Ren'Py - Broken Sky [v0.5.2 Public] [Wistala]

Very pleased with the preview so far! I took the submissive route and am thoroughly excited with what is to come. I find that most games tend not to really lean into femdom elements too heavily, and this game really fills a niche for me. For one having anthro/human content as well as fun fetishes like cum eating. Can't wait to see more!

The writing, art, characters, and sex scenes are top notch. You can either be dom or sub and the writing deliciously leans to your preference. I'm making choices for the NTR stuff and no NTR sex scenes yet but good setup for it so far. The sub stuff is amazing if your into that so it'll keep you satisfied until the full NTR scenes are added.

What an excellent game, I love everything about it, from the art, the story and how decisions influence it. I look forward to future updates, good luck and success with this project. I had a lot of fun (in addition to other things) with this game.

This game has great potential. Hopefully the focus is more in story than the sex scenes. This game reminds me of Superhuman. Hentai game doesn't always have to be about sex and NTR.
Not a furry either but the character is really lovable and the story is engaging. Hopefully this becomes a game where people would read the story and not speedrun to get a sex scene.

This is very early in development. I find Lilly surprisingly charming. The setting is interesting, I don't even mind the AI assisted backgrounds.

I have my concerns though. There's a lot of talk IN GAME of how the game is going to work and that does not instill much confidence. I don't think hyping large complex mechanics in game is a good idea when even the UI is largely stock renpy.

The content and all the talk about how it will be so flexible and there will always be choices when it comes to more niche content again is cause for concern as well. The more choices you give us the more parts you have to add to your game. It's a massive undertaking to just give yes/no branches for all this stuff but for this game it's yes/no/maybe?

The character artwork is great, we're only presented with 2 characters as of this first release. The plot and the lore of the world works but the events presented are pretty old and cliché. Can we just get some early days co-operation without the whole "We don't like your kind around here" attitude? You're not in game for half an hour and someone is dumping beer on the lead heroine so MC can do MC things and save the girl.

I like Lilly because she's presented as a sly strong character, but she's immediately undersold because her human friends took her to the humans bar to drink human beer...where she was immediately bullied like it's 5th grade.

As a fan of games like Mass Effect and Skyrim I just don't get this weird furry culture agenda. They're extra dimensional aliens...Captain Kirk was all over aliens decades ago why are we digressing? Why are people acting like this when there's a giant medical corp owned by an anthro with a private military made up of ppl from both sides based in THIS CITY?!

I need a more compelling event then this. For example, One of these guys hits on her or hell hits on you?! Mebbe one of them is a chick or something in between? You can still demonstrate choice in this situation. Have an arm wrestling match, call for a round of shots and see who can hold their liquor better. Stake your claim by throwing an arm around her and giving him/her/them the stink eye.

I'll leave it at a tentative 3 stars for now and wait a few updates to see if some of this talk turns into action in regards to development but it sounds like it could be fun if that happens.

Although the game is in a very early stage of development, it has great potential. I really liked the variety of options that the game offers, making it a more personal experience based on your preferences.

The art also seems very good to me, Lily's design and her personality make her a very interesting character with whom I would like to spend more time.

Just played the first version of this last night and while I rarely do any reviews I want to makie one for this. Im not gonna lie and say, im not a furry but...
Nope, I like humans BUT give me a well illustrated and designed furry character (Ive always thought the eyes for any drawn character, even if they are human, is what attracts us to that character, when they are beautifully designed), and I will be there day zero. So yes, i can say im a furry (but only drawn or 3d characters, the real costume stuff is a big no for me, but if others enjoy that, good for them, everyone has its own fetishes).

This is just excellent, this is exactly what I always wanted from an anthro furry game.
-Character customization (you can be human, anthro, male or female, sub, dom or both ways.... and add your name, and you dont know how important this last part is, Im seeing a lot of games lately forcing you to be and already stablished name, even with sotry decissions, and sinceresly, this type of decission making VN or light dialogue rpgs with choices, if you cant be yourself, it basically fucks up the whole premise. You are not CDPR using a charcter from an already made book FFS, just make your character be able to be named)

-A world with anthros and humans (as I want to be myself in aworld were i can get with sexy anthros).

-Good sex scene options, with actual variation dpending of what you chose or like or not like certain fetishes (Im actually sad there was no illustrated paw rub below the table at the end of the game, like the writting implied, hopefully thats added in the future, becuase just with text that was sexy as hell).

-And probably the best part of all, this are not just anthros visually and everything in the writting is you meeting a normal human. No, Wistala wrote the anthro character, Lily to use her atributes for normal live, and best of all, sex. Its done sooooo well, and with so much taste (it never feels disgusting, it only uses the more interesting aspect of the animal to make a pleasurable experience in the writing, that little fascination with how this characters look.
Just for this the game deserves a 5/5, even when its only an intro and a sex scene.

Theres only a big negative for me, as an artistany AI non retouch art is a big NO for me, and the bakgrounds here are made this way, actually distracting becuase the text already describes were you are, and some of this images dont even look remotely as interesting as the text implies, and also, it doesnt even look the same city most of the time).
If AI was used only for now, and changed in the future to retouch BGs (AI can be used, but i prefer if an actual artist then uses it as reference or with heavily retouching), just becuase, well, Wistala is starting and theres no budget for it, I would be fine with the decission right now, so hopefully this game has more uspport and actually does that.

But again,this initial premise is sooooo good, that even my haterd for AI doesnt change how much I loved it.
I really REALLY hope this game continues in the future, as right now it turned into my favourite game in the site, and Im seriously considering actually supporting it for 5 euros if things look bright in 2 or 3 updates. Becuase I really want for this to see an end if its as excellent as the intro.

Also, Wistala, you made Lilly so amazing, Im debating of just going out with her on a first playthrough and not do any harem decissions (I did choose to start dating her intead of FWB at the end). Thats how good you wrote her,. I dont know what im gonna do if all your other female anthros are written as good as her. BTW chosed her to be a little bit of a femdom, even if i made the middle decissionat the beginning, becuase femdom lilly is sexy as hell.

ion normally fw w furry shit, but this really aint that bad and got hella potential as an adult game the more funding this guy gets, really hope this dont get abandoned before v1, get it on steam, get more funding, i would suggest to make this more open world with more characters, get a good path and bad path like corrupt life or fighting it, good path being romance and bad path being cucked, all and all love it and hope this game doesnt get any gay shit