlyfans girl with private shows, then brought her friends in to tease mc and fuck other guys, etcetcetc - those are just a few quick examples of story ledes possible, but instead games usually default to sexual escalation and nothing else: she handies a guy, she blows a guy, she fucks a guy, she anals a guy, she groups with guys, she gets gangbanged etc the end.

Not saying any of this is applicable here, time will tell, it's too early.

I would love an ntrs game where we can have a girlfriend who is a porn star or stuff like that. There is tons of opportunity for romantic moments there.

 

[Lolikanion]

How is 0.5.1 different to 0.5.0?

Played the new version and the changes are nice.

For those who want to know what changed

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You know there is a search function right?
Or you could just go few pages back.

 

[alyssssssssss]

alyssssssssss
calm down a bit.
the VN in not there yet to trash it like that.
theres no indications that terrace is a bad guy.
also Ayumi is not a shy girl. she has been a teaser from the beginning.
surely the Mc is a introvert and it seems to be a typical passive dude.
but the dynamic between him and Ayumi makes it ok.
remember that the Mc told Ayumi to do more in the paint-event.
he is not that weak as u think.

at this moment its not productive to trash the game like that.
not sure whats the deal with "alyssss..."
its almost like he want the VN to fail and try with all his power to make people not play it.

m7md90
depends on the user. I know people that enjoy playing VN/Games like that, as it doesn't matter if she's fucked multiple times, while other users lose interest after that part.
Im the latter, I enjoy the corruption/seduction and the goal is the sex. when we reach that, whats next? what other goals?
I enjoy slowburns because of that. also I like the "typical" steps where penetration is the end goal.
a VN like ProjectSage I found interested where she wanted to keep her virginity but was ok with almost anything else.
its kind of hot that she protect that one. and surely I wouldn't mind Ayumi to do the same, that her pussy is no entry. at least for a long while.

Because your only thought, or that of others, you must think that I want evil, you read correctly what I wanted to say, my English is not good, ok, but I didn't talk about a game that sucks, I answered the comment before mine, then I gave a consideration on the types of NTR of this type, now you want to deny that the three components of each game are the same, weak and pathetic MC, slutty girl and super badass villain. They are the three bases, then they come from each Dev, described in different ways, but we start from the base that an MC has a weak character, a small or normal dick, that once he gives the girl the green light, he never manages to getting angry that the girl did something that went beyond, never, the girl, inevitably, once she gets the go, she takes pleasure and pleasure, she will always go further, trying to exaggerate, anyway she always tells MC this afterwards, and by now done, here's the weak MC, he accepts without saying no, Terrence is not bad in the sense that he wants to take the girl away like in other VNs, but he is super handsome, fit and with a cock 3 times bigger, he is a friend of MC , but if he can fuck his girlfriend, he has no qualms, you said that I told a game not yet written, but the path that the Dev is taking, that's it, that's the thing you say about me, that I want the game failed, no I would just like a Dev, who tells an NTR with news.

 

[baka]

surely we can interpret it in many different ways.
and surely it can go in any directions. its can even go bananas the next update.
we can only speculate and do predictions.
if we try to be objective and take into consideration how the VN evolved so far my understanding is that it will not that such drastic change.

if so I will be on your side. the DEV did a VN that in the end is just NTR in a NTS costume.
but before I do that I want to give the DEV some credit. so far so good and theres no hints of betrays and lies.
so far its just playfulness and love between Mc and Ayumi.

 

[jclosed]

surely we can interpret it in many different ways.
and surely it can go in any directions. its can even go bananas the next update.
we can only speculate and do predictions.
if we try to be objective and take into consideration how the VN evolved so far my understanding is that it will not that such drastic change.

if so I will be on your side. the DEV did a VN that in the end is just NTR in a NTS costume.
but before I do that I want to give the DEV some credit. so far so good and theres no hints of betrays and lies.
so far its just playfulness and love between Mc and Ayumi.

Yeah - I agree. The moment, however, if everything goes to betrayal and lies (and thus a NTR direction), I drop this VN like a hot potato.
But I agree - The author has given no sign that he has any intention to let this VN go into a undesirable direction, so I will stay "onboard" with this one...

 

[alyssssssssss]

As the story unfolds, you find yourself torn between shyness and unexplored desires,
while Ayumi, your playful and adventurous girlfriend, gently encourages you to open yourself up to new experiences.

Your journey takes an exciting turn when you meet your childhood friend,
Ari, who adds a new level of excitement and temptation to your already complex relationships.

Una volta che i muri delle tue inibizioni iniziano a svanire, non puoi più tornare indietro.









The things I reported above are the premises of the game, they are vague and free to interpret, if I'm not mistaken, but then in the end I read that Ayumi wants to make her boyfriend open-minded, no as many claim it's the opposite, then I read that Ari brings a breath of inventiveness, but in the end it reads, an already complex relationship, it's me who misinterprets those words, I'm also the right one to think about the things I said. I repeat, everyone has their own interpretation of the descriptions, but I read in the premise, even some contradictions, at the end of everything, the much strangest sentence, once the walls start to fall, you never go back, therefore, once the couple has been corrupted , Ayumi will have obtained permission to fuck whoever she wants, while her other boyfriends didn't want to, and Mc instead, due to his weakness, accepts, when I say weak, I mean that he, in order to have Ayumi for himself, is willing to accept everything, this is not an action of love, but only of possession.

 

[Torimiata]

It's interesting to hear how people interpret different scenes and I understand that there can be multiple ways to perceive them. However, it's unconventional and non-vanilla but this is a loving NTS story at heart.

Ayumi is gradually learning how to tease the MC, but this new dynamic in their relationship is something that they are both discovering together. Together. All the characters in the story have their own evolving arcs, and their growth is an essential aspect of the narrative.

In fact, whether Ayumi takes on a more proactive role [Tease Queen] or a more passive role [Submissive Pet] in the game is somewhat up to the player's choice. This concept was introduced in the 0.5.x release, made clearer in 0.5.1, and will be further fleshed out in the upcoming 0.5.2 release (soon... it was challenging but important to get it right before any development on 0.6.x)

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[zambiri]

Good game

 

[alyssssssssss]

It's interesting to hear how people interpret different scenes and I understand that there can be multiple ways to perceive them. However, it's unconventional and non-vanilla but this is a loving NTS story at heart.

Ayumi is gradually learning how to tease the MC, but this new dynamic in their relationship is something that they are both discovering together. Together. All the characters in the story have their own evolving arcs, and their growth is an essential aspect of the narrative.

In fact, whether Ayumi takes on a more proactive role [Tease Queen] or a more passive role [Submissive Pet] in the game is somewhat up to the player's choice. This concept was introduced in the 0.5.x release, made clearer in 0.5.1, and will be further fleshed out in the upcoming 0.5.2 release (soon... it was challenging but important to get it right before any development on 0.6.x)

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I apologize if I said something offensive or not well interpreted, my English is bad, I had asked those questions to other users, because some things about the game and the premise give me a way of seeing the game in progression, I can also make mistakes, I don't predict the future, but to summarize, my hope is that the game and your idea are innovative and not the usual path, seen is revised, no that I ask you to change the plot, it's just It's a shame that after a good start, you end up with the usual basic path of the characters, it's normal for evolution to bring strengths and weaknesses, you learn to treat new things as you think, you can do well, or you can do badly, but one thing perhaps missing in the couple, having put rules, without rules you never know, when you pass the point of no return, Thank you

 

[moonhowler1972]

alyssssssssss
calm down a bit.
the VN in not there yet to trash it like that.
theres no indications that terrace is a bad guy.
also Ayumi is not a shy girl. she has been a teaser from the beginning.
surely the Mc is a introvert and it seems to be a typical passive dude.
but the dynamic between him and Ayumi makes it ok.
remember that the Mc told Ayumi to do more in the paint-event.
he is not that weak as u think.

at this moment its not productive to trash the game like that.
not sure whats the deal with "alyssss..."
its almost like he want the VN to fail and try with all his power to make people not play it.

m7md90
depends on the user. I know people that enjoy playing VN/Games like that, as it doesn't matter if she's fucked multiple times, while other users lose interest after that part.
Im the latter, I enjoy the corruption/seduction and the goal is the sex. when we reach that, whats next? what other goals?
I enjoy slowburns because of that. also I like the "typical" steps where penetration is the end goal.
a VN like ProjectSage I found interested where she wanted to keep her virginity but was ok with almost anything else.
its kind of hot that she protect that one. and surely I wouldn't mind Ayumi to do the same, that her pussy is no entry. at least for a long while.

Best thing to do with alys (who only deserves one s) - block/ignore. This is the same diatribe it posts on multiple NTR related threads. Same shit over and over. Ridicule the MC. Attack the dev. And it's pathetic. I've come to the conclusion that aly (who doesn't deserve an s) has walked in on his significant other getting absolutely rammed by a BBC sometime in the past and he's transferring all his pent up cuck rage on here. Because al (who only deserves two letters to go with his probable two inch dick size) seems to have more issues than the back catalogue of the X-Men. I only hope that a (who really only deserves one letter because he's so nauseatingly one dimensional) manages to sit in a room one day with a shitload of cuck porn, a lot of stress balls, and plenty of Sorbolene and tissues and rage wank his way through his problems.

 

[alyssssssssss]

Best thing to do with alys (who only deserves one s) - block/ignore. This is the same diatribe it posts on multiple NTR related threads. Same shit over and over. Ridicule the MC. Attack the dev. And it's pathetic. I've come to the conclusion that aly (who doesn't deserve an s) has walked in on his significant other getting absolutely rammed by a BBC sometime in the past and he's transferring all his pent up cuck rage on here. Because al (who only deserves two letters to go with his probable two inch dick size) seems to have more issues than the back catalogue of the X-Men. I only hope that a (who really only deserves one letter because he's so nauseatingly one dimensional) manages to sit in a room one day with a shitload of cuck porn, a lot of stress balls, and plenty of Sorbolene and tissues and rage wank his way through his problems.

You know, you're very funny, but I have doubts, you're following me in every game post I dedicate a comment to, and you say the same thing, maybe you have no other words, and your post was written to you by someone more cultured, alive in Italy, in the south, if you know, we welcome the BBC in the rescue centers, then we send them to the countries of the rest of the world to fuck, or commit various bullshit, but don't worry, in Italy what you say doesn't happen, we from the South, if we are betrayed, rest assured that you will never see the light of the next day, my temperament and culture, finds its reason why in judging some NTR really ridiculous, building a shitty MC to make him a cuckold, is typical of who doesn't have balls, and is a living sheep, you call me frustrated, no, I have hot blood, things like this, yes it's a game, but acting against the weakest, bullying, making him a dog, not it makes me excited, but nauseated, instead I find the NTR Games with balls, the games where MC is someone who screws other women, then rightly the wife takes revenge, or a wife who cheats because the husband is absent, but without husband know, one of the best NTRs is where a guy wants to be a mafia boss, is married to a lawyer, etc, but he cheats, she cheats, or not, they don't know they're cheating, etc. I don't remember the title, therefore, making these jokes as a 10 year old child makes you laugh, it's only if you know how to read, I specify and I also apologize to the Dev if something is wrong, while you only know how to throw shit in your face, writing a text copied who knows where , good fun.

 

[Surprise & Delight]

Best thing to do with alys (who only deserves one s) - block/ignore. This is the same diatribe it posts on multiple NTR related threads. Same shit over and over. Ridicule the MC. Attack the dev. And it's pathetic. I've come to the conclusion that aly (who doesn't deserve an s) has walked in on his significant other getting absolutely rammed by a BBC sometime in the past and he's transferring all his pent up cuck rage on here. Because al (who only deserves two letters to go with his probable two inch dick size) seems to have more issues than the back catalogue of the X-Men. I only hope that a (who really only deserves one letter because he's so nauseatingly one dimensional) manages to sit in a room one day with a shitload of cuck porn, a lot of stress balls, and plenty of Sorbolene and tissues and rage wank his way through his problems.

You know, I have never put any user on "Ignore" before. Honestly, I forgot the function was there. But I have literally written angry rebuttals to that user's (he doesn't deserve a name) weird, historically bad takes, not only on this game but on like 3 other of my favorite games. Then I deleted them because I remembered I'm a secure grown-up and he is a sad little cuck-boy (apparently the only one that ever existed ever in Italy because they kill people who do that stuff over there ). But thanks to your reminder, I have now Ignored the guy and can just enjoy talking about NTR games with my fellow pure-hearted perverts.

 

[Joshy92]

I think Ari is hotter than Ayumi.

 

[Surprise & Delight]

I think Ari is hotter than Ayumi.

Me too