This game was an unexpected Gem, giving me a beautiful and at times touching story with real dark and personal moments, that tended to hit right in the core and the feelings. the character you date, Evan, has a personal mental health struggle with many different things, to which i wont spoil, and the story is so elegantly written to tell its narrative, and does so successfully. i originally went from skipping all text, to actually reading it as new scenes came by (skipping repeated text)..
Pros
1-The Narrative is absolutely beautiful and engaging from start to finish. Anyone saying they're stuck in the loop should really start reading the text, as it tells you when and where to explore and talk to eve.
2- Anal Only Options and Dialogue to reflect her anal experience changing over time. As a a top Bi dude, i am an ass dude, and i love anything to do with booties and anal. The only critique i would give would be to allow us to still do vaginal, but with the anal only option, it be her main curiosity or something. or just give us the option to still explore vaginal through gameplay too (By choice, not by having the characters make us do it)
3- Beautiful Art style of black and white, but specific things being shown through colour. it expresses exactly what it is you want expressed and focused on, and i found it beautiful.
4- The animations. I did not expect them due to the lack of a tag in the page itself. and sure, they're not the most refined and animated of animations, but they're animated enough as i was expecting still images, and no one wants to play a game with still image porn content lol. so GG. caught me off guard
5- The freedom to effect your relationship and outcome of it. you've truly got to read the dialogue and conversations to pick up on what she likes and doesn't like, giving her time and attention in order to maintain the relationship. i love that. i love the attention to detail, that if you fuck her to hard, she will tell you for it. however, some more varied dialogue being in circulation rather than getting the same handful of text every single time you speak during sex, or after. kind of kills the buzz after a few hours.
CONS
1- The lack of sexual interaction Variety, now its great you can do vaginal and anal, with a choice to do anal only if you want. but there's not even a Licking pussy or ass option, or a blowjob or tit wank, or pussy rub, ass prod etc scenes. no foreplay at all, other than fingering and rubbing. i feel there needs to be a ton of additions and imagination when it comes to its sequel as i felt this game really lacked variety of options to choose from when it came to the intimate scenes. same with sexual dialogue, keep it consistent with the choices you make, but add more variations of the same point, so you're not seeing the same sentences over and over and over again.
2- Dialogue itself. So i noticed one thing, the Dialogue itself is extremely Formal, too much so. that i'd get and understand speaking so strict and formal like Whilst getting to know each other, but as the relationship develops and the characters become closer and closer, the dialogue gets sweeter sure, but the way the MC describes stuff is extremely robotic and formal to where it just seems bazaar and unnatural at stages of the relationship that shouldn't be so formal at those points.
3- The lack of choices. Now bare with me here. I feel the game should throw you curve balls and choices in game that can either have immediate effects on the game and relationship, or later down the line. e.g. cheating on your partner, i feel the game should allow you to fuck other people, but by doing so can damage or ruin a relationship, dependant on how close you are. so if you've not been together long, they'll break up with you when and IFFFF they find out. but if you've been together a while and are closer, then IFFF they find out, they may give you a second chance, but it having some lasting effects on trust that changes dialogue up and stuff. and allow us to pursue other characters too. give us the choice. but don't give us the choice and have her all of a sudden appear outside the window, or automatically game over. allow it to be realistic, in the sense that she MIGHT find or or MIGHT not. gives us a chance to have some varied sex partners in gender and style, and lord even just replace the look of the existing character. e.g. (Hey I'm going to break up with them, do you want to date instead) and then have the looks of that character warp to the partner, and have a few dialogue differences to indicate the change of relationship, but its essentially the same. idk, tweak it, but you get my point. give the player a chance to choose their relationship or lust.
4- The lack of purpose outside of getting to know the partner. school is irrelevant and there is so far no lasting effects from doing the homework, so I don't understand why there's a homework option to begin with, other than to pass time. it feels like most locations, other than to interact with your girl, is pointless. occasionally grab food to stock up, but that's only through dialogue changes telling you that you're hating your meal, rather than it having any actual gameplay differences. i just feel there could be more in the world and more to do outside of your partner and with them. as it feels very much that you're living in the world, but the world isn't living.
WISHLIST FOR THIS OR THE SEQUEL
1- Pube options, some of us have a hairy fetish, allow us to customise whether our partner has a hairy pussy/dick and balls. or hairy pits, legs. or hairy ass and ass hole, and then allow us to refine HOW hairy it is, and then rework the scenes to incorporate that difference to keep it consistent.
2- More partners to explore, whether through a new save, or through gameplay of either choosing to cheat and having to keep it a secret as best you can (with options of your partner never finding out dependant on your choices) and allow those random people we can fuck to have variety from genitals to gender, body type, personality etc.
3- more interesting things to do in the world. that's that.
5- more refined animations. would love full animations being fully developed, so dick swaying etc. and sound to go with the animations with variety of sound so it doesn't get muted xD
6- a lot more kinks, fetishes, and interactions.
7- partner customisation, allow us to choose from pre-sets to choose what they look like, from hair style, eye style, colours, skin colour, teeth, lips, body style, weight, personality types, etc etc. allows it to be fine tuned to our exact preferences, so if a femboy partner, allowing us to also customise their dick size to be huge or small, etc etc etc
Summary
This game was a pleasant surprise that i didn't expect for me to be so invested into. from a beautifully crafted narrative that feels realistic and engaging, that often tugs at them heart strings, to anal only options and playthroughs if you desire, and actual dialogue to reflect that change over time. the relationship changes as the time goes on, and so does the outcome dependant on your choices, and i find it to almost be the Tell-tale NSFW type game. its beautifully made with passion and love, and worth the time, if you also invest the time into reading the texts. the way the relationship starts and evolves is great, and beautiful. and the game itself is fun, but at times can get abit tedious with the lack of dialogue variety in scenes in and out of Sex. but other than that, this game is amazing, and the developer is clearly passionate about their game. now sure there are their quirks and flaws, that i hope you take into account when making the next title. but this game itself is well worth the time invested and well worth playing. so go support the developer, and play the game. but don't rush through it, skipping text and then leaving a poor review, as there is a few reviews in which clearly shows who has and hasn't been skipping the dialogue to get to the sex scenes.
Now i will say this, if you're looking for quick sex and a quick fap, don't come here, as you will then taint this games beautiful building review score. however, that's not me saying there isnt plenty of sex, as there's tons of it. but you've got to put in some work first. there's a story and development to this game and the relationships involved. so take your time to understand it before you rush to fucking.
theres of course its flaws and stuff, hence not the full 5. as i rarely give 5's. but dependant on later builds, may differ the score for worse or better. and i hope with this review in mind the sequel will be more refined.
Pros
1-The Narrative is absolutely beautiful and engaging from start to finish. Anyone saying they're stuck in the loop should really start reading the text, as it tells you when and where to explore and talk to eve.
2- Anal Only Options and Dialogue to reflect her anal experience changing over time. As a a top Bi dude, i am an ass dude, and i love anything to do with booties and anal. The only critique i would give would be to allow us to still do vaginal, but with the anal only option, it be her main curiosity or something. or just give us the option to still explore vaginal through gameplay too (By choice, not by having the characters make us do it)
3- Beautiful Art style of black and white, but specific things being shown through colour. it expresses exactly what it is you want expressed and focused on, and i found it beautiful.
4- The animations. I did not expect them due to the lack of a tag in the page itself. and sure, they're not the most refined and animated of animations, but they're animated enough as i was expecting still images, and no one wants to play a game with still image porn content lol. so GG. caught me off guard
5- The freedom to effect your relationship and outcome of it. you've truly got to read the dialogue and conversations to pick up on what she likes and doesn't like, giving her time and attention in order to maintain the relationship. i love that. i love the attention to detail, that if you fuck her to hard, she will tell you for it. however, some more varied dialogue being in circulation rather than getting the same handful of text every single time you speak during sex, or after. kind of kills the buzz after a few hours.
CONS
1- The lack of sexual interaction Variety, now its great you can do vaginal and anal, with a choice to do anal only if you want. but there's not even a Licking pussy or ass option, or a blowjob or tit wank, or pussy rub, ass prod etc scenes. no foreplay at all, other than fingering and rubbing. i feel there needs to be a ton of additions and imagination when it comes to its sequel as i felt this game really lacked variety of options to choose from when it came to the intimate scenes. same with sexual dialogue, keep it consistent with the choices you make, but add more variations of the same point, so you're not seeing the same sentences over and over and over again.
2- Dialogue itself. So i noticed one thing, the Dialogue itself is extremely Formal, too much so. that i'd get and understand speaking so strict and formal like Whilst getting to know each other, but as the relationship develops and the characters become closer and closer, the dialogue gets sweeter sure, but the way the MC describes stuff is extremely robotic and formal to where it just seems bazaar and unnatural at stages of the relationship that shouldn't be so formal at those points.
3- The lack of choices. Now bare with me here. I feel the game should throw you curve balls and choices in game that can either have immediate effects on the game and relationship, or later down the line. e.g. cheating on your partner, i feel the game should allow you to fuck other people, but by doing so can damage or ruin a relationship, dependant on how close you are. so if you've not been together long, they'll break up with you when and IFFFF they find out. but if you've been together a while and are closer, then IFFF they find out, they may give you a second chance, but it having some lasting effects on trust that changes dialogue up and stuff. and allow us to pursue other characters too. give us the choice. but don't give us the choice and have her all of a sudden appear outside the window, or automatically game over. allow it to be realistic, in the sense that she MIGHT find or or MIGHT not. gives us a chance to have some varied sex partners in gender and style, and lord even just replace the look of the existing character. e.g. (Hey I'm going to break up with them, do you want to date instead) and then have the looks of that character warp to the partner, and have a few dialogue differences to indicate the change of relationship, but its essentially the same. idk, tweak it, but you get my point. give the player a chance to choose their relationship or lust.
4- The lack of purpose outside of getting to know the partner. school is irrelevant and there is so far no lasting effects from doing the homework, so I don't understand why there's a homework option to begin with, other than to pass time. it feels like most locations, other than to interact with your girl, is pointless. occasionally grab food to stock up, but that's only through dialogue changes telling you that you're hating your meal, rather than it having any actual gameplay differences. i just feel there could be more in the world and more to do outside of your partner and with them. as it feels very much that you're living in the world, but the world isn't living.
WISHLIST FOR THIS OR THE SEQUEL
1- Pube options, some of us have a hairy fetish, allow us to customise whether our partner has a hairy pussy/dick and balls. or hairy pits, legs. or hairy ass and ass hole, and then allow us to refine HOW hairy it is, and then rework the scenes to incorporate that difference to keep it consistent.
2- More partners to explore, whether through a new save, or through gameplay of either choosing to cheat and having to keep it a secret as best you can (with options of your partner never finding out dependant on your choices) and allow those random people we can fuck to have variety from genitals to gender, body type, personality etc.
3- more interesting things to do in the world. that's that.
5- more refined animations. would love full animations being fully developed, so dick swaying etc. and sound to go with the animations with variety of sound so it doesn't get muted xD
6- a lot more kinks, fetishes, and interactions.
7- partner customisation, allow us to choose from pre-sets to choose what they look like, from hair style, eye style, colours, skin colour, teeth, lips, body style, weight, personality types, etc etc. allows it to be fine tuned to our exact preferences, so if a femboy partner, allowing us to also customise their dick size to be huge or small, etc etc etc
Summary
This game was a pleasant surprise that i didn't expect for me to be so invested into. from a beautifully crafted narrative that feels realistic and engaging, that often tugs at them heart strings, to anal only options and playthroughs if you desire, and actual dialogue to reflect that change over time. the relationship changes as the time goes on, and so does the outcome dependant on your choices, and i find it to almost be the Tell-tale NSFW type game. its beautifully made with passion and love, and worth the time, if you also invest the time into reading the texts. the way the relationship starts and evolves is great, and beautiful. and the game itself is fun, but at times can get abit tedious with the lack of dialogue variety in scenes in and out of Sex. but other than that, this game is amazing, and the developer is clearly passionate about their game. now sure there are their quirks and flaws, that i hope you take into account when making the next title. but this game itself is well worth the time invested and well worth playing. so go support the developer, and play the game. but don't rush through it, skipping text and then leaving a poor review, as there is a few reviews in which clearly shows who has and hasn't been skipping the dialogue to get to the sex scenes.
Now i will say this, if you're looking for quick sex and a quick fap, don't come here, as you will then taint this games beautiful building review score. however, that's not me saying there isnt plenty of sex, as there's tons of it. but you've got to put in some work first. there's a story and development to this game and the relationships involved. so take your time to understand it before you rush to fucking.
theres of course its flaws and stuff, hence not the full 5. as i rarely give 5's. but dependant on later builds, may differ the score for worse or better. and i hope with this review in mind the sequel will be more refined.
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