VN - Ren'Py - Broken Promises [v0.403] [Light Cavalry]

Well what can i say. for 0.1 it's pretty good. Really like the renders.
Background music is creating quit good atmosphere for playing.
Story is quit decent and good, but there is so much to uncover and it's look like some complex-maze story and i have a feeling this will be in slow burn game list

For short i like it.

Good luck!

Decent start but needs a whole lot more planned tags, hopefully this will lead to something great where the mc gets involved in all sorts of wonderful crazy sexual antics. Beautiful renders and decent story so far, the only critique is no real taboo sexual fetish.

What did i just play...

Although the renders arnt great they're not terrible although the artist either gives 0 fucks about his art or its just pure negligence but 98% of the renders have severe clipping not just an innocent little bit of skin in the office scene her whole boob was clipping through her shirt and half the car tyres are in the floor its like seriously how are you happy putting this in your game especially your 0.1 which is meant to convince people your product is good.

Also they have just straight up robbed the MC from chasing sunsets must of seen their amazing game and success and decided yeah lts rob that i feel so sorry for the Stone fox devs having there MC stolen and put in this game oof

The writing is just horrendous like it was written in an elementary creative writing class by a 5 year old who just watched twilight, the intro with Leon and Motorcycle dude and some weird rando girl who clips into her own body. Has got to be one of the most cringe intros to a game ever where the devs self insert in some cringe 4th wall break, trying to be funny roleplaying off of each other it was dumb af and lasted forever.

The scene in the office where the MC does textbook Workplace Sexual harassment on his boss is creepy and odd, and that every girl just drips at the sight of him is odd to and the fact the MC has obviously got brain damage over his years as a police officer that when he meets the chick by the locker saying it just reveals the right amount of skin when she is dressed like a nun fully clothed from neck to knee its like was the MC brought up in a convent.

The art isnt bad just full of negligent mistakes that should of been fixed but the writing and cringe is unforgivable

Though the renders are good, the writing is probably the worst I have ever seen.
Almost 70% of the game is internal thoughts (from every character, so there are no secrets) and most of those thoughts are gross descriptions of each other, not erotic, just gross. It's also very self-aware because it goes "don't be a pervert/creep" after saying something that was clearly gross.

I know it's 0.1 but there are almost no options only two and worth FUCK ALL, I refuse the teacher's advances, and then she still kisses and grabs my balls later on, so what's the point?

It's just boring as fuck, and it's not even erotic, just sick, how every character is instantly aroused by MC, how they describe to each other, it's like it was written by a kid with no experience or a very old, bitter incel type guy.

"it’s up to you to use your resources, make the hard choices, all while trying your best to keep your promises."

2 Choices in this whole .1 which has more text than an encyclopedia collection.

Plus 30 mins of cringe intro and outro where the 2 devs are roleplaying, as Leon Kennedy... for some reason, and some motorcycle dude whos trying to be cool bit the person behind it obviously has no self esteem, cringe and dragged out.

Wish the devs well but they need to change this format remove the cringe like this is a novel for children and actually either have no choices or a decent amount instead of this small amount of irrelvent choices that currently exist