Review of Version 0.4
Revised score: 5/5
I love this new update. I can see several positive things that made me bump up my prior rating:
1. AI CG has been disclosed in the tags (+1)
2. The artwork is outstanding (+1) Dev is skilled to the point that with even the use of AI is not an outright detriment. Character consistency is very high in the AI scenes and at that level, even as an AI CG skeptic, I must concede that this is evolving into a very powerful tool with more ups than downs as it might vastly accelerate development times and even improve imersion. There are still a few minor glitches here and there but playing this AVN is a very enjoyable and memorable experience.
3. I like the stats system. I am normally not a fan of sandbox but this is good. It looks like Samantha (husband's more attractive colleague with the ladder scene) is not listed as a character to check progress on her).
4. As before, FMC is given agency to make choices and not blindly follow corruption and select whom she wants to get closer to, which is great.
Great job and looking forward to more!
Prior review for reference (0.3x):
This is a good effort. I like the MC in the static renders. She is attractive and also has realistic body proportions. She looks relatable and it was fun playing from her POV.
The story is interesting. Yes, there is corruption form a pushy boss, but the FMC does have agency, she can pick and choose where to go. She can rebuff the boss and flirt with the biker neighbor, it is not just a binary choice.
However, there are also two negatives for which I remove a star each:
1.) Use of AI for the animations
2.) Not disclosing use of AI in your tags and intro text.
I am not going to assume bad intentions for not disclosing the use of AI, but please understand that this is a problem: Without that disclosure people will only realize this after the download of reading comments. The actual implementation of AI is not even that bad, good enough to be willing to come back to this after an update. The character consistency in the AI sequences is not terrible. That said, for someone who can produce original art in form of static renders as well as the developer does, relying on AI to make animations feels like a cheap shortcut that some may find off-putting. To me this feels like watching a movie with and interesting story and a mix of well-made practical effects supplemented by cheap low-quality CGI.
That said, the overall impression is still positive. Please keep going at your project, Novel. I wish you success with your future updates.
Revised score: 5/5
I love this new update. I can see several positive things that made me bump up my prior rating:
1. AI CG has been disclosed in the tags (+1)
2. The artwork is outstanding (+1) Dev is skilled to the point that with even the use of AI is not an outright detriment. Character consistency is very high in the AI scenes and at that level, even as an AI CG skeptic, I must concede that this is evolving into a very powerful tool with more ups than downs as it might vastly accelerate development times and even improve imersion. There are still a few minor glitches here and there but playing this AVN is a very enjoyable and memorable experience.
3. I like the stats system. I am normally not a fan of sandbox but this is good. It looks like Samantha (husband's more attractive colleague with the ladder scene) is not listed as a character to check progress on her).
4. As before, FMC is given agency to make choices and not blindly follow corruption and select whom she wants to get closer to, which is great.
Great job and looking forward to more!
Prior review for reference (0.3x):
The story is interesting. Yes, there is corruption form a pushy boss, but the FMC does have agency, she can pick and choose where to go. She can rebuff the boss and flirt with the biker neighbor, it is not just a binary choice.
However, there are also two negatives for which I remove a star each:
1.) Use of AI for the animations
2.) Not disclosing use of AI in your tags and intro text.
I am not going to assume bad intentions for not disclosing the use of AI, but please understand that this is a problem: Without that disclosure people will only realize this after the download of reading comments. The actual implementation of AI is not even that bad, good enough to be willing to come back to this after an update. The character consistency in the AI sequences is not terrible. That said, for someone who can produce original art in form of static renders as well as the developer does, relying on AI to make animations feels like a cheap shortcut that some may find off-putting. To me this feels like watching a movie with and interesting story and a mix of well-made practical effects supplemented by cheap low-quality CGI.
That said, the overall impression is still positive. Please keep going at your project, Novel. I wish you success with your future updates.