VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.4v2] [Torimiata]

[Adamska]

this "act" thing is meaningless without context.

Depends on how many acts are planned, but a three-act structure breaks a story up into generalized segments:

Act 1 (Setup)
Act 2 (Confrontation)
Act 3 (Resolution)

For this story, I'm guessing it will be the escalation phase when MC and Ayumi have fully established relationships with the other bulls/unicorns during Act 1 and start turning their more adventurous fantasies into experiences. It has been mentioned that some new kinks will be introduced at that time. Then, assuming a three-act story structure, a major event or conflict driver leads to a climax at the end of Act 2 which is resolved in Act 3.

 

[ntrsmegafan]

Lets go to the 200 pages You perverts!

 

[Artist271]

Lets go to the 200 pages You perverts!

Thanks to your comment we're now at 200!!!

 

[Torimiata]

200 pages!!

Is this where I can finally announce the ReMake 2.0?

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[idkmanerally]

Depends on how many acts are planned, but a three-act structure breaks a story up into generalized segments:

Act 1 (Setup)
Act 2 (Confrontation)
Act 3 (Resolution)

For this story, I'm guessing it will be the escalation phase when MC and Ayumi have fully established relationships with the other bulls/unicorns during Act 1 and start turning their more adventurous fantasies into experiences. It has been mentioned that some new kinks will be introduced at that time. Then, assuming a three-act story structure, a major event or conflict driver leads to a climax at the end of Act 2 which is resolved in Act 3.

thank you, i know that's what acts mean in a generic writing context. torimiata loves to use arbitrary units of measure (acts, "key CGs", "almost done") because it helps obfuscate progress.

did the pre-remake game make it to act 2? how far into act 1 was it?

again, without this information, talking about acts is completely useless (which i suspect is the point, its a way to make it seem like there is a grand plan unfolding instead of just a guy bullshitting)

 

[Artist271]

thank you, i know that's what acts mean in a generic writing context. torimiata loves to use arbitrary units of measure (acts, "key CGs", "almost done") because it helps obfuscate progress.

did the pre-remake game make it to act 2? how far into act 1 was it?

again, without this information, talking about acts is completely useless (which i suspect is the point, its a way to make it seem like there is a grand plan unfolding instead of just a guy bullshitting)

It made it up to the pool scene, where she's modelling for Terrance and the MC. And ends up looking at terrance's full pp.

 

[Adamska]

again, without this information, talking about acts is completely useless

Pre-remake was still establishing characters, so I'd say we were in Act 1. Storyboarding isn't uncommon and usually groups events along an arc that's broken up into Acts; for all intents and purposes it means "sometime in the future."

Is this where I can finally announce the ReMake 2.0?

I've been very critical about some of the remake's changes, but that bus stop flashback is one of my favorite scenes from both builds. Hope more of those flashbacks are planned, I feel like they'll be a good way to refresh the palate and character build between depravity without affecting the current timeline awkwardly.

 

[Crza96]

5.31? I subscribed to the Patreon to support the dev...but the newest version isn't there, and I still have to come here for the newest versions? Is there something I'm missing?

 

[franky8866]

200 pages!!

Is this where I can finally announce the ReMake 2.0?

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sessh! that animation looks dope,by any chance will this be on the actual game?

 

[Neo D Great]

How to play in joiplay without errors? Show me protagonist error everytime.

 

[mok135]

5.31? I subscribed to the Patreon to support the dev...but the newest version isn't there, and I still have to come here for the newest versions? Is there something I'm missing?

0.5.31 was released for platinum (15$) subscribers and was leaked here. So if you subscribed for a lesser tier (5$) it wouldn't be available yet on patreon.

 

[Neil2Raise]

great update, even though story was known

 

[Curius]

ah man, It lost tag Nerorare

 

[KourinTatsunagi]

ah man, It lost tag Nerorare

Considering there isn't even netorare or swinging yet in this game it make sense. Its all been vanilla uwu teasing that we seen like almost a year ago lol

 

[Crza96]

0.5.31 was released for platinum (15$) subscribers and was leaked here. So if you subscribed for a lesser tier (5$) it wouldn't be available yet on patreon.

I am so lost on the nebulous nature of this website lol. Torimata posts updates here but also leaks get posted here so when that happens the dev just has to throw his hands up and say "fuck it, i'll post it myself"?

 

[sksi35]

Great job for the update.I like the game better in its newest form with the additional scenes,while the previous one was also fine and i loved it,this time the backgrounds are a lot better looking and detailed and so are the characters imo.The only thing that seems a little weird to me are the kissing scenes because their eyes are open.The bus stop scene was top notch imo for immersion and Ayumi looked fine <3 and i also liked the writing in their conversation after that.

 

[Alexanderia]

Hi guys! I have a problem with with the game, it always get stucked in launching. Could you give me some tips please?

 

[Torimiata]

sessh! that animation looks dope,by any chance will this be on the actual game?

Appreciate that! I have been playing with animations for a while now, I'm a huge fan of them but I will only do them when the time is right.

I am so lost on the nebulous nature of this website lol. Torimata posts updates here but also leaks get posted here so when that happens the dev just has to throw his hands up and say "fuck it, i'll post it myself"?

I never leak the release myself here, that would be disrespectful to the supporters. But this is a piracy forum. Here you are at the mercy of 'heroes'.

I have voiced my opinion a few times:
I don't mind leaks but I would prefer if people waited at least some time because, as many devs have mentioned, it does affect support numbers for small developers.

I dislike DRM so I will postpone doing that for as long as I can but if immediate leaks happen on every single release I'll have to do something...

With that said, this is still an important community as many find games through here.

Just ignore the few bad apples. I don't even see their messages - for my own mental sanity. If you can't have a respectful discussion I will just ignore you and expect you to move to a different project, there are a million games out there.

I'm 100% with you guys on the party. I quite liked the idea of it, but I felt it really jumped the gun.
Hopefully Tori keeps it in but just paces it out a bit more realistically.

The party had some good ideas, the art portion is pretty nice cause that's one of the more unused scenarios in Hentai even if its popular in irl porn. I wish this part was a bit longer. Tbh idk if its because I enjoyed it more than the maze but the art section felt shorter than the maze lol this could be bias at hand.

The maze part was a missed for me personally. I'm not into futa/lesbian stuff so even the follow up part with Ari was a missed for me. The scenes are good though and if the portion of the community does enjoy it, I don't think Tori will change it up.

My main gripe will always be that Terrance wasn't as prominent in the party. And when he did finally showed up, we got blue balled.

I read all the posts about the party. Really appreciate all the ideas and feedback.

I love the toga party concept. It's an opportunity to really escalate things and go in a slightly different direction, compared to other games.

I don't think I did the best I could in the OG, so I also understand why it's so conflicting.

One other factor I didn't see anyone mention - but I think it's very relevant to the conversation - is that I found it hard to pull off anything truly fun because the narrative actually didn't progress enough by that stage - this really limited what I could do.

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Pre-remake was still establishing characters, so I'd say we were in Act 1. Storyboarding isn't uncommon and usually groups events along an arc that's broken up into Acts; for all intents and purposes it means "sometime in the future."



I've been very critical about some of the remake's changes, but that bus stop flashback is one of my favorite scenes from both builds. Hope more of those flashbacks are planned, I feel like they'll be a good way to refresh the palate and character build between depravity without affecting the current timeline awkwardly.

I have talked a bit about the Acts in the past but I don't want to spoil too much.

It's an important narrative tool. Act 1 is literally the Setup. The Discovery stage.

Act 2 starts after the player locks out permanently Tease Queen or Submissive Pet route but I won't reveal how that will play out just yet.

 

[Artist271]

Appreciate that! I have been playing with animations for a while now, I'm a huge fan of them but I will only do them when the time is right.



I never leak the release myself here, that would be disrespectful to the supporters. But this is a piracy forum. Here you are at the mercy of 'heroes'.

I have voiced my opinion a few times:
I don't mind leaks but I would prefer if people waited at least some time because, as many devs have mentioned, it does affect support numbers for small developers.

I dislike DRM so I will postpone doing that for as long as I can but if immediate leaks happen on every single release I'll have to do something...

With that said, this is still an important community as many find games through here.

Just ignore the few bad apples. I don't even see their messages - for my own mental sanity. If you can't have a respectful discussion I will just ignore you and expect you to move to a different project, there are a million games out there.




I read all the posts about the party. Really appreciate all the ideas and feedback.

I love the toga party concept. It's an opportunity to really escalate things and go in a slightly different direction, compared to other games.

I don't think I did the best I could in the OG, so I also understand why it's so conflicting.

One other factor I didn't see anyone mention - but I think it's very relevant to the conversation - is that I found it hard to pull off anything truly fun because the narrative actually didn't progress enough by that stage - this really limited what I could do.

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I have talked a bit about the Acts in the past but I don't want to spoil too much.

It's an important narrative tool. Act 1 is literally the Setup. The Discovery stage.

Act 2 starts after the player locks out permanently Tease Queen or Submissive Pet route but I won't reveal how that will play out just yet.

Question, how passionate are you over the remake? Some people have their doubts that you're losing steam and getting burnt out to the point they think you'll eventually abandon the game. I personally don't know what to think, but I'm leaning more towards you not abandoning it.

 

[Torimiata]

Question, how passionate are you over the remake? Some people have their doubts that you're losing steam and getting burnt out to the point they think you'll eventually abandon the game. I personally don't know what to think, but I'm leaning more towards you not abandoning it.

Far from losing steam! I'm actually more invested in this remake than ever before.

The remake gives me a chance to implement everything closer to the original vision and with better quality. The original had a lot of heart but also tons of limitations. I don't think people realise how frustrating that was.

I'm solo and not even full time, so there will be weeks where things get more difficult but that's just life.