UPDATE - Deducting 1 more point.
There maybe a translation issue when it comes to the English version of this game... The worse thing this VN does is BORE you. I continued playing this after my initial review thinking maybe the game becomes more enjoyable in later updates. Unfortunately this is not the case this game goes from annoying grind to BORING. It shouldn't be boring all the ingredients are here but no plot point is given a chance to breathe, its like a boring soap opera.
For Example - 1) The Mafia shows up and kills people in front of you
. That should be a major event but its brushed off and glossed over with no consequences at all.
2) You take deepthroat classes so you can deepthroat a partner finally and when the classes end and you meet the partner. The same scene plays the same as before with 1 render of the deepthroat and we move on after all the training and work.
3) You become a Prostitute a huge monumental decision and it's give no time to breath at all it just "Whelp I guess I'm a prostitute now".
This game is dull and the story is going nowhere and it has all the Ingredients so it's either bad writing or a bad translation. The MC is Vapid and dull and boring.
ORIGINAL 3 star Review
Do you Like Grind! Do you like micromanagement of seemingly every little detail? Do you like Random events that you have to click click click to hopefully one day trigger then this is a VN for you!
Your MC will always be hungry it seems and you will have to take a lot of time out to make money just to buy her food! Fun!
Your MC will STINK, so realistically you will have to take time out pretty regularly to shower or bathe her. Fun!
Do you like a quest log that only gives you the vaguest idea most of the time to clue you in on what to do next. Fun!
Do you have WRISTS and FINGERS of Iron that would make a martial artist weep with envy? Excellent because you will need them to get through all the random clicks you need to eventually activate some random quest. Fun!
Do you have no job and no money and only have time for one VN then this is for you as it is the ultimate time sink! Your time is wasted so thoroughly here you may never need another VN ever. Fun!
The Good
The renders are attractive although static I never made it to any animated renders but I guess my random luck was just bad!
The Premise of the story sounds like fun and its interesting initially.
The Bad
Wow do you ever need money in this game and man if you think inflation in any country is bad, you haven't seen anything until you check out this games inflation! You want a Hotdog from a street vendor? $40!! You want a Burrito? $65!! So forget a burrito and get a TACO you say!!! $70!!! Damn I would love to try a Taco that's worth $70!! Holy crap I will never complain about inflation again!
The art is tremendous and the story is ok initially so they have a great start to a VN, but they have a sadistic BDSM dungeon master designing the UI and playstyle that is designed to torture anyone who dares play this title.
I'm being super generous and giving this title 3 stars as it has potential, but I fully understand the people who give it one and two stars. Anyone who gives this VN 4-5 stars in it's current state needs a butt plug shoved up there backdoor because they are into hardcore keyboard BDSM in my opinion.