VN - Ren'Py - Bright Lord [v1.15.0 Patreon] [KissKiss Studio]

Version: 0.1

Short VN but it got me hard and the story is simple but enjoyable.

PROS

• nice models - each looks unique and hot
• quite ecchi - a lot of erotic scenes for such a short act. I would even rather they played out more, like when the younger sis was rubbing her butt on MC

CONS

• text - the fonts used are a bit tacky
• pacing - a little too fast due to not much storytelling and scenes finishing too soon

The sfx text is also cheesy but if you are going for that comic look (to each their own) - I'd just add a black outline to make the text pop more.
Instead of saying "(thoughts)" just use a different font, from the default, to represent inner thoughts.
Looking forward to the abilities or whatever the Bright Lord gives MC so that he can get into all sorts of perverted scenarios