VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Book 5: Untold Legend of Korra [v1.0] [Muplur]

This game has amazing art the style is very much like the show the the story is interesting and fun to play through the characters change as you play and it cool to see them develop the h scenes are top notch and bring characters from the og avatar era and the legend of korra era there are consent updates and this is a very entertaining game to play give it a try

Well, very good game.
I really am a connoisseur of history in games that call themselves visual novels. Here I plunged into the story of the author, very well written for the "fan pen."

The plot will tell us about the son of the guru, who, like his father, became a guru and his name ... everyone calls him guru so let it remain.
I have not played this game before and have not watched Avatar, but honestly I will say it doesn’t matter, because Bitch Korra is really what you want when you play the slave game trainer.
You need a character you hate and want to break. From the first seconds of communication with Korra, I already realized that this game seemed to be created for such sick perverts like me.

The characters are well-written, well, let's say so probably because they have Original prototypes but even so, I like very good arches to gradually curb Korra. And I like that when they give you a task to bring Korra to submission, the characters have a real motivation because Korra is like a spoiled child, and yet this is a spoiled child with great power.

What I would like more public use and humiliation for Korra. Let her fuck the whole city).

Well, it was a preface to the rating.

The good side:
Good storyline.
Interesting corruption of the character and you can see the inspiration of Akabur, but I like it even more.
The dialogues were surprisingly interesting to read. You usually skip them, but the lines of behavior of the characters are really well thought out and visible.
Good art.

Bad:
Grind!

Finally I can teach Korra a lesson for being such a fucking disgrace to the name "Avatar". Jesus fucking Christ. I hate Korra and that cartoon so fucking much. My blood boils when I remember I live in the same era as that fucking piece of garbage.


Pros:
+ You can turn Korra into a filthy slut with no shame or self-respect
+ You can cuck Korra by corrupting and fucking her girl
+ Good art style, well drawn, consistent
+ Interesting plot that doesn't seem out of place in the Avatar universe
+ Good characters, especially Lin and the Spirit girl
+ Reasonable amount of grind
+ Well written
+ Good amount of content
+ Animated (with drawings, of course)
+ Good sex scenes without too much text

Cons:
- Not enough physical punishment for Korra


You guys might've realized that I kinda don't like Korra very much. However, this doesn't make my review biased. The game is still a good game and the inspiration from Akabur is very well executed.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.2...

Originally Reviewed on 01/07/2018

Looks very much like a parody of The Avatar, but unsure about it right now, as it is a small bit confusing...

The visuals of the characters are 2D hand drawn, and look good so far... The backgrounds, albeit not many, are also hand drawn and look unique and creative... The city map looks easy enough to use, but instead of the UI being menu driven or having buttons for activities, it is text based...

The script for the most part is readable, but has a bit of broken English as well as a small amount of spelling/grammar errors... The plot is a bit hard to figure out at first, because as the player/reader you are presented with a vague letter followed by passing out, followed by thrown into the story... Of course, that may be entirely intentional, perhaps to cause confusion, because the male protagonist doesn't really know 100% what is going on after that, anyhow... The main story, from what I could gather, is that the protagonist is a Guru who is asked/ordered to take control of Korra (the current avatar) and teach her obedience... How will that take place? Don't know, as that mechanic doesn't seem to exist yet... So not sure if it will be a Domination path, a Relationship path, or something else, perhaps even a mix...

At the end of the 0.2 content the author has a lot of dialogue between the protagonist, in a somewhat humorous method... He/she sounds like they plan to bow to the whims of their fan base, who has apparently asked that the game/VN have less dialogue and more sex scenes... And it sounded like the author plans to comply with that request... I'm unsure if that request is just coming from folks who were hoping for such an early version to have sex stuff, already in it, which this early version doesn't, and therefore complained about it? For me, it's kind of sad, that so many of these more recent erotic/adult visual novel/games are allowing their fan base to dictate content, with too much creative control... Wish more authors would stick to their guns, make the product the way they want to, without pandering to the desires of a minority of folks, just because they spoke up...

Overall, even with the broken English, this game/VN shows promise... There was a little bit of confusion in the beginning, but it is very early into development... I really do hope it doesn't become just another purist porn game with very little dialogue/monologue or good story elements... Only time will tell... I may check back on this one several versions down the line, to see how it's developing... Hopefully we get to see more humor, as this is a parody after all...