TheGooseter
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- Sep 29, 2024
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Just played the last update (usually wait for two updates but delays fucked that up). Thoughts on the marco polo update:
It's a pretty short and leaves you wanting more. Terrace and Ari flirting is nice to see from mc's perspective. It kinda feels like a teaser for how Ayumi and Terrace will be in the future. Ayumi getting into it and teasing you about them getting together is also pretty hot. The twist with marco polo is an interesting and fun idea as well.
The scene of Terrace grabbing Ayumi's ass was fantastic. Like it's actually really fucking good. Especially with how suddenly it happens. The flow of the scene was great too, with both Ayumi and Ari getting more and more turned on. So, I can't help but be frustrated that it's a bad ending. LIKE MAN.... Like I get that its a breach of trust but that scene is too good to just trash as a bad end. Having that breach of trust introduces conflict between the mc and his girl but that's not a bad thing imo.
Especially since the scene is written in a way where Ayumi seems to have enjoyed it more than she should have and feels conflicted. Like its such an interesting plotline to explore. Instead of scrapping it all together, it would've been a really fun angle to explore with Ayumi coming to terms with how much she liked being felt up. These are the type of scenes you should be worked on and built on with each update. Honestly, I think it would be a great idea just retcon the "bad end" and insert this scene to the main route if possible. Like it's too much of a banger to not follow up on.
But other than that gripe. Nice update with fun scenes and interactions.
It's a pretty short and leaves you wanting more. Terrace and Ari flirting is nice to see from mc's perspective. It kinda feels like a teaser for how Ayumi and Terrace will be in the future. Ayumi getting into it and teasing you about them getting together is also pretty hot. The twist with marco polo is an interesting and fun idea as well.
The scene of Terrace grabbing Ayumi's ass was fantastic. Like it's actually really fucking good. Especially with how suddenly it happens. The flow of the scene was great too, with both Ayumi and Ari getting more and more turned on. So, I can't help but be frustrated that it's a bad ending. LIKE MAN.... Like I get that its a breach of trust but that scene is too good to just trash as a bad end. Having that breach of trust introduces conflict between the mc and his girl but that's not a bad thing imo.
Especially since the scene is written in a way where Ayumi seems to have enjoyed it more than she should have and feels conflicted. Like its such an interesting plotline to explore. Instead of scrapping it all together, it would've been a really fun angle to explore with Ayumi coming to terms with how much she liked being felt up. These are the type of scenes you should be worked on and built on with each update. Honestly, I think it would be a great idea just retcon the "bad end" and insert this scene to the main route if possible. Like it's too much of a banger to not follow up on.
But other than that gripe. Nice update with fun scenes and interactions.
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