VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.28] [Torimiata]

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Magikzzzz

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kristo0086 said:
Dude, read the previous pages. This has been talked about many times .
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My apologies for not reading the past 34 pages but someone could of just told me there's a point system.

My point is just from reading this is that the mc doesnt really decides what happens, he just accepts what happens when ayumi does things with terrace. He always nervously giggles or feels jealous but then decides he gets slightly horny off it and that means he shouldn't be affected by the other emotions. Also since netorase can involve sex i felt like the mc would see them having sex and then just accept, well not even sex just anything.

He clearly got unhappy with the idea of what ayumi did at the pool with terrace and in the morning run, even more so at the shop but then he just accepts it cause horny. It feels like his boundary gets pushed and then he just decides it okay cause it's a turn on even though mentally he seems to struggle which doesnt seem consensual to me.
 
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Magikzzzz said:
My apologies for not reading the past 34 pages but someone could of just told me there's a point system.

My point is just from reading this is that the mc doesnt really decides what happens, he just accepts what happens when ayumi does things with terrace. He always nervously giggles or feels jealous but then decides he gets slightly horny off it and that means he shouldn't be affected by the other emotions. Also since netorase can involve sex i felt like the mc would see them having sex and then just accept, well not even sex just anything.

He clearly got unhappy with the idea of what ayumi did at the pool with terrace and in the morning run, even more so at the shop but then he just accepts it cause horny. It feels like his boundary gets pushed and then he just decides it okay cause it's a turn on even though mentally he seems to struggle which doesnt seem consensual to me.
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Have you played many games existing in this....uhhhh... creative space that do feature emotionally nuanced conversations?
 
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I posted a micro update to Patreon with a very small teaser, it's just a concept and not real artwork - a little something while you wait for the update :coffee:

Magikzzzz said:
My apologies for not reading the past 34 pages but someone could of just told me there's a point system.

My point is just from reading this is that the mc doesnt really decides what happens, he just accepts what happens when ayumi does things with terrace. He always nervously giggles or feels jealous but then decides he gets slightly horny off it and that means he shouldn't be affected by the other emotions. Also since netorase can involve sex i felt like the mc would see them having sex and then just accept, well not even sex just anything.

He clearly got unhappy with the idea of what ayumi did at the pool with terrace and in the morning run, even more so at the shop but then he just accepts it cause horny. It feels like his boundary gets pushed and then he just decides it okay cause it's a turn on even though mentally he seems to struggle which doesnt seem consensual to me.
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It's understandable not being able to read all the pages - I also don't mind the additional thread activity and am happy to answer once in a while.

Anyway, the scenes are written to explore the emotions and dynamics between the characters when those things happen. This includes teasing and pushing boundaries as they deepen their relationship - how far they will go? You will have to follow the story until the end :)

I understand this style may feel too intense for some - even though it's far less than some other works in the genre. Still, I aim to capture the nuance of their feelings - sometimes awkward, exciting, scared, lustful.

A vanilla trope is totally out of question for me. Not for this story.

"... Slowly, gently, the game began ... ♫"
"... Each gesture a dare ... ♫"
"... Onward they stepped, the future unclear ... ♫"
"... but thrilled and filled with fear ... ♫"
 
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Torimiata said:
I posted a micro update to Patreon with a very small teaser, it's just a concept and not real artwork - a little something while you wait for the update :coffee:



It's understandable not being able to read all the pages - I also don't mind the additional thread activity and am happy to answer once in a while.

Anyway, the scenes are written to explore the emotions and dynamics between the characters when those things happen. This includes teasing and pushing boundaries as they deepen their relationship - how far they will go? You will have to follow the story until the end :)

I understand this style may feel too intense for some - even though it's far less than some other works in the genre. Still, I aim to capture the nuance of their feelings - sometimes awkward, exciting, scared, lustful.

A vanilla trope is totally out of question for me. Not for this story.

"... Slowly, gently, the game began ... ♫"
"... Each gesture a dare ... ♫"
"... Onward they stepped, the future unclear ... ♫"
"... but thrilled and filled with fear ... ♫"
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keep doing what u are doing, its a great game on a flavor that can be easy to do something boring, but your game looks beautiful, runs smoth, the art is great and the writing is really good, and can still be improved like you been doing with all those fixed and aditions lately :)
 
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Torimiata said:
I posted a micro update to Patreon with a very small teaser, it's just a concept and not real artwork - a little something while you wait for the update :coffee:



It's understandable not being able to read all the pages - I also don't mind the additional thread activity and am happy to answer once in a while.

Anyway, the scenes are written to explore the emotions and dynamics between the characters when those things happen. This includes teasing and pushing boundaries as they deepen their relationship - how far they will go? You will have to follow the story until the end :)

I understand this style may feel too intense for some - even though it's far less than some other works in the genre. Still, I aim to capture the nuance of their feelings - sometimes awkward, exciting, scared, lustful.

A vanilla trope is totally out of question for me. Not for this story.

"... Slowly, gently, the game began ... ♫"
"... Each gesture a dare ... ♫"
"... Onward they stepped, the future unclear ... ♫"
"... but thrilled and filled with fear ... ♫"
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Game is awesome !! keep it up
 
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My current reading of the personalities and path of the game is Ayumi is very much in love with the MC, so much so that he has become a central part of her sexuality. However, there is exhibitionist/promiscuous aspect to Ayumi that was keeping her from opening up to the MC because she was terrified of the possibility of losing the MC. A big part of the story to me seems to be is the MC complementing Ayumi sexually and walking down a path which enables Ayumi to completely open up to the MC, partially this is achieved by the MC egging her on and pushing her boundaries that has due to her fear of losing the MC. As the MC complements Ayumi, she is also pushing the MC boundaries partially because she wants the MC to open up completely to her. The game ends early if the MC is not receptive enough to Ayumi opening up sexually, so the game is going the direction it is because the MC chose (although perhaps not the player) to go willingly in this direction. As such, it appears to me to be a love story (although perhaps a twisted one) between Ayumi and the MC, thus I currently see no reason to expect there to be any real threat to their relationship at present as any sexual event without the other being involved somehow would be lacking due to a significant part of their sexuality is built around the other.
 
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What do the crossed out choices mean? I can choose them so it's not a blocked off choice. Is it a netorare route or is it for those that want vanilla? Apologies if this has already been answered before but I searched and didn't see anything
 
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idkmanerally

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there used to be a system for accruing "NTS points" but i think the dev removed them because he couldn't figure out how to make them work in the story. i don't think the choices really do anything anymore? maybe slight variations in scenes?
 
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Magikzzzz

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Pr0GamerJohnny said:
Have you played many games existing in this....uhhhh... creative space that do feature emotionally nuanced conversations?
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This would be my first time playing a Netorase game and one of the only times I've actually committed to reading the story instead of hitting the skip button.

It's just when I read the definition of Netorase it gave me the idea of everything been consensual, rather than do first ask later sort of situation.
 
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Magikzzzz

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Torimiata said:
I posted a micro update to Patreon with a very small teaser, it's just a concept and not real artwork - a little something while you wait for the update :coffee:



It's understandable not being able to read all the pages - I also don't mind the additional thread activity and am happy to answer once in a while.

Anyway, the scenes are written to explore the emotions and dynamics between the characters when those things happen. This includes teasing and pushing boundaries as they deepen their relationship - how far they will go? You will have to follow the story until the end :)

I understand this style may feel too intense for some - even though it's far less than some other works in the genre. Still, I aim to capture the nuance of their feelings - sometimes awkward, exciting, scared, lustful.

A vanilla trope is totally out of question for me. Not for this story.

"... Slowly, gently, the game began ... ♫"
"... Each gesture a dare ... ♫"
"... Onward they stepped, the future unclear ... ♫"
"... but thrilled and filled with fear ... ♫"
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You know i was gonna post a massive paragraph saying maybe more consensual scenes with the mc instead of ayumi just doing something and then explaining herself but then i figured that'd probably take the thrill out of it since you know what's happening. I guess you could still hide it from the mc so he doesn't actually see what's happening so he has to imagine her doing what they said and then you can show the reader the scene but not the mc.

Also would love more exhibitionism scenes where the mc eggs ayumi on to do more, first scene was great.

Keep up to good work and i hope for good things.
 
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Magikzzzz said:
This would be my first time playing a Netorase game and one of the only times I've actually committed to reading the story instead of hitting the skip button.

It's just when I read the definition of Netorase it gave me the idea of everything been consensual, rather than do first ask later sort of situation.
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Ok so lets talk more about Netorase.
There are a few ways Netorase can be done.

1st is report Netorase (which this game has more of) where the girl reports what happened between her and other guys while jerking of her lover or just while having sex.
She can then put some lies in there to excite her lover more, even though it didnt happen

2nd one (which I like more) is when you see her getting fucked while you are on the sidelines or occasionally join in.

The whole concept of Netorase is built around trust and love between partners. That no matter how many guys the girls fucks, she will always return.
The problem is that many Netorase games forget this fact and then it starts turning into NTR where the girl just wants to fuck the other guys and uses Netorase as a excuse to cheat.
 
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