VN - Ren'Py - Bright Lord [v1.01 Rework] [KissKiss Studio]

The horror element is interesting to see in this type of game. The dark scene was not that bad, as long as the sex scenes don't happen in the dark also.

All the women designs are great. The mom is the best one imo. I love the short temper that she tries to hide from everyone else. Being hot + scary makes her the best.

Overall, great potential in this one. Hopefully the developer is in it for the long run.

**Review for 0.1**
This is a great start for a spooky incest story!

GOOD
- Models: The models used are plump as hell and look juicy!
- Setting: There isn't enough horror VN/games out there!

BAD
- English: there was some misspelling and bad English (some in like the first line of the story). Of course this can be fixed.
- Short: The length isn't bad for a 0.1 but its not very long either (didn't take off star for this).

All in all I hope we get some more soon! Also I noticed the monster has a dick...please tell me theres a chance the monster fucks these girls! Cant wait for more!

Version: 0.1

Short VN but it got me hard and the story is simple but enjoyable.

PROS

• nice models - each looks unique and hot
• quite ecchi - a lot of erotic scenes for such a short act. I would even rather they played out more, like when the younger sis was rubbing her butt on MC

CONS

• text - the fonts used are a bit tacky
• pacing - a little too fast due to not much storytelling and scenes finishing too soon

The sfx text is also cheesy but if you are going for that comic look (to each their own) - I'd just add a black outline to make the text pop more.
Instead of saying "(thoughts)" just use a different font, from the default, to represent inner thoughts.
Looking forward to the abilities or whatever the Bright Lord gives MC so that he can get into all sorts of perverted scenarios