The protagonist's seriousness and rugged appearance as if he came right out of the Darkest Dungeon in contrast to the furry cartoony horny bunnies around him is ridiculously hilarious and weirdly cool. While yes, the grammar is crap, but the dialogue is still understandable.
Well done! I wish to see more improvement in the future.
But here's a message for the mods: JRPG doesn't equal to Japanese game, big dummies. Then again, it's what attracted me, a Japanese-made furry game would sound interesting; until you know that they are Italian, but don't care because the game is good anyway.